View Full Version : Moses vs Lyrical Layer vs MCD *tourney - rd 2*
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votes - must be sufficiently explained.. any bland votes lacking reason or analysis will be disqualified immediately. No dickryding or Hating. 3-0 = TKO or First to 5 votes Any one is free to vote - as long as votes are well explained. Verses must be 15-20 lines
deadlines i will post a date for each battle where verses are due - there will also be a signing in date to avoid no-shows. Any body failing to meet the deadline will be disqualified.
Biting-any biting of lyrics or material will result in immediate disqualification - if other cats see examples of this, please report it but with evidence to back it up
sign in by tuesday
verses by wednesday
moses21x 02-16-2003, 12:39 PM *signs in*WHAT!!!!!
moses21x 02-16-2003, 03:39 PM MCD, I think since this is a 3-way battle, we should double the line limit to 30-40 lines. It's almost impossible to do anything with substance with only 15-20 when you have to go at 2 people. What do you think?
Lyrical Layer 02-17-2003, 08:34 PM Im in.......just had to chug through a fuckin foot and a half of damn snow......snow....snow...snow....snow....snow....s now!!!!!
Lyrical Layer 02-18-2003, 11:19 PM You wanna' know what im gonna do, hear I'll 'show ya'
I'll turn MCD into an ARK, and moses into 'Noah'
So now there goes "Noah's Ark", and i'm packin it wit my 'rhymes'
Look into my mouth, I'm stakin it wit 'lyrical nines'
'Hystiracal times', I have, watchin ya'll step to 'me',
Yall stand in awe like "Ohh", while I 'graduated' to 'G'
Im 'glad ya'll made it' to standard or what ever you wanna call it
Im proficiant, with rhyme scheme bigger than a jews 'wallet'
I'm nastier than afterbirth, and sicker than the plauge,
yall cute as little rabbits, and weaker than christopher reeves legs
15 to 20 lines is all yall 'gettin', cause thats all im 'spitten'
when im dead, you'll both be 'twitchen' to my 'writen' -
- 'verses', which carrier you're limp bodies of like 'hearses'
I'm wrapped aound ya girls arms, simaliar to thier 'purses'
Being honest, I really wanna get this 'battle over'
So whatch me plow into you, and tip this 'cattle over'
Real nice Double L.......next
yo..
This cat named Moses-knows-his flows-is-hopeless -
and i'll leave his nose-wit-more-blows than he knows how to cope-with -
so-choke-on-this - i spit Raw like i got Sushi in my Oesophagus[/b]-
and Moses' hooks are just Caffeine - better raise up ya coffee-cups!
I knew you was whack - thats how i pictured-ya-
scrawny ass with weaker rhymes than the dude-in-ya-signature!
this-bitch-is-done- watch me eat my next meal -
it's gettin hot in the Kitchen and i'm about to smash-your-grill
so whats-the-deal? the deal is Lyrical Layers plans are foiled-cuz
he couldn't get a deal on toilets - given the royal-flush!
lemme call-your-bluff-cuz' LL's hopes in this battle are just causeless-
and i can see him runnin like taps - I Faucet (force-it)
your-poor-shit is miniscule in comparison-to-mine -
and i'm kinda embarresed for you that you think you pack-a-nine -
you-lackin-style' i'm the emcee to Cat-walk and rip you at the seams -
My material is unstoppable - your Material is Jeans
My-main-means is to make you motherfuckers see-pain -
cuz MCD like a Road-hog - I'ma rule the Freeway! (three-way)
Real Nice MCD, Moses, I know you online, where ya verse at. Let's get this going. (5:31 PM)
moses21x 02-19-2003, 06:45 PM 2 birds with one stone, it's like i'm runnin a group home
I take care of both y'all, put your socks and your shoes on
You fuckers are weak, couldn't cut out a coupon
I'm O.J. Simpson, MCD's Nicole, and Lyrical, you Ron
I leave you a bloody mess, and I still get away free
Poke out your little chest, you slim like shady
You had your little win, but your times up
MCD, see he was smart when he signed up
He knew only way he'd go big, is if he caps locked his name
I am not the same, you bird mah fuckas can't knock the game
My shots are flame, I'm not for play, you rot in vain
I killed you already, you're throwin shots from graves
I'm unGodly with the flow, you hardly put up a show
I've embarked on whole new glow,
my light is that of a star when i go
Let me tell you somethin you both should know
I'm watched by many like Oprah's show
Look at the first round, views, who had the most
who packs the toast, who brags the most?
Yes that's me but I can back it though
You fags are slow, I'm consistent
Try to catch up to the flow, you just missed it
DAMN I'm gifted, your fans have shifted, you stand, I pivot
I can switch positions,cause i'm versatile like Pippen
Lyrical you wanna get this battle over, you don't need help
I ain't even gotta spit at you,you already killed yourself
You wanna rep that Korn shit, well you just got popped
And you wanna love again, but you keep gettin dropped
You really must not know hip-hop bra'
That's one of the greatest of all times in signature(Big L R.I.P.)
