I fucked this round up pretty bad, so this is sort of like a rematch...

16-28 lines
7 votes to win or 4-0 KO
check in by 11.59pm Wednesday 4th July GMT
verses due by 11.59pm Friday 6th July GMT
no feeding off verses
no biting/recycling (xdecent may use any or all of the verse he originally posted for this round)
no hate/crew/dickride/unexplained/stupid votes
failure to do your stipulation will result in your opponent being awarded 2 votes

voters will consider the stipulation before deciding a winner

YOUR STIPULATIONS:

1. At some point throughout your verse you must acrostically spell out your own name down the side of your verse.
i.e.
I'll take the win easy
Man you crazy to battle fa sheezy
Please dont tell me ya hopin to win
I'll kill you & ya kin
Smack this bitch til he's dead
Stuff leakin out his head
Eat this kid real quick
Dog you're really really shit

(except iller lol)

this can be at any point in your verse

2. You must have at least 3 personals/nameflips

3. You must use these five words somewhere in your verse:
- park
- resonate
- window
- optimum
- affinity

(put them in red or underline them or something)

Apart from these it's a regular battle

if you have any questions ask as soon as you can - the deadlines will not be extended.

good luck

Checkin in..................

..Yup yup..

And XDecent..


Who added me last nite sayin that if I say the n word on here again..
That i'll be removed..
PLEASE SHOW ME..Where I said it..


God better help you with this verse..

School Bus is another way of playin 52 Card pickup
He use to be in Tactical Concepts..Weak kid..
If you've seen Mario Winans CD..its called Hurt No More



Filthy fuck..has to visit the dentist always havin Fix in his yap
Idiot singin Dipset still wonderin WHO AM I..send the bitch to the back
X tattlin on Fix; ur cards arent ever up Id play this fool but..
Its simple we've all "dropped the Dec" like playin' "school bus"
Oh god..I stay wit a ghat to ur nose, poppin X kno wat a rippins bout
N' its sad cuz we only wanna hear X n' TC when we trippin out

GET EM..You aint a soldier like me niCCa..Notice there aint G's there..
U pussy..

I have optimum skill..at my level? no brains u must got a high heart
Cuz really your bars dont mean shit like when Im readin' a pie chart
Ur neck resonates..pummel ya chest leave ya love handles smashed in
Got no wins in the park..so you still tryna get Virt like mangled fat kids
Damn I cause havoc; smoke his chest in..restless then kill this fag
Ya 'BLOWs dont catch us' X..like ya 'lines were still in the bag'***
Fillin the mag..I'll choke ya neck u broken vet n' mangle thawts
Its funny X's stats D-Cent (Decend) like mishandled stocks..
You plan to walk..stare thru this window..ur worse n' poor
I got affinity wins-an' (Winans)..ur punches still wont 'hurt no more'*
.I lurch n' score..X D's MERKed, he gets ate watch this fairy's pleasure
Cuz e'eryone on RWs got X stomped like we jus found the buried treasure



Jump for joy bitch..
You jus got MERKed :mad:


***BLOW is Crack..his blows dont catch us..his punchs dont catch us..
so..his blows (cocaine) cant catch us..if they're still in the bag..lines of coke..


If you still dont get it..u are..retarded..
If you dont get shit, do...not..vote

For all the new kats.......

- Fixion works at tommy hilfigures where he rolls up outfits....haha gotcha!!

- He leads the crew MERK which stands for murdering every rapworlds krew, but sigh :o they havent merked any. lol!


Now die :mad:......




