ok bro, heres the rules

1. 6-12 bars
2. 3-0 KO first to 5 wins
3. votes must be explained/ no dickryding votes
4. you spit first then ill post a verse shortly after

chekkin begins now

goodluck

check...check... i'll drop my shit with-in a couple minutes...

aiight... hope yous ready....


Look at this lil WANNA BE EMCEE tryin to BATTLE ME named "SHAMELESSART",
I ask myself CAN HE hang WIT ME or will i jus ripp this muthafucker APART///1
You never battled no one before, and in yo first battle i'm gonna BEAT YOU,
After that ever emcee in herre will know it don't take much to DEFEAT YOU///2
I'll bust a 40'd over yo head and expose your BRAIN,
Do tha SAME to yo crew... tech ya'll a lesson in bring'n tha PAIN///3
All this shit i'm SPITT'N is a keystyle, yo shit prolly WRITTEN,
And if not pre WRITTEN than it probley BITT'N///4
I come hard and my punches shake tha earth like THUNDER,
I work fo tha devil and lucifer has jus called yo NUMBER///5
Yo hands are shake'n and you have sweat stains under your arm-PIT,
Dawg its not to late for you to ADDMIT that i'm better and 4-FIT///6
This is your breaking point and my SURVIVEL,
Only jesus can help you now lil man, you need tha BIBLE///7
Piss me off and i'll pull out my double barrel SHOTTY,
And decapitate yo head from tha rest of yo fuckin BODY///8
You think that cause you can rhyme a couple words that your an EMCEE?,
You need betta punches, flow, multi and a bigger VOCABULARY///9
This is my close'n line so i will say good LUCK-TO-YOU,
But luck won't help you anyways so lil man... FUCK YOU///10


herre's my vote link~~~>http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=22762&page=3

-no beef-

holla at cha' boi

Paavo watched 8 Mile, started claiming detroit and begun his whack rap career
out of no where I appear, runnin laps around your rusty car n im only in first gear~
Ill play you smoothly like a violin, than ill bust open yah fuckin chin
your text is childish, hows your preschool shit gonna take the win?~
if pain is weakness leavin' the body than I know by this time ur seriously hurt
U wanted to play in my sandbox now i'm leavin U face down in the dirt~
ShamelessArt sendin my boys afer this fag, just becuz I cant stand him
you sayin your punches act like thunder, I didnt see a single one that landed~
I de-gut your corpse, my first four bars burried this little whore
you hadda drag your verse on the whole 10 bars, looks like you still need more~
you can make words ryhme, thats the only good thing Paavo got going
I bet the next time you battle me, its you whos not showing~

there you go shit talker....n mine only took half as long as your whack shit :mad:

heres my link: http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=292300#post292300

...Tha Breakdown...
Aite here it is...

Best Linez:
Shamelessart:
Paavo watched 8 Mile, started claiming detroit and begun his whack rap career
out of no where I appear, runnin laps around your rusty car n im only in first gear~
Nice Bar even tho tha second line wuz a lil streched... 7.5/10

Paavo:
fo people to see that yo rhymes are juviniell and fake,
best get outta herre shamelessart before you find out how much chaos these fist's of mine can create//
Shit wuz really elementary but ya made it work... 6.4/10

Overall:
Im givin this one to Shameless art cuz he came harder all in all but this wuz a good battle to both of the emcees.

Vote: Shameless

OK, enough with this bullshit freepost , if i see more of this then thread will be closed....