You placed yourself against me, so this is your fault MCD
In just one verse, I'm makin 2 MC's flee
You couldn't win if there was 2 MVP's
They'd both be me, now don't you see
Like the Israelites you praise my rhymes
Cause like KRS said I'm # 1.....2-3-4- and five
MCD or MS.MACK, I think even though these niggaz are battlin amongst eachother and it ='s to 3, there should still be a limit. Maybe not 15-20 bars, but 20-30 bars. While the other battlers wrote good length verses, Moses wrote his whole life. I mean, goodness, I dont even feel like readin all of that.
Moses, aint gettin at ya, but you look like you were dissin MCD, Double L, AND THE REST OF THE WORLD!!
moses21x 02-19-2003, 07:18 PM ^^^read the entire thread MCD already agreed to the double the limit from 15-20 to a new 30-40 line limit for the 3-way battle. If you're not gonna read the entire verse anyway, don't vote. It's that simple
Well, I really dont have a choice, cuz no one votes in this forum. Everyone acts like we dont have a tourney going on. I'll vote later on. Hopefully, other's will follow.
PS. I DONT REMEMBER HIM SAYIN 30-40 EXACTLY.
moses21x 02-19-2003, 09:53 PM P.S. I said up the limit to 30-40, he said "sure"
cool, i guess you're right. I just wish he would answer me. I need to know if I automatically advance cuz my opponent dropped out!!!
peace
Juttg 02-20-2003, 12:02 AM Ok, the first guy.. I honestly wasnt feelin at ALL... Lines were just played out and not well thought out.. Another Christopher Reeves line? Not very original at all..
MCD, shit wasn't as bad.. Flow started off real nice, with multies and shit.. I was feeling the beggining... But, you were streching things.. The O - G line was very stretched... There were a few others in there.. The faucit line? OMG, you cant just create another word out of another word to go along with your wordplay...
Moses verse had a nice flow too it.. Wasn't very complex at all, but it flow exceptionally... He was gettin at yall, and his piece made more sense to me.. Not to try to embarass anyone or nothin, but his verse was better than both of yalls combined.. In quality and quanity...
Vote = Moses
Archaic 02-20-2003, 03:24 PM nahh...you don't advance...i took the spot...answer my verse towards you...i'll make up missing rd 1 somehow later...lets get it popping...also when i get out of work i'l start voting on this tourney...ReSpEcT and PeAcE
Griff 02-20-2003, 09:12 PM Lyrical Layer really had just one good line..it was the one about the Jew's wallet. That was some funny shit, but overall the flow wasn't very good. I agree with Juttg about the C. Reeves line, that's shit's old and it sounds like exactly like an Eminem line. I didn't really think that the Noah's Ark diss was that strong either. I site that you had to use some creativity there, so I'll give you that. Overall I just thought it was average... not the worst thing I've ever heard or anything.
MCD started off with an AIDS sick kinda flow. It was tight as hell, but then it fell off. What happened??? If you would've continued like that all the way through, there wouldn't even need to be a vote, but like I said it fell off.
This cat named Moses-knows-his flows-is-hopeless -
and i'll leave his nose-wit-more-blows than he knows how to cope-with -
so-choke-on-this - i spit Raw like i got Sushi in my Oesophagus[/b]-MCD
I thought this was hot and the disses here are good, plus you used a big word (esophagus), which most people have never used...that was awesome. But I thought the rest your disses weren't that great..
lemme call-your-bluff-cuz' LL's hopes in this battle are just causeless-
and i can see him runnin like taps - I Faucet (force-it)
I didn't like this part cause I think I'd rather rage like the Niagra then drip like a faucet if I was trying to battle someone.
Overall your rhyme was pretty good though
Moses
I don't know what to say specificly here cause I liked pretty much liked all of it. Good flow and creative disses, despite how very much longer it was then the other guys. You posted later than they did, but I can see why. By the way ya'll, Big L (Moses Sig) was one of the greatest rappers that never got the chance to make it. The greats that are still with us holler his name all the time.. check the lyrics. Well my vote goes undoubtedly to MOSES.
His disses were more personal.. especially the CAPS locked one to MCD.. plus you gotta love the KRS ONE line.
I VOTE MOSES...haha (CAPS LOCKED)
moses21x 02-20-2003, 11:50 PM that's 2-0 my lead, uppin!!
Fuck it..I'm out. This site is more Corrupt than the state of Denmark....
..But i will post this battle on some other sites...see if its not just me imagining this....i think LL had a better verse than Moses personally.
He knew only way he'd go big, is if he caps locked his name
^^damn straight, thats the most amazing punchline i've EVER heard *rolls eyes*
I'll be back with the results.......and no, i'm not posting them on a site where i'm well known..i believe in fairness..and i think this was rigged to the genitals...
Ms.Mack and MCD both out?...LMFGDAO...yeah.
MCD
The O - G line was very stretched...
that was LL you prize prick...shows how much the voters actually knew.
Moses wins
*thread closed*
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