Xpose this vixens-disguise, a man?? hes a “racist bitch” who be sexin-up-guys
Didnt i ‘fix u once’ (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=26764), then u ducked me (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=27768&page=2) so now I’ll be “fixin (fixion)-em-thrice”
Ehh! he be mixin~up~spice, cuz his “lame lil beefs” generally lack-in-flavour
Clap-dis-fake-up, da only time u get vote is when cats return back-da-favour
End ya stack~of~paper like a rising-hike, ya hits deviatin like a licence plight*
Nukkah to defeat me ya need more accurate punches than a tyson-fight
To Hide~ya~dypies u dont need no under-pants cuz u need more balls than
a rumba-dance, son how u expect to win with bars like T.I’s rubber-bands **
u need ya mothers~hands to help ya spark-cigars, ya reps gonna fed like da
marks-of-scars, the only time this bitch “keys-up” is when he parks-a-car
n fuck~ya~bars they so weak Ima break em like surgeons dissect-da-specimen
when I straight-pick-on-em, da ‘after impact’ is heard like da effect-of-resonance
respect~ma~arrogance, da only time ur a man is when u atach ya dildo-modified
a kiddo-in-a-fight, he keeps ‘hangin’ on ma words, so shut em like windows-95
Ima~usa~ma~45 to uproot em from da hood cuz hes optimum fa spread-of-herbs
even ghetto-curbs were so fed up, he had to switch to net to “set-up-merk” ***
str8~up~served, ya butts-whack-n-terrible n u wish ya nutt-sacks-were-spherical
ya crews breaking up cuz u need more “affinity” than da fuckin-lab-chemicals
i like slappin~petty~gals like u who needs ta fist with a stick-to-fix-one (fixion)
feel da heat-of-friction, how da hell is he ‘real’ when he sticks-ta-fiction(fixion)
lick~ma~dick~son, ur so fuckin weak, to begin spittin u need a “pair-of-starter”
a starin gangster? rather call ya “crazy lil party gal” like “Aaron” Carter ****
u arent~smarter, when ya reps suffering ‘ups & downs’ like da stocks-in-mart
rip ya cock-apart, how u expect ya crew to be ‘illar’ when ya ‘dogs-depart’*****
ima stop~ya~heart n hit u like Israelis smack-a-jew, pack ya rhymes in ya bag
n send u back-to-skool n change ya name (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=27241&page=1&pp=10) bitch cuz u havent clapped-a-crew
yo slap~this~fool, in order to ‘top over me’ he needs his mommys-heel-slippers
ironically~i~figured, the only place he can “roll up” is da Tommy-Hilfigure’s



fuckn sonned...........:mad:


X-Decent mohafucka


==========================Explanations============ ===========

He ducked me in the earlier thread n technically i have already won this


holy fuck....my bad...i apologise man, you're right.....i coulda sworn it was 5 am the next day for some reason...uhh...yeah...congratulations then, you're the new playoff champ...

sorry once again...


^^^ so Im sonning him for the third time or thrice...haha


* Licence means a writers/lyricists deliberate deviation from the actual fact

** Rumba is a type of “ball” dance lol!, origin from cuba and T.I released a song rubber-band man n rubber bands stretch – get it?

*** The crew MERK fell down......then fixion started it again.

**** Aaron carter is a sissy pop artist who came out with a song “crazy lil party gal” n Aaron is Fixion’s real name haha

***** Elldawg left his crew MERK n yeah there was a rumour that dillar1 left it too













If u dont understand anything, pls dont dare ta vote
n yeah goodluck BITCH

:( dont sway...i hate deleting people's posts...

will vote on this later

Oh... I thought Fix no-showed... I'll vote when I get Back unlike Rosa Parks

Ayo WTF Im_Pissed.. you wana delete words?!! WTF you wana sig battle?

i dont speak retard, can i have that in english please? :p

now Will Someone Vote Or Wut?????

".I lurch n' score..X D's MERKed, he gets ate watch this fairy's pleasure
Cuz e'eryone on RWs got X stomped like we jus found the buried treasure"
^^^^Fav. line from Fixion....
Fixion: Most of your rap was ok, decent Rhymes, sum played, not alot of real HOTT lines, multis were ok, Flow was sumwat Difficult to follow, but overall was good


"u need ya mothers~hands to help ya spark-cigars, ya reps gonna fed like da
marks-of-scars, the only time this bitch “keys-up” is when he parks-a-car"
^^^^Fav. line from X.....
X: I think you came harder in generally every Cat. Flow was good, Multis were good too, Rhymes hit hard, an most of them were fire....

