16 lines
5 votes
3-0 ko
legit votes only...

good luck fam

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=23543

Well... Here is my link... Giz, I'll either post tonight, or tomorrow... So PLEASE have your verse ready to be posted... If you all ready have it done, then put it up tonight and I'll do the same... If not... Be done by tomorrow... I had to Battle Quiz, and thought I had to battle Virt in the BL, which is why I haven't turned to this yet... To much at one time... So anywho, get that verse up...

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=293843#post293843

Both Of You Need Another Link; The Requirement Is Now 2 Links.

My b.....http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=293941#post293941

Welcome to the vet arena T Giz


(Moved To The Veteran Battle Arena)

...Death Cries for your soul...


Your IQ's lower-than-less, and you roll-with-a-set that most-just-neglect!
How you holding-respect when AFTER MONTHS just getting Posted-as-Vet!! (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=24347)
I'm roping-his-neck, A "photo-with-TeK's" the only way yo could "POSE-AS-A-THREAT!!"
His vocals-are-vexed, JIZZ "is what he eats" so it's likely he'll "Choke-on-his-text!!"
Put holes-in-his-chest, he's "focused-on-death".. so it's like his fame-is-"BEWARED"
Dis lame-should-be-scared, like he "planned his funeral" I'll knock him in a Grave-HE-prepared (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=23178)
Slain-and-declared, brain-dead cause T's big ego is Way-in-the-air
Pain-and-despair is his "FILLING", and his favorite desert is his NAME-IN-ECLARES!!
I'm aiming-to-dare Giz to drop hot flows but he even knows his spittin-is-trash
I'm killin-this-fag, Giz seen more "NUTS" in his life than snapping-a-SNICKERS-in-half!!
This nigga-gets-smashed, he can only WISH to win so hs lucks-on-the-stars
Disrupting-my-bars!? I'm doing you favors cause most vets don't give a FUCK-WHO-YOU-ARE! (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=21900)
Corrupted-and-harmed is how Giz is left, while he has to accept that his rhymes-blow
As-time-goes, Giz should realize-though his punches "hit nothing but AIR" like TAE-BO!!
Spit sublime-flows, while Giz'z lines are like "cum jokes" how they're played-and-not-felt
Ain't no use in "saying he's wack", he made drops and UNDER-RATED-HIMSELF! (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=18324)

...Rest in Peace...










IQ is basically neglected by other crews...
He just made the vet list.. made a veteran grave
Eclares are donuts with custard in them.. filled with his name.."Giz"

Giz... I know you've been stalling, waiting for me to post... Because you could have posted, but as you said " I'll wait for you to post.." And I keyed this, with the acception of getting links. So.. HAVE you verse done TODAY... Or I might haveto DQ you for gayness... :o



Here's my other link... http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=23686

I'll try to post tonoight fam lol nice verse

D.Q.'s not nesscessary...

Xplanayshuns
*wordplay betweent Sky diving from a plane and the game chutes and ladders
**A roster or a cock is whats thought to wake up farmers
***Elmers is a famous brand of glue
****Mal is spanish mean bad...

this hero-is-done your activity is zero-to-none all ya tight lines are conservative like speedos-for-nuns//
I need-no-mo-puns you breathe-homo-lungs? cuz you spit gay twig-dick, this kids-sick? he can't see me like the words in his sig-pic//
his wackness covered in blackness But I see-your-done-spitt'in, cuz all ya puns Miss like single-young-women//( like Miss instead of Mrs.)
up in the "game"? you climb'in the "ladder" as a flared-up-fag, but you Plainly(""plane"") ""fallin off"" cuz aint no ""chute"" for ya ""para""-graph//*
beat this muffin-to-cake-batter don't rush-into-hate-faster, cuz all ya flos are piss poor(pour) like a busted-agape-bladder//
I'll harm-herb-worse Mal aint my pal good luck? I'm the charm-merk'in, you can't wake up without a cock like sterotypes for most farm-workers//**
apologize-you-boob you couldn't qualify-to-loose, ya crew? wanna catch a L-More(Elmer) then you all-can-find the-glue//***
ya candid-scams-fake'in bitch I'd banish-damn-nations, cuz Mal aint even good in the spanish-translation//****

