View Full Version : Venomous vs. Fusion


Venomous
05-22-2004, 01:56 AM
12 bars
no d/r
no hate or crew votes
due by end of the night

Venomous
05-22-2004, 02:00 AM
^i meant 12 bars minimum

Venomous
05-22-2004, 02:22 AM
my drop first



Better Not Be Near Me When I Spit Cause I'm Like Twice Ya Size//
My Saliva Has Guys Die Like They In A "Drowning Pool"(<guy died in that rock band)//
You Gotta Painted Face And A Big Nose But I'm The One Thats Clowning You//
You Is Wack And Your Skills Stink Like That Cartoon Peppy Lepu//
You Cant See Me On The Mic So You Must Be Blind//
Pussy, I'll "Shut You Up" Like Some Dusty Blinds//
You Probably Gotta Hard Time Digestin My Crap//
I'll Rip You A New Asshole So You Aint Gotta Shit It Out The Back//
You Aint A Gangsta, You Aint Carry No Glocks//
You Only Did Time When You Masturbated Through The Tiny Loop Of Ya Watch//
You Was "Shocked" Cause My Lyrics Roar Like Thunder Dude//
And I'm Always On Top, Even When I'm Buried 6 Feet Under You//

Venomous
05-22-2004, 02:41 AM
Since Fusion aint even online, I'll Give him Till Tomorrow Nite

Venomous
05-22-2004, 11:54 PM
Yo fusion, u gonna drop some or do i gotta call u a forfeit?

BkBrawla
05-23-2004, 01:24 AM
Links.......

Ezekiel
05-23-2004, 07:31 AM
fuck sorry man..ive been at swimming nationals for a few days..i'll do sum shit now man..

Ezekiel
05-23-2004, 07:50 AM
I apolagize fully 4 the people who read this battle lol..but there is no way im droppin nething good...blah.....
....

Weigh-in-your-verse, you're too light no wonder your rhymes 'blind'/
Your style's Venomous...more like priceless cause everywhere it goes it's always declined//
Venz "skillz" are like the arms of napoleon, large numbers but unable-to-advance?/
:rolleyes: ....but like an 'optimist' you give your victory shot a '50/50 chance'//
If you rapped about chinese food menu's in battles you couldn't have-won-ton/
Look at your verse and your gonna hate what you made like having a-gay-son//
Let me explain tha reason why your style is simmilar to "nun"/
You can "only pray" cuz tha day u'll beat me will "never-cum"//
Fuck it, your "shit's too soft", like you've been drinking way too much-"Serutan"/
And your "sexuality's in question" so much, we should just call you-the-"Fruit-Man"//
Talkin shit to me is like walkin the plank...ur taken steps-to-ur-death/
I'll rip out ya lungs, to show u ya chance of winnins less-than-ur-breaths//

.....

Ezekiel
05-23-2004, 07:57 AM
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/sho...1360#post291360
post a link man...start voting...get this ish outa the way

ThaGod2004
05-23-2004, 01:03 PM
whatt up doe..nice battle..liked both verses but..

flow-both
meta's-Venom
wordplay-Fusion
vocab-Fusion
enjoyment-Fusion

Venom-You Only Did Time When You Masturbated Through The Tiny Loop Of Ya Watch//
^^^nicest line

Fusion-Talkin shit to me is like walkin the plank...ur taken steps-to-ur-death/
I'll rip out ya lungs, to show u ya chance of winnins less-than-ur-breaths//
^^^nice finishers

Fusions wordplay and last lines and shit is basically why I voted for him

oh by the way Fusion..u spose to be battlin me..drop yo shit soon homie then ill follow up

vote-Fusion

Judas
05-23-2004, 06:28 PM
Flow-Fusion
Metas-Venom
wordplay-Fusion
Vocabulary-Fusion
Enjoyment-Fusion

Vote: Fusion

Ezekiel
05-23-2004, 07:08 PM
2-0.uppin 4 other link as well

K. Chaos
05-23-2004, 08:36 PM
Venomous

Better Not Be Near Me When I Spit Cause I'm Like Twice Ya Size//
My Saliva Has Guys Die Like They In A "Drowning Pool"(<guy died in that rock band)//
An Aite punch 3.5/5

You Gotta Painted Face And A Big Nose But I'm The One Thats Clowning You//
You Is Wack And Your Skills Stink Like That Cartoon Peppy Lepu//
First line wuz nice but second wuz whack and sorta played... 2.3/5

You Cant See Me On The Mic So You Must Be Blind//
Pussy, I'll "Shut You Up" Like Some Dusty Blinds//
First line wuz kinda whack,ummm...okay i guess 2.2/5

You Probably Gotta Hard Time Digestin My Crap//
I'll Rip You A New Asshole So You Aint Gotta Shit It Out The Back//
Not Feelin it 1/5

You Aint A Gangsta, You Aint Carry No Glocks//
You Only Did Time When You Masturbated Through The Tiny Loop Of Ya Watch//
First Line=Weak...Second Line=Aite 2/5

You Was "Shocked" Cause My Lyrics Roar Like Thunder Dude//
And I'm Always On Top, Even When I'm Buried 6 Feet Under You//
Nice Finisher 3.5/5

...Overall nice verse...Personally I think ya should have had more personalz...Shoulda got on his name or sumtin but ya had sum decent punches that hit well...
Overall: 15/30

~Fusion~

Weigh-in-your-verse, you're too light no wonder your rhymes 'blind'/
Your style's Venomous...more like priceless cause everywhere it goes it's always declined//
First line wuz decent, so wuz tha second but it streched a lil bit 3/5

Venz "skillz" are like the arms of napoleon, large numbers but unable-to-advance?/
....but like an 'optimist' you give your victory shot a '50/50 chance'//
Nice sumwut metas and multi 3/5

If you rapped about chinese food menu's in battles you couldn't have-won-ton/
Look at your verse and your gonna hate what you made like having a-gay-son//
Naw not really feelin it but nice try wit da wordplay 2/5

Let me explain tha reason why your style is simmilar to "nun"/
You can "only pray" cuz tha day u'll beat me will "never-cum"//
Decent bar...But nuttin special 2/5

Fuck it, your "shit's too soft", like you've been drinking way too much-"Serutan"/
And your "sexuality's in question" so much, we should just call you-the-"Fruit-Man"//
First line wuz nice but not really feelin line 2 2/5

Talkin shit to me is like walkin the plank...ur taken steps-to-ur-death/
I'll rip out ya lungs, to show u ya chance of winnins less-than-ur-breaths//
[B]Good Finisher[B] 3.5/5

...Welp ya had more personalz than Venomous and ur punches were a lil more on target. Nice metaphors also...
Overall: 15.5/30

...Words 4 tha Wise...
...This battle wuz aite it wuz close 4 tha most part. Im givin this to ~Fusion~ because he came just a lil harder than Venomous did but good battle 2 both emcees...

Vote: ~Fusion~

Venomous
05-24-2004, 12:50 AM
heres my link http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?threadid=24046

Ezekiel
05-24-2004, 04:34 AM
3-0...close this ish

T-Giz
05-24-2004, 09:24 AM
opener: F
Closer: F
flo: V
Personal...
Pun:F
Multi: Ven
vocab: F
enjoyment: F

Overall F

this was onesided I've seen better shit from Fuse any way he won

vote:
Fuse

BkBrawla
05-24-2004, 11:02 AM
Congratulation Fusion wins by Ko,Thanks to everybody who voted