12-24 lines
no crew/hate/dickride/unexplained votes
no biting/recycling/feeding
5 votes to win or 3-0 KO
Check in by Saturday 10th July 11.59 pm GMT
Verses due by Tuesday 13th July 11.59 pm GMT
Voting period ends: Friday 16th July 11.59 pm GMT
Failure to do your stipulation will result in your opponents being awarded 1.5 votes

Voters will consider the stipulation when deciding a winner

YOUR STIPULATION: It's a three way battle, you have two opponents instead of one...if you have any questions abou your stipulation ask as soon as you can - the deadlines will not be extended.

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Those who have tried to open the Rap Worlds forum today (July 13th) know that the server has been down. Kryptonite had to leave at 3:45pm today to attend and participate in double header baseball games. Because the server was down, he couldn't post his battle verse so he sent it to me by email to post for him, assuring that his verse would be turned in on time. Here is Kryptonite's battle verse:
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Uhh yea..this is my admission to the next round.. :mad:

Virt you quick~to~argue, when spittin~hard~you sound like you shittin~lard~you..
gettin~large~too, resemblin a barge~you desperate like when ya ask guys to "mark"~you! *1
Virt speaks bout not gettin "beat" but I've seen the way this "chicken chokes"..
or when he starts gettin cheap, then he will duck or start dismissin' votes! *2
And Jay.. you've never said shit about Krypt, but I'd rip you if ya did..
A filler on the Powder Pimpin roster and thats why no one issued you a sig! *3
In dissin you aint big, I peeped ya audios and you seemed fluent in stutter..
Rap aint you brother, you need a new "lifestyle" like you just ruined the rubber! *4
Your reputation is gettin worse but gettin back to work, Im gettin back to Virt and..
Im sorry if your feelings are hurt, but I just got to start gettin back to murkin'!
I aint holdin' nothin back in this and Im not just talkin about spittin explicit..
Ima leave you cryin like you was with the votes when you got ripped by Xkwisite!
You cats are a joke, it aint even close, Im like the sea the way Im flowin around..
Mowin~them~down, Im like Barnum and Bailey the way Im "showin~them~clowns"! *5

*1: Barge as in the boat that carries shit, not the meaning that means to force your way through.
And "mark you" means well, to bust on you.
*2: Virt complains about almost every vote he gets against him in a battle.
*3: He got the old PPR sig..
*4: Lifestyles is a brand of condoms.
*5: Barnum and Bailey is a circus... "Ringling Bros & Barnum and Bailey"

"Artist Note: Script 3/4 of this shyt up in like 5-10 minutes to make deadline...I'm a busy nukka :) ...neways...peep it..."


(Keystyle)
Virt thinkin' he B.I.G shyt, he "Dead Wrong", let's-see
Comin' A'CROSS(X) me nigga, I'm Right..so how you expect ta check-me?
Niggaz come an' go, pussy..I'll give you personals fa ya flow
Dawg you oughta-know, soft punches not even N'sync, they off beat as ya audioz
Exploitin'..you good fa money, let me re-tell(retail), the phenomenon of you gettin' sonned by fe-malez
Good-riddenz, DISH'n ya hit's as in'DIRECT as da awardz you're-given
Spotlightin' ya crew...nigga not-you, ya lyrics even irritate ya toungue, like hot-soups
Now nigga let me step-ta-you, ya know my fam up north rep-da-blue, I assume dat's why you a Crip-tonight(Kryptonite)
I'll lift-ya-life, like a church-revival, I spit super man, thus meanin' I'm yer-idol
The guyz-back, go ahead.."pimp"...get cha lil net play off ya I-Mac
Smushin'-thea, nigga you ain't street..text drop, da only thing given you reason' fa pushin'-keys
You battlin' me as harsh as Douchin'-V's, Damn it I'm sleepin....krypt..step ta da mic fa my cushion-please
Virt..fat fuck cracks me up harda than his belly-linez, I know parkinson niggaz wit more steady-rhymes
Dawgg..I'm a head of ya time, yet we in da same-zone, Orally hard spits?..nah...you'd have ta get cha dame-boned
Mass murderer..gotta slay-dis-dude, and excuse the lack of lyric mechanics, my wordz jus' won't play-with-you
Punches?..nah rather I'm slap boxin', it get's-me...I mean my multi's half steppin', cuz you a half ass MC
I'm thinkin' you-gay, and they don't make personals fa men.....or do-they?

(Kryptonite)

when its all said and done he'll be bleeding hard, ur weak and harmed, i'll leave him scarred,
its sad! |no one knew who Krypt was| *til he joined PPR*..!! :(

put welps on this bitch, then when |The Red-Cross|comes
*he gets nailed to the shit*
put shells in ya hip, ur comin |LAST in this BATTLE| so this is just
*TALES(tails) from the KRYPT*..!!*

winnin? ur hardly able, i'll harshly maim U, killin 2 birds
with one stone by merkin dudes from the same crew, ur wack!
n |NITE(knight) only circles me| is if *I sit at King Arthurs Table*..!!

they accepted u?! didnt know ya crew was persuin wack faggots,
defeatin me with as much chance The Hoover Dam has crackin
so with ease
|I'll leave KRYPTON DESTROYED| like *Superman's planet*..!!

this twit wishes to hinder me? but im spittin the sickest of imagery,
no doubt krypts a biter
|the only thing he HASNT STOLEN| is *a BITCHES VIRGINITY*..!!

straight pussy, the type to cry when striked, put a knife thru dykes,
allow me to sum ur verse up right?
|there'll be a Weight(Wait) Line| like *CLUBS ON FRIDAY NIGHTS*..!!

