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Mischieveus
05-13-2004, 05:48 AM
My latest drop entitled [A Page From My] Rhyme Book uncovered some of the details in the second verse that I am about to reveal in my story below. Before I start, I want everyone who does read my story to know that the story in its entirety is completely true and that nothing is made up or embellished. I'd also like to say that I'm honored to be the first to kick off Rap World's latest section. Thank you Diamond Eyez for giving me this opportunity.

From Father to Son

I myself am the teller of this story using the information that I have received from relatives in my family and in old newspapers founded through research.

The year 1986 withheld many life altering events for my mother. She was eight and a half months pregnant with me and she was due to have me any day now. Morning breaks, the day is August 4th (I still haven't been born yet) and my parents are arguing. It already had not been a few good months for them anyway. For the first time ever, my father and his step son (my half brother) are getting along while other complications continue to arise. Leaving the house in a rage a fury, both my Mom and dad depart for their own separate jobs; my father at this point is a police officer and member of the Special Operations Division and Emergency Response Team. At approximately 2:20 p.m. a 67 year-old St. Elizabeth's Hospital patient plunged from the 11th Street bridge in Washington D.C. in an attempt to commit suicide. Upon receiving notification via radio report, Officer Kevin Welsh (my father) and his partner drove to the scene of the occurrence. My father proceeded to remove is socks and shoes and any other garment that might have held him back from retrieving the victim and like any other brave and noble officer, he dove into the 30 foot deep murky waters of the Anacostia River. The woman was saved only ten minutes after her leap, but Officer Kevin Welsh didn't make it.

Four hours and thirty minutes later one of the many divers by the name of Nelson Stickley had the displeasure of finding my father's body around the exact same area that he had cried out for help. It was believed as an afterthought that the current in the river was to blame for his departure. All they knew for sure, however, was that the same man who had compiled 72 Felony Arrests, 33 Arrests for fugitives wanted on warrants, more than 41 commendations for courageous and outstanding performances on duty, and more than 60 letters of appreciation from residents he had helped was gone. "It is irony that a life which wanted to be taken cost a life that didn't" (Gaskins, The Washington Post - 8/8/86). What is the most heartbreaking detail, in my own personal opinion, was that when my mother returned to her home in St. Charles County, she found a letter accompanied by a rose in apology left by the very same man who had drowned earlier that day. Her husband had fled home during his lunch break to conclude an argument that neither one of my parents would ever get to see the end of.

Others would tell you that the most heartbreaking detail in the entire story was my birth on what was supposed to be my Father's 35th birthday just sixteen days after his death. Yup, that's right. The same child that will never know what it's like to be raised by his own father (or any for that matter) was born on his daddy's birthday. Part of me believes that there's a possibility that I am a product of reincarnation. Another part is just happy to be alive as Joseph John Welsh, the son of a hero, or heroes rather. My Mom in the seventeen years she's been my mother has never remarried. She vowed from that day on to dedicate her life to her kids and to never disappoint us. Months ago after she handed me a red notebook with the contents being a plethora of old newspapers from the events that took place in August 86', I wrote my Mom a letter and I told her that she "has never disappointed us."

This, I can't claim as my story exactly. It involves me, yes, but it's really the story of my parents whom I love very much even if I've only come to know one of them. I don't have much of a family like some do so I try to hold these thoughts in my mind anytime I feel like I have been cheated in life. I always and will always remember the acts of my father and the decision of my mother.

http://www.geocities.com/tazzmissionist13/JoeDad2.jpg
(My Dad goofing around in his robe at Christmas time)
Kevin Welsh
(August 20th, 1951 - August 4th, 1986)

What was formally known as the 11th Street Bridge is now known as The Kevin Welsh Memorial Bridge. If you live in the D.C. area and you ride across that bridge, always remember the man who gave his life.

To all those who read this, I will leave you with a quote from my Dad that he always gave to new recruits that joined the force that applies to anything you do.

"Never lose your enthusiasm . . . your zeal."

Intensity
05-13-2004, 05:11 PM
awww.
I'm sittin here in tears after readin' this.
This was well-written and powerful.
Upon comin' into this thread, i thought
it would be of something totally different
but is equally grateful w. your presentation.
It's not often that someone is able to feel
where you are comin from when you speak
of situations like this, but i can honestly
say i know where you are comin' from and
can truly relate. I am the same age as you,
just a couple months younger...and have an
empty space in my life. I will not go into any
further details, but i just wanna encourage you
to keep your head high and do what you do best
and shine, and keep your father's memory alive.

All my love and best wishes
~Niasia

RhymeZ
05-13-2004, 05:31 PM
Homie..

I Think I've Known You Prolly Longer Than Anyone Else On RW That DON'T Know You In The Real..

And I'd Like To Say That You Are A DEEP Person.
I Read EVERY Word Of What Is Posted Above Me, And I Kept Interest The Whole Time.....Sad Story...

Something Like Outta A Movie I Guess You Could Say..
The Comment About Reincarnation Was A Bold One. And It's Something I Believe In.
My Friend To Had Something Of This Happen To Him, And After His Fathers Death...He Was Born On What Woulda Been His Fathers 32cd Birthday...
After His Dad Died, His Mom Went Kinda Crazy...And Therefore When Milton Grew Old Enough...She Began To Tell Him He Was Exactly The Same As Before He Left.... (She's In A Mental Hospital Now....And Has Been For Like 4 Years...)