Paavo=
Shameless Art= 1

Need sum mo votez yall :) ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Paavo
Look at this lil WANNA BE EMCEE tryin to BATTLE ME named "SHAMELESSART",
I ask myself CAN HE hang WIT ME or will i jus ripp this muthafucker APART///1
^It Was Alright...Nothing To Nice..
You never battled no one before, and in yo first battle i'm gonna BEAT YOU,
After that ever emcee in herre will know it don't take much to DEFEAT YOU///2
Played..
I'll bust a 40'd over yo head and expose your BRAIN,
Do tha SAME to yo crew... tech ya'll a lesson in bring'n tha PAIN///3
Where's the Punch?
All this shit i'm SPITT'N is a keystyle, yo shit prolly WRITTEN,
And if not pre WRITTEN than it probley BITT'N///4
I come hard and my punches shake tha earth like THUNDER,
I work fo tha devil and lucifer has jus called yo NUMBER///5
Yo hands are shake'n and you have sweat stains under your arm-PIT,
Dawg its not to late for you to ADDMIT that i'm better and 4-FIT///6
I'll Just Skip Down To Here And Say All That ^ Was Weak..
This is your breaking point and my SURVIVEL,
Only jesus can help you now lil man, you need tha BIBLE///7
Piss me off and i'll pull out my double barrel SHOTTY,
And decapitate yo head from tha rest of yo fuckin BODY///8
You think that cause you can rhyme a couple words that your an EMCEE?,
You need betta punches, flow, multi and a bigger VOCABULARY///9
This is my close'n line so i will say good LUCK-TO-YOU,
But luck won't help you anyways so lil man... FUCK YOU///10
Work On Your Punches..

Shameless
Paavo watched 8 Mile, started claiming detroit and begun his whack rap career
out of no where I appear, runnin laps around your rusty car n im only in first gear~
No Punch, Nice Try..
Ill play you smoothly like a violin, than ill bust open yah fuckin chin
your text is childish, hows your preschool shit gonna take the win?~
if pain is weakness leavin' the body than I know by this time ur seriously hurt
U wanted to play in my sandbox now i'm leavin U face down in the dirt~
Straight Rght Here Man....Seriously Hurt Made Me Grin..
ShamelessArt sendin my boys afer this fag, just becuz I cant stand him
you sayin your punches act like thunder, I didnt see a single one that landed~
I de-gut your corpse, my first four bars burried this little whore
you hadda drag your verse on the whole 10 bars, looks like you still need more~
you can make words ryhme, thats the only good thing Paavo got going
I bet the next time you battle me, its you whos not showing~
The Next To Last bar Was The Best Punch...I Guess..

Vote - Shameless

way i saw it...................

multis--paavo
punches--paavo
wordplay--tie
vocab--paavo
flow--shameless (hard one)
structure--tie
enjoyment--both

overall--i picked paavo cuz i liked his verse better... his style... the way he worded his shit....... shameless... you had a good verse too... but you fed off his verse dawg... that shit's good for face to face verbal battlin... but it don't look too good in text...

anyways... that's how i felt on this one... love me or hate me for it... i don't give a fuck... but this was still a good battle... like all the other ones... it don't need to be slept on.......

UPPIN for botha ya..............

pshhh, thats a hater vote, i peeped paavos threads and you vote for him all the time :mad: shall I say more? or shall I start posting links to prove myself? its obvious who won this battle! lol..and where did I feed at! your bullshitting man! and if I were to feed anyways he accepted to the rulez! and where in the rulez does it say that? it doesnt! ight then...my case is closed :mad: :mad:

ShamelessArt challenges you to a battle! Do you accept? :mad:

TRYING ta steal my KO from under my belt? :mad: pshhh on you

[Closed]

^^ dude we ain't suppose to feed off a verse.... go check out my rematch battle with skorch and you'll see that YWE an BK straight up voted agaisnt me simply cause i feed off his verse. i didn't know we couldn't feed either till my last battle.... and no skitz doesn't always vote fo me... i suggest you go back to my other battles and look again... he's voted against me too dawg... uppin this this...

2-1 (my lead) UPPiN^^

Opener: SA
Closer: SA
Complexity: SA
Personals:...
flo: SA
multies:....
pun SA
e njoyment: SA
overall SA

this was very onsided in my eyes Paavo was just tooooooooooo elemetary for this battl yall cats aint even on the same level decent shit SA


vote; SA

3-1 MY LEAD......still waiting on this....letz get dis over with :mad:

yo

Punchez - Shame
mettas - Shame
multies - shame
Overall - Shame

...
Punches: S.A
Flow: S.A
Basic: Paavo
Personals: ---
Wordplay: S.A

blah fuck it that will do... Shameless gets ma vote...paavo came way 2 basic..his ryhmes n attempted punches...

Congratulations Shameless Art wins 5-1, Thanks to everybody who voted