Overall Vote: X

~~~AbStRaKt~~~

...Do I know this dude..


Dont we usually do a vets only type shit??.

^^ yeah i understand

the vote stands
0-0

vets vote preferred
pls step in and vote
pz

nah anyone who explains well enough can vote...

if your both happy with it then leave it as 0-0

votes arent exactly abundant though...

cmon man get some voters in

thats the reason, i am tired of battling :(

..Pissed vote..


You said you were going to..

somebody voteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

somebody voteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

i'd vote but i cant since i'm in MERK...but good battle

Fixion quotables-
N' its sad cuz we only wanna hear X n' TC when we trippin out
pretty good wordplay/personal/punch

Ya 'BLOWs dont catch us' X..like ya 'lines were still in the bag'***
pretty nice wordplay/punch

Its funny X's stats D-Cent (Decend) like mishandled stocks
decent punch, but i've seen stock punched b4

Cuz e'eryone on RWs got X stomped like we jus found the buried treasure
nice closer and punch

you had a pretty solid verse, flowed well through in and through out, multis was on point pretty nice wordplay, some good personals and punches, creativitey and the use of words was well used....
Punches-3.5/5
Personals-3.5/5
Flow-4.5/5
Multis-4/5
Wordplay-3.5/5
Creativety-4/5
Use of words-4/5
Overall-27/35.....solid verse


X-Decent quotables-
Didnt i ‘fix u once’, then u ducked me so now I’ll be “fixin (fixion)-em-thrice”
nice personal

the only time this bitch “keys-up” is when he parks-a-car
pretty decent punch

ya crews breaking up cuz u need more “affinity” than da fuckin-lab-chemicals
nice personal/punch/good use of word

a starin gangster? rather call ya “crazy lil party gal” like “Aaron” Carter
lol nice name flip and wordplay...haha

how u expect ya crew to be ‘illar’ when ya ‘dogs-depart’
pretty nice personal

Pretty solid verse too, had a bit of fillers in theres, some of them jus petty disses rather than punches, too many name flips, kinda got old and non interesting...flowed really well mutlis was on point and feelin them too, had some nice personals, the one i laughed at and liked was his actual name not rw name...punches was nice and some decent wordplay
Punches-3.5/5
Personals-3/5
Flow-4.5/5
Multis-4/5
Wordplay-3/5
Creativety-4/5
Use of words-4/5
Overall-26/35...another solid verse

This was a really nice battle, really close, but i think fix took this jus by a smidge...he had better personals to me and the wordplay was a lil bit better to me, that was the deciding factor, big ups to both, nice battle...

Filthy fuck..has to visit the dentist always havin Fix in his yap
Idiot singin Dipset still wonderin WHO AM I..send the bitch to the back
^Aight opener.

X tattlin on Fix; ur cards arent ever up Id play this fool but..
Its simple we've all "dropped the Dec" like playin' "school bus"
^LOL. Pretty nice

Oh god..I stay wit a ghat to ur nose, poppin X kno wat a rippins bout
N' its sad cuz we only wanna hear X n' TC when we trippin out
^LOL. Nice

GET EM..You aint a soldier like me niCCa..Notice there aint G's there..
U pussy..

I have optimum skill..at my level? no brains u must got a high heart
Cuz really your bars dont mean shit like when Im readin' a pie chart
^^Nice

Ur neck resonates..pummel ya chest leave ya love handles smashed in
Got no wins in the park..so you still tryna get Virt like mangled fat kids
^LOL. Pretty nice. Had to think twice.

Damn I cause havoc; smoke his chest in..restless then kill this fag
Ya 'BLOWs dont catch us' X..like ya 'lines were still in the bag'***
^LOL. Nice line. Incorporated the drug slang.

Fillin the mag..I'll choke ya neck u broken vet n' mangle thawts
Its funny X's stats D-Cent (Decend) like mishandled stocks..
^It was aight

You plan to walk..stare thru this window..ur worse n' poor
I got affinity wins-an' (Winans)..ur punches still wont 'hurt no more'*