(Murderous~Jay)

to forget about the pain he'll have to slit his wrists, limbs get ripped n this bitch is whipped,
i'll |STOP MJ from SEEIN A TITLE MATCH| like *THE WIZARDS DID*..!!

its nothin for V to be crunchin on fags, U wouldnt be Half-Da-Pussy U use to be if I Cut-U-In-Half! and Jay
truth be told |ya audios are like ya SIG|...*NOTHIN BUT ASS*..!!

tools spray and leave goons slayed, this the P'offs nigga! not fools play!
|E-Dawg gave him Two L's| now U can say he's *Cool-J*..!!*

ya not comin harder than V, droppin hot bars when I spar with MC's,
U SHOOK and everyone on ya roster can see! that the only
|M.J. thats ILL| got *diagnosed with PARKINSONS DISEASE*..!!

ur spinal gets smashed b, fuck buyin the cd! even ya vinyl is trashy
this guys not gon blast me, cuz my |punches FUCK UP MJ's FACE|
like * MOLESTORS with RHYNOPLASTY*..!!

spittin intense heat waves, givin attention these geeks crave,
all the votes are comin V's way, so |J WILL GET SHOT DOWN| for
{Tryna TURN-THE-TABLES} like *RUN DMC's DJ*..!! (WHO'S HOUSE?!!)


*explanations*
King Arthurs Table - King Arthur and the Knights of the ROUND TABLE.
Cool- J - Elldawg beat MJ Twice/ TWO L's = LL COOL J
Parkinsons Disease - Michael J. fox has parkinsons

"and fuck this battle! i dont wanna win! im outtie!,
here tell these people somethin they dont know about me..." - Eminem

That quote at the end of your battle verse was quite gay of you, V...

Tighten up..

Anyway

Punches: Tie between all 3
Personals: Tie between all 3
Wordplay: Virt
Multies: Tie between all 3
Flow: Tie between MJ and Virt

VOTE: Virt. THis battle was real close. In the end,m I think Virt had equal punches personals, multies, and flow with you two. But he had more complex and original wordplay and nameflips. And that's what did it for me...

lol o.o didn't think I'd get any categories...my key was butt...lol..
But yea thx fa kickin' off the votes...keep'em comin'...

Kryptonite:

A filler on the Powder Pimpin roster and thats why no one issued you a sig!

*you need a new "lifestyle" like you just ruined the rubber!

Im like Barnum and Bailey the way Im "showin~them~clowns"! *

Critique: Good verse and nice rhyme scheme but you had one filler line and your personal disses need to be more creative.

Jay

Now nigga let me step-ta-you, ya know my fam up north rep-da-blue, I assume dat's why you a Crip-tonight(Kryptonite)

nigga you ain't street..text drop, da only thing given you reason' fa pushin'-keys

I know parkinson niggaz wit more steady-rhymes

Critique: Rhyme pattern was inconsistent. Some good lines which I noted above.

Virt
put welps on this bitch, then when |The Red-Cross|comes
*he gets nailed to the shit*
put shells in ya hip, ur comin |LAST in this BATTLE| so this is just
*TALES(tails) from the KRYPT*..!!*

i'll |STOP MJ from SEEIN A TITLE MATCH| like *THE WIZARDS DID*..!!

so |J WILL GET SHOT DOWN| for
{Tryna TURN-THE-TABLES} like *RUN DMC's DJ*..!! (WHO'S HOUSE?!!)

Critique: Rhyme pattern was okay. Punches were good. Try to avoid using MJ wordplay too much.

Delivery: 1st Kryptonite 2nd Virt 3rd M Jay
Punches: 1st Virt 2nd Kryptonite 3rd M Jay
Personals: 1st Kryptonite 2nd Virt 3rd M Jay
Consistency:1st tie krypt & Virt 2nd M Jay
Creativity: 1st Virt 2nd Krypt 3rd M Jay
Enjoyment: 1st Virt 2nd Krypt 3rd M Jay
Vote: Virt

Straight battle

Well, well... All right, I was going to break this down all the way... But there is really no need to.. I think I have some valid points...

Krypt:

Your delivery was pretty good... Punches were ok... But a lot of your multies were to forced... There is times where battles can be spiced up with multies, but you put so many close together, and it made your verses sound really odd...Other than that, you can pretty good with it... I am very impressed.. If I had to rather i'd give you about 7.5/10

MJ:
Nice to see you back in the grind... But you slacked a bit in your punches to me... I seen a lot better from you in many occaisions.. Creativity waaaas... Decent, not to spectacular.. As always you came with a nice flow and a few good flips.. I think when you battle, you stick more to the "hood talk" talk of rapping than you do "battle talk" feel me? Nice verse over all in any case... 7.5/10

Virt:
The creativity, humor, good punches, and a lot of your references were just ill... I like how you made two individual verses for each emcee and basically shattered them... Uhm.. You could have added some more multies and nice metas, but you definately held it down with punches... actually, I think it is because of better punches that your verse appears more on point to me..


It was a nice battle... A new form of competiton with you 3... Uhm, I believe some things could have been slightly better in all three, but you all had some good shit... Anyway, I will have to give my vote to Virt as well...



Vote= Virt

Good battle...






^ That's a true pimps philosophy...
































SK BITCH!

*Raises hand in victory*

Good battle guys..

good battle....virt wins 3-0....kryp & jay should stick around though cuz the best loser will get another shot