But She Told Him That He Was His Father And All This Other Stuff... - Point Being She Went Crazy...

But Anyway That's Not My Point..

Point Is Great Story Telling Ability, With A Unique Life Is What You Have..
Great Job..

-[Mrs.XkDubb]-
05-13-2004, 06:26 PM
First of all i want to say thank u for sharing somthing so personal... i know i dont know u but i want to tell u that i have read some of ur work and u are a very talented individual...keep up with it....

as for the story.... although it was sad....i loved the way u worded it...every single sentence kept me interested.... i enjoyed reading it ...i became so involved in the story that i actually started crying....

ur father was a true hero.... and ur mother also for doing such a good job raising such a talented person...

keep doin what u do...and always with ya head high....

~1 Luv~

Mischieveus
05-13-2004, 08:29 PM
Ladyflamez, RhymeZ, and Princess:

I really can't thank you guys enough for reading my story. I'm genuinely moved by your responces and how closely everyone followed along. The tears, RhymeZ's story. . . . it all means so much to me for everyone to relate in some way, shape, or form. This is something that I'm proud of, so I like to share it whenever I can. Thank you all for the very flattering compliments. Your words display excellent characteristics about your personalitys.

Thank you all again, and God Bless.

.Inphinite.
05-14-2004, 06:57 PM
*gives applause*


Great.

D-Illar-1
05-15-2004, 01:47 AM
THis would make an excellent book or short story if it were extended.......

Mischieveus
05-16-2004, 04:47 AM
Thank you, Nuk. I'm very appreciative of you taking time out to read my story.

THis would make an excellent book or short story if it were extended.......

You know what? I always thought that one day I could take this here story and turn it into something more. Possibly take it and put it on the silver screen. It's a big idea, but you really never know. Judging from your comments, though, I take it you liked the story. So thanks for reading.

COVERT
05-18-2004, 07:06 PM
I dont think it was a sad story......its sad that your dad is nolonger here and that you never meet him....but the way you put it, it was more like a praise of his achievements....and not a why isnt he here......this was a very moving story and you told it brilliantly

i would say keep your head up but i can tell by the story it is held high with pride

peace bro

Mischieveus
05-18-2004, 09:28 PM
i would say keep your head up but i can tell by the story it is held high with pride

It's good to know that you saw my pride and not my saddness which is exactly what I was going for. Thank you for your responce because in this case, it means more to me to know that you read my story and felt it's power. So again, thank you.

Tikiti45
05-28-2004, 10:23 AM
That was amazing it almost made me cry...

Mischieveus
05-28-2004, 02:52 PM
Thank you much, Tikiti. I'm proud to have one of your first two posts under my story, giving the praises you gave to it.

Much appreciation for reading.

Cra-Z
06-11-2004, 04:33 PM
I hate to critique the quality of a story like this so I'll just say that it was well-written, only 2 or 3 errors and a fragmented sentence. This is a very good piece of literature and something that I'm sure was hard to get over at a young age. We all have our struggles, wheather they be apparent or not, keep your head up and try to be the best you can be, we're all in this together.

Mischieveus
06-12-2004, 03:35 AM
only 2 or 3 errors and a fragmented sentence.
^ Yeah, I know. It drove me crazy because I swore I proofread it two or three times. Of all things, I wanted this one thing to be perfect. But anyway, thanks for the detailed feedback. Usually you leave two or three worded posts, and this time you didn't, so I appreciate it more than you think.

I'm sure was hard to get over at a young age. We all have our struggles, wheather they be apparent or not
^ Two things about that. One, it was very tough when I was young. I read an article in a 1992 edition of The Washington post where they did an interview with my mom and one excerpt reads:

"Joe carries on a conversation with his daddy," Mrs. Welsh said. "Recently, he said, "Daddy, I start kindergarten in a few days, aren't you proud.' I was reduced to tears."

^ I was about five years old when I started kindergarten and I don't even remember that. It's effect on my life is heavy. It got to me then evidently, and it still gets to me now. This is something I will never have, and I havn't yet come to terms with this completely. I understand the case, but it's hard to comprehend sometimes.

And the second part about you saying that everyone has their hardships in life. I've thought about that myself. Some kids have devorced parents, some don't even have parents. This is my hardship and I deal with it when I'm awake every second that I live, and sometimes even when I'm sleeping.

I lead a confused life sometimes. I'm proud, but I'm also saddened. I'm cool though.

.LadyMarmalade.
07-20-2004, 04:52 AM
As I have just stated, your story has left me in tears. When I thought the story was done, I put my head down, trying to figure my thoughts out, because I have so much to say. Then I scrolled to the picture, and not only was I left breathless, I am also speechless. I have so much to say, but NO words to say them in, so my feelings will be left in my head, consealed.

-Evey-
07-20-2004, 10:06 PM
*Bringing this thread back to life*

*sorry gieve it went into Que* after a certain amount of threads posted. The board sends all the older ones into an "idel" setting.

Sorry For the inconvience.
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By the way...this story was really really good. Im sorry that you had experience what you did. But stuff like that only makes you stronger. Your father was a wonderful man, and he has a WONDERFUL son, who is a great writer.

Keep writing.

~~Dani

Mischieveus
07-21-2004, 02:33 PM
^ Thank you very much, DE, for reposting this for me and for the wonderful comments. I really appreciate them more than you'll ever know.

Mischieveus
08-13-2004, 04:04 PM
I'm just posting under this so that this thread doesn't get lost again.