^^LOL

.I lurch n' score..X D's MERKed, he gets ate watch this fairy's pleasure
Cuz e'eryone on RWs got X stomped like we jus found the buried treasure
^^Good closer

Xpose this vixens-disguise, a man?? hes a “racist bitch” who be sexin-up-guys
Didnt i ‘fix u once’, then u ducked me so now I’ll be “fixin (fixion)-em-thrice”
^So so opener.

Ehh! he be mixin~up~spice, cuz his “lame lil beefs” generally lack-in-flavour
Clap-dis-fake-up, da only time u get vote is when cats return back-da-favour
^LOL. Pretty good

End ya stack~of~paper like a rising-hike, ya hits deviatin like a licence plight*
Nukkah to defeat me ya need more accurate punches than a tyson-fight
^Nah. That's aight. But filler.

To Hide~ya~dypies u dont need no under-pants cuz u need more balls than
a rumba-dance, son how u expect to win with bars like T.I’s rubber-bands **
^I ain't feeling it

u need ya mothers~hands to help ya spark-cigars, ya reps gonna fed like da
marks-of-scars, the only time this bitch “keys-up” is when he parks-a-car
^^LOL. PRetty good

n fuck~ya~bars they so weak Ima break em like surgeons dissect-da-specimen
when I straight-pick-on-em, da ‘after impact’ is heard like da effect-of-resonance
^^Filler

respect~ma~arrogance, da only time ur a man is when u atach ya dildo-modified
a kiddo-in-a-fight, he keeps ‘hangin’ on ma words, so shut em like windows-95
^^Nah

Ima~usa~ma~45 to uproot em from da hood cuz hes optimum fa spread-of-herbs
even ghetto-curbs were so fed up, he had to switch to net to “set-up-merk” ***
^Nah

str8~up~served, ya butts-whack-n-terrible n u wish ya nutt-sacks-were-spherical
ya crews breaking up cuz u need more “affinity” than da fuckin-lab-chemicals
^LOL

i like slappin~petty~gals like u who needs ta fist with a stick-to-fix-one (fixion)
feel da heat-of-friction, how da hell is he ‘real’ when he sticks-ta-fiction(fixion)
^I used a real/fiction line on him previously, so has many others.

lick~ma~dick~son, ur so fuckin weak, to begin spittin u need a “pair-of-starter”
a starin gangster? rather call ya “crazy lil party gal” like “Aaron” Carter ****
^nah. I get the fact you were going on his name, but Nah.

u arent~smarter, when ya reps suffering ‘ups & downs’ like da stocks-in-mart
rip ya cock-apart, how u expect ya crew to be ‘illar’ when ya ‘dogs-depart’*****
^Thanks for shouting me out. Good personal

ima stop~ya~heart n hit u like Israelis smack-a-jew, pack ya rhymes in ya bag
n send u back-to-skool n change ya name bitch cuz u havent clapped-a-crew
^Filler

yo slap~this~fool, in order to ‘top over me’ he needs his mommys-heel-slippers
ironically~i~figured, the only place he can “roll up” is da Tommy-Hilfigure’s
^^LOL. Good closer.

Punches: Fix
Personals: XD
Wordplay: Tie
Flow: Fix
Multies: XD(although some were pointless)

VOTE: Fixion

Although your verse was pretty good, XD, you didn't come hard enough to become a site champion. I mean, you had some good lines. But they were outweighed by the filler. Just work on packing less filler, and you'll be aight.

...2-0


Uppin..

Its all good.............
2-0 fix

Wow....

Punches: decent
multies: decent
personals: decent
Wordplay: decent
Flow: decent

vote - decent

This battle was completely 1 sided. Those other 2 votes are obviously crew dickride / hate and made no sense whatsoever , this was a landslide. Aside from the fact that both had some filler I didnt like in the "vertically spell your MC name thing" Decent ripped this man easy...his multies were less forced and helped flow , his werdplay was more concise and funnier. His punches/ personals hit WAYYYY HARDER ...

thas my view upon things

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Hmm..


Ur in AP..

So 2-1..

Uppin..

Fixion
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Filthy fuck..has to visit the dentist always havin Fix in his yap
Idiot singin Dipset still wonderin WHO AM I..send the bitch to the back
