Venomous
05-22-2004, 01:56 AM
12 bars
no d/r
no hate or crew votes
due by end of the night
no d/r
no hate or crew votes
due by end of the night
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View Full Version : Venomous vs. Fusion Venomous 05-22-2004, 01:56 AM 12 bars no d/r no hate or crew votes due by end of the night Venomous 05-22-2004, 02:00 AM ^i meant 12 bars minimum Venomous 05-22-2004, 02:22 AM my drop first Better Not Be Near Me When I Spit Cause I'm Like Twice Ya Size// My Saliva Has Guys Die Like They In A "Drowning Pool"(<guy died in that rock band)// You Gotta Painted Face And A Big Nose But I'm The One Thats Clowning You// You Is Wack And Your Skills Stink Like That Cartoon Peppy Lepu// You Cant See Me On The Mic So You Must Be Blind// Pussy, I'll "Shut You Up" Like Some Dusty Blinds// You Probably Gotta Hard Time Digestin My Crap// I'll Rip You A New Asshole So You Aint Gotta Shit It Out The Back// You Aint A Gangsta, You Aint Carry No Glocks// You Only Did Time When You Masturbated Through The Tiny Loop Of Ya Watch// You Was "Shocked" Cause My Lyrics Roar Like Thunder Dude// And I'm Always On Top, Even When I'm Buried 6 Feet Under You// Venomous 05-22-2004, 02:41 AM Since Fusion aint even online, I'll Give him Till Tomorrow Nite Venomous 05-22-2004, 11:54 PM Yo fusion, u gonna drop some or do i gotta call u a forfeit? BkBrawla 05-23-2004, 01:24 AM Links....... Ezekiel 05-23-2004, 07:31 AM fuck sorry man..ive been at swimming nationals for a few days..i'll do sum shit now man.. Ezekiel 05-23-2004, 07:50 AM I apolagize fully 4 the people who read this battle lol..but there is no way im droppin nething good...blah..... .... Weigh-in-your-verse, you're too light no wonder your rhymes 'blind'/ Your style's Venomous...more like priceless cause everywhere it goes it's always declined// Venz "skillz" are like the arms of napoleon, large numbers but unable-to-advance?/ :rolleyes: ....but like an 'optimist' you give your victory shot a '50/50 chance'// If you rapped about chinese food menu's in battles you couldn't have-won-ton/ Look at your verse and your gonna hate what you made like having a-gay-son// Let me explain tha reason why your style is simmilar to "nun"/ You can "only pray" cuz tha day u'll beat me will "never-cum"// Fuck it, your "shit's too soft", like you've been drinking way too much-"Serutan"/ And your "sexuality's in question" so much, we should just call you-the-"Fruit-Man"// Talkin shit to me is like walkin the plank...ur taken steps-to-ur-death/ I'll rip out ya lungs, to show u ya chance of winnins less-than-ur-breaths// ..... Ezekiel 05-23-2004, 07:57 AM http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/sho...1360#post291360 post a link man...start voting...get this ish outa the way ThaGod2004 05-23-2004, 01:03 PM whatt up doe..nice battle..liked both verses but.. flow-both meta's-Venom wordplay-Fusion vocab-Fusion enjoyment-Fusion Venom-You Only Did Time When You Masturbated Through The Tiny Loop Of Ya Watch// ^^^nicest line Fusion-Talkin shit to me is like walkin the plank...ur taken steps-to-ur-death/ I'll rip out ya lungs, to show u ya chance of winnins less-than-ur-breaths// ^^^nice finishers Fusions wordplay and last lines and shit is basically why I voted for him oh by the way Fusion..u spose to be battlin me..drop yo shit soon homie then ill follow up vote-Fusion Judas 05-23-2004, 06:28 PM Flow-Fusion Metas-Venom wordplay-Fusion Vocabulary-Fusion Enjoyment-Fusion Vote: Fusion Ezekiel 05-23-2004, 07:08 PM 2-0.uppin 4 other link as well K. Chaos 05-23-2004, 08:36 PM Venomous Better Not Be Near Me When I Spit Cause I'm Like Twice Ya Size// My Saliva Has Guys Die Like They In A "Drowning Pool"(<guy died in that rock band)// An Aite punch 3.5/5 You Gotta Painted Face And A Big Nose But I'm The One Thats Clowning You// You Is Wack And Your Skills Stink Like That Cartoon Peppy Lepu// First line wuz nice but second wuz whack and sorta played... 2.3/5 You Cant See Me On The Mic So You Must Be Blind// Pussy, I'll "Shut You Up" Like Some Dusty Blinds// First line wuz kinda whack,ummm...okay i guess 2.2/5 You Probably Gotta Hard Time Digestin My Crap// I'll Rip You A New Asshole So You Aint Gotta Shit It Out The Back// Not Feelin it 1/5 You Aint A Gangsta, You Aint Carry No Glocks// You Only Did Time When You Masturbated Through The Tiny Loop Of Ya Watch// First Line=Weak...Second Line=Aite 2/5 You Was "Shocked" Cause My Lyrics Roar Like Thunder Dude// And I'm Always On Top, Even When I'm Buried 6 Feet Under You// Nice Finisher 3.5/5 ...Overall nice verse...Personally I think ya should have had more personalz...Shoulda got on his name or sumtin but ya had sum decent punches that hit well... Overall: 15/30 ~Fusion~ Weigh-in-your-verse, you're too light no wonder your rhymes 'blind'/ Your style's Venomous...more like priceless cause everywhere it goes it's always declined// First line wuz decent, so wuz tha second but it streched a lil bit 3/5 Venz "skillz" are like the arms of napoleon, large numbers but unable-to-advance?/ ....but like an 'optimist' you give your victory shot a '50/50 chance'// Nice sumwut metas and multi 3/5 If you rapped about chinese food menu's in battles you couldn't have-won-ton/ Look at your verse and your gonna hate what you made like having a-gay-son// Naw not really feelin it but nice try wit da wordplay 2/5 Let me explain tha reason why your style is simmilar to "nun"/ You can "only pray" cuz tha day u'll beat me will "never-cum"// Decent bar...But nuttin special 2/5 Fuck it, your "shit's too soft", like you've been drinking way too much-"Serutan"/ And your "sexuality's in question" so much, we should just call you-the-"Fruit-Man"// First line wuz nice but not really feelin line 2 2/5 Talkin shit to me is like walkin the plank...ur taken steps-to-ur-death/ I'll rip out ya lungs, to show u ya chance of winnins less-than-ur-breaths// [B]Good Finisher[B] 3.5/5 ...Welp ya had more personalz than Venomous and ur punches were a lil more on target. Nice metaphors also... Overall: 15.5/30 ...Words 4 tha Wise... ...This battle wuz aite it wuz close 4 tha most part. Im givin this to ~Fusion~ because he came just a lil harder than Venomous did but good battle 2 both emcees... Vote: ~Fusion~ Venomous 05-24-2004, 12:50 AM heres my link http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?threadid=24046 Ezekiel 05-24-2004, 04:34 AM 3-0...close this ish T-Giz 05-24-2004, 09:24 AM opener: F Closer: F flo: V Personal... Pun:F Multi: Ven vocab: F enjoyment: F Overall F this was onesided I've seen better shit from Fuse any way he won vote: Fuse BkBrawla 05-24-2004, 11:02 AM Congratulation Fusion wins by Ko,Thanks to everybody who voted |