uppin for votes

Your IQ's lower-than-less, and you roll-with-a-set that most-just-neglect!
How you holding-respect when AFTER MONTHS just getting Posted-as-Vet!!
tight multies.. nice punch
I'm roping-his-neck, A "photo-with-TeK's" the only way yo could "POSE-AS-A-THREAT!!"
His vocals-are-vexed, JIZZ "is what he eats" so it's likely he'll "Choke-on-his-text!!"
tight nameplay
Put holes-in-his-chest, he's "focused-on-death".. so it's like his fame-is-"BEWARED"
Dis lame-should-be-scared, like he "planned his funeral" I'll knock him in a Grave-HE-prepared
nice personalk
Slain-and-declared, brain-dead cause T's big ego is Way-in-the-air
Pain-and-despair is his "FILLING", and his favorite desert is his NAME-IN-ECLARES!!
tight wordplay
I'm aiming-to-dare Giz to drop hot flows but he even knows his spittin-is-trash
I'm killin-this-fag, Giz seen more "NUTS" in his life than snapping-a-SNICKERS-in-half!!
ill wordplay
This nigga-gets-smashed, he can only WISH to win so hs lucks-on-the-stars
Disrupting-my-bars!? I'm doing you favors cause most vets don't give a FUCK-WHO-YOU-ARE!!
nice personal
accept that his rhymes-blow As-time-goes, Giz should realize-though his punches "hit nothing but AIR" like TAE-BO!!
nice
Spit sublime-flows, while Giz'z lines are like "cum jokes" how they're played-and-not-felt
Ain't no use in "saying he's wack", he made drops and UNDER-RATED-HIMSELF!
aight finisher

this hero-is-done your activity is zero-to-none all ya tight lines are conservative like speedos-for-nuns//
nice wordplay.. tight opener
I need-no-mo-puns you breathe-homo-lungs? cuz you spit gay twig-dick, this kids-sick? he can't see me like the words in his sig-pic//
aight personal
his wackness covered in blackness But I see-your-done-spitt'in, cuz all ya puns Miss like single-young-women//( like Miss instead of Mrs.)
ill wordplay
up in the "game"? you climb'in the "ladder" as a flared-up-fag, but you Plainly(""plane"") ""fallin off"" cuz aint no ""chute"" for ya ""para""-graph//*
blah wordplay
beat this muffin-to-cake-batter don't rush-into-hate-faster, cuz all ya flos are piss poor(pour) like a busted-agape-bladder//
tight
I'll harm-herb-worse Mal aint my pal good luck? I'm the charm-merk'in, you can't wake up without a cock like sterotypes for most farm-workers//**
nice wordplay..tight punch
apologize-you-boob you couldn't qualify-to-loose, ya crew? wanna catch a L-More(Elmer) then you all-can-find the-glue//***
niice wordplay...aight punch
ya candid-scams-fake'in bitch I'd banish-damn-nations, cuz Mal aint even good in the spanish-translation//****
niice wordplay.. good finisher


wordplay: giz
punches: giz
personals: mal
multies: mal
flow: tie
creativity: giz

to sayit.. this battle was neck and neck in my mind.... mal came with alot of personals.. but then giz came with sum tight wordplay and nice punches... very tight battle.. but i think that giz topped mals verse barely

vote- T-giz

Wordplay: Tie
Punches: Tie
personals: Mal
multies: Mal
flow: tie
creativity: giz


Vote: ~Malagen~.

If you want me to further elaborate the vote, I will.

wow i gotta give it up this was one hell of a battle

kinda hard for me to vote tho cuz it seemingly to me right down the middle.

wordplay - giz
multis - mal
punches - tied
metas - giz
creativity - tied
flow - tied
personals - mal
vote - tie

i think u should go round 2...on and mal when i get some free time we'll battle..same with giz :)

~Malagen~

Your IQ's lower-than-less, and you roll-with-a-set that most-just-neglect!
How you holding-respect when AFTER MONTHS just getting Posted-as-Vet!!
Good personal..multis tight..good flow. nice direct punch
I'm roping-his-neck, A "photo-with-TeK's" the only way yo could "POSE-AS-A-THREAT!!"
His vocals-are-vexed, JIZZ "is what he eats" so it's likely he'll "Choke-on-his-text!!"
nice way to continue the multi.. first line blah, second was iight
Put holes-in-his-chest, he's "focused-on-death".. so it's like his fame-is-"BEWARED"
Dis lame-should-be-scared, like he "planned his funeral" I'll knock him in a Grave-HE-prepared
multies good..weak bar though
Slain-and-declared, brain-dead cause T's big ego is Way-in-the-air
Pain-and-despair is his "FILLING", and his favorite desert is his NAME-IN-ECLARES!!
lol..nice
I'm aiming-to-dare Giz to drop hot flows but he even knows his spittin-is-trash
I'm killin-this-fag, Giz seen more "NUTS" in his life than snapping-a-SNICKERS-in-half!!
wack
This nigga-gets-smashed, he can only WISH to win so hs lucks-on-the-stars
Disrupting-my-bars!? I'm doing you favors cause most vets don't give a FUCK-WHO-YOU-ARE!
very nice..hard hitting..liked this a lot
Corrupted-and-harmed is how Giz is left, while he has to accept that his rhymes-blow
As-time-goes, Giz should realize-though his punches "hit nothing but AIR" like TAE-BO!!
dope bar
Spit sublime-flows, while Giz'z lines are like "cum jokes" how they're played-and-not-felt
Ain't no use in "saying he's wack", he made drops and UNDER-RATED-HIMSELF!
meh

Pretty tight verse..loved the multies in this..kept the flow good.. a few hard hitting punches and a lot of nice personals. Wasn't feeling the 'gay' jokes much, though.

T-Giz

this hero-is-done your activity is zero-to-none all ya tight lines are conservative like speedos-for-nuns//
very played, pretty weak
I need-no-mo-puns you breathe-homo-lungs? cuz you spit gay twig-dick, this kids-sick? he can't see me like the words in his sig-pic//
forced multies at first..also weak
his wackness covered in blackness But I see-your-done-spitt'in, cuz all ya puns Miss like single-young-women//( like Miss instead of Mrs.)
ok..i see the attempted wordplay..ill give u credit for that, but didnt like this much either
up in the "game"? you climb'in the "ladder" as a flared-up-fag, but you Plainly(""plane"") ""fallin off"" cuz aint no ""chute"" for ya ""para""-graph//*
wordplay was extremely forced..came out wack
beat this muffin-to-cake-batter don't rush-into-hate-faster, cuz all ya flos are piss poor(pour) like a busted-agape-bladder//
nice..multies weren't bad
I'll harm-herb-worse Mal aint my pal good luck? I'm the charm-merk'in, you can't wake up without a cock like sterotypes for most farm-workers//**
multies forced as fuck..wow.. wordplay was iight..not bad if u look past the rhyming in this
apologize-you-boob you couldn't qualify-to-loose, ya crew? wanna catch a L-More(Elmer) then you all-can-find the-glue//***
wack..really wack
ya candid-scams-fake'in bitch I'd banish-damn-nations, cuz Mal aint even good in the spanish-translation//
lol..laughed a lil at this..pretty tight wordplay..multies forced in that they were senseless and irrelevant.. but good wordplay (not much of a punch..who cares if the beginning three letters of his name mean "bad" in spanish?)

Didn't like this verse much..some forced shit which was a minus.. as far as the forced multies shit..if u really can't think of a multi that's relevant and doesn't come out forced, either rearrange shit or just use a smaller multi (perhaps 2 syllables or 3) to make it easier.. A few instances of good wordplay, but lacked in good punches..

Punches - Malagen
Personals - Malagen
Wordplay - ehh.. T-giz
Multies - Malagen
Creativity - bleh..tie
Enjoyment - Malagen

Vote - Malagen

Malagen ~ Look to improve wordplay and creativity, you have the punches and personals, so incorporating some dope wordplay would make your shit a lot tighter.

T-Giz ~ Avoid forcing shit, and avoid played lines. Also look to put in some harder punches and more clever/creative wordplay.

Good battle.

2-3 uppin for votes

^^^^^^^^^^^^^do we count da tie as a vote for both o r what?

no...... its 2-1 malagen

K....uppin

Alright let's get this vote poppin

Punches=Mal
Wordplay=T-Giz
Flow=Mal
Entertainment=both
Complexity=Neither
Vote=Mal

I vote for Mal cuz he took punches at T-Giz, Giz ya verse was decent but you wasn't taking shots at Mal and thas what held you down, Mal ya Multies was nasty and tha flow was great aight punches

good battle overall hollaback

3-1 mal............