first line was a good opener..second line disappointing
X tattlin on Fix; ur cards arent ever up Id play this fool but..
Its simple we've all "dropped the Dec" like playin' "school bus"
Ok..i noticed nameplays are getting gay on this site now (playing off random letters or parts of the name..or forcing shit..u dont pronounce it "X-Deckent"....) but it was good for what it was
Oh god..I stay wit a ghat to ur nose, poppin X kno wat a rippins bout
N' its sad cuz we only wanna hear X n' TC when we trippin out
second line's nameplay was gay.. ecstacy doesn't have the letter "n" nor that sound in the middle of the word..really gay when u think about it

GET EM..You aint a soldier like me niCCa..Notice there aint G's there..
U pussy..
Same shit different laxative...Nicca MEANS Nigga..

I have optimum skill..at my level? no brains u must got a high heart
Cuz really your bars dont mean shit like when Im readin' a pie chart
the fuck?@first line.. second line stupid..bars have nothing to do with pie charts unless they are part of a key that explains what each portion of the pie chart represents, in which case the bars would 'mean shit'
Ur neck resonates..pummel ya chest leave ya love handles smashed in
Got no wins in the park..so you still tryna get Virt like mangled fat kids
ok..a step up from the previous bars..both lines straight
Damn I cause havoc; smoke his chest in..restless then kill this fag
Ya 'BLOWs dont catch us' X..like ya 'lines were still in the bag'***
probably ur best bar, but could have been worded WAY better...and u don't even have a multi, oddly enough
Fillin the mag..I'll choke ya neck u broken vet n' mangle thawts
Its funny X's stats D-Cent (Decend) like mishandled stocks..
Your second best..nameplay actually sensible
You plan to walk..stare thru this window..ur worse n' poor
I got affinity wins-an' (Winans)..ur punches still wont 'hurt no more'*
complete garbage..first line was terrible, second line made me sick. Wins-an and Winans sound NOTHING alike...and i dont think u know what affinity means..ur second "r&b/hip-pop song" wordplay bullshit, those are gay..no creativity..theres so many songs in existence that these dont even require thinking or skill, just look at a song title and write some bullshit
.I lurch n' score..X D's MERKed, he gets ate watch this fairy's pleasure
Cuz e'eryone on RWs got X stomped like we jus found the buried treasure
should've been worded so muchbetter..another X nameplay...it was ok

Poor, poor verse...i don't know what happened..you either rushed it or figured that u could put out some trash and still beat this dude but either way this was pitiful...not even CLOSE to what you're capable of..

XDecent
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Xpose this vixens-disguise, a man?? hes a “racist bitch” who be sexin-up-guys
Didnt i ‘fix u once’, then u ducked me so now I’ll be “fixin (fixion)-em-thrice”
ok personal..sexin doesn't rhyme with fixin nor vixen............
Ehh! he be mixin~up~spice, cuz his “lame lil beefs” generally lack-in-flavour
Clap-dis-fake-up, da only time u get vote is when cats return back-da-favour
i actually liked this..seems original..ur lines have horrible wording though
End ya stack~of~paper like a rising-hike, ya hits deviatin like a licence plight*
Nukkah to defeat me ya need more accurate punches than a tyson-fight
stupid..stupid...wtf..have u ever seen a tyson fight?
To Hide~ya~dypies u dont need no under-pants cuz u need more balls than
a rumba-dance, son how u expect to win with bars like T.I’s rubber-bands **
smmfh@"dypies"..and what happened to ur lines here? dropping the end of the first down to the second to make ur lines seem more even in length? clever if u had rhymed before u dropped the ending down..now it looks stupid.. the stretched bars thing was ok, even though this one was stretched.....
u need ya mothers~hands to help ya spark-cigars, ya reps gonna fed like da
marks-of-scars, the only time this bitch “keys-up” is when he parks-a-car
stupid ass first line (and u dropped down again)..second line childish
n fuck~ya~bars they so weak Ima break em like surgeons dissect-da-specimen
when I straight-pick-on-em, da ‘after impact’ is heard like da effect-of-resonance
wtf@straight-pick-on-em marked as a multi? u can't be that desperate.. decent bar
respect~ma~arrogance, da only time ur a man is when u atach ya dildo-modified
a kiddo-in-a-fight, he keeps ‘hangin’ on ma words, so shut em like windows-95
stupid as fuck
Ima~usa~ma~45 to uproot em from da hood cuz hes optimum fa spread-of-herbs
even ghetto-curbs were so fed up, he had to switch to net to “set-up-merk” ***
ok..a "you're not gangsta" line which are always gay since we're on the damn internet..but ok personal attempt
str8~up~served, ya butts-whack-n-terrible n u wish ya nutt-sacks-were-spherical
ya crews breaking up cuz u need more “affinity” than da fuckin-lab-chemicals
i like how u think "straight" and "set" rhyme.. ok second line
i like slappin~petty~gals like u who needs ta fist with a stick-to-fix-one (fixion)
feel da heat-of-friction, how da hell is he ‘real’ when he sticks-ta-fiction(fixion)
'heat' and 'stick' rhyme perfectly..fuckin jackass..and 'slappin petty gals' is marked as a multi for what reason? and why the fuck did u rhyme the same thing twice?!? nameplay in the second line is so played its not even funny
lick~ma~dick~son, ur so fuckin weak, to begin spittin u need a “pair-of-starter”
a starin gangster? rather call ya “crazy lil party gal” like “Aaron” Carter ****
gay as fuck..so so gay..
u arent~smarter, when ya reps suffering ‘ups & downs’ like da stocks-in-mart
rip ya cock-apart, how u expect ya crew to be ‘illar’ when ya ‘dogs-depart’*****
how do u pronounce "aren't"? say it out loud real quick...does it sound anything like "Aaron" or "pair of"? didn't think so. Nice personal in this line..good bar
ima stop~ya~heart n hit u like Israelis smack-a-jew, pack ya rhymes in ya bag
n send u back-to-skool n change ya name bitch cuz u havent clapped-a-crew
gay..n again with the retarded structure in this bar
yo slap~this~fool, in order to ‘top over me’ he needs his mommys-heel-slippers
ironically~i~figured, the only place he can “roll up” is da Tommy-Hilfigure’s
HOW THE FUCK DOES "Ironically I figured" RHYME WITH FUCKIN "Tommy Hilfigger" OR "mommy's heel slippers"?!? my God... good bar though i guess..

I don't know what to say..some of your "multies" are a fuckin joke..but u fuck up so much it's past the point of being funny and is just upsetting and annoying. You can't possibly be that slow..just say it out loud..the shit you're saying doesn't rhyme half of the time.. You had a few decent bars that had some personals...and the 'get a vote/ returnin the favor' line was nice..

Punches - decent had more, Fix's were slightly better.. Fixion, barely
Personals - X Decent
Multies - X Decent..sadly..had way more and had better ones even though some made me sick..fix's multies were extremely basic and boring..
Wordplay - Fixion
Originality - umm..X Decent
Consistency - Fixion..both were weak, but fix was consistently weak..decent was weak then horrible then weak then horrible
Enjoyment - None..reading this battle actually put me in a bad mood (as u can see by reading my comments..)

You guys made a joke of the finals, and the play offs with this battle.. fixion i dont even know what to say..u came weak as fuck..like u weren't even trying, even though it's the championship battle.. X Decent u came better than usual, but u still have a long long way to go..but ur elevating, at least...but you really had no place in the finals..luckily for you Fixion performed poorly and made this battle close.

Vote - Fixion

Sorry for not sugar-coating..u can cry yourselves to sleep if I offended you

I just dont understand, i just dont fