Rules:

8-12 Lines/Bars
No Hate/DR Votes
Explained Voes Only
No Bitin/Feedin/Recyclin
3-0 KO Or First Ta 5
Due 24 Hours After Chekk In

Chekk 1 Chekk 2

g'LuKK..

check...........

....*dustin the rust off*

I break-backs, with fist-cracks, and that’s only leadin to rif-raff,
This guy couldn’t stay fresh… if he changed his name to Tic-Tac,
U need to quit -that, with lines ,dashes, and dots,
If he bit of NFURNO I bet his shit still wouldn’t be hott,
Dynamik puts on make up, to cover how fake-he-is,
This is a breakin-in, cuz when I blast he will Taste-my-kids,
I’ll take-this-win, hes isn’t dynamically-quick, when dogding-a-5th,
He just probably-wish, he could serve people without a “side-dish”,
His rhymes look like he bit them all off greeting-cards,
With Bleeding-bars, I’ll leave your ass all a Lone seeing stars*

*hes from the lone star state

...Sonned

Aight your verse in due by tonight (M.I.) time......... g'luck

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=24341

aight thats my link....

ur past ur deadline but if u have ur verse in by tomorrow afternoon it'll be straight...

ohh sorry man..
had a sleepover and everything and didnt have time for this..

il try ta drop tonight and if i cant jus take tha no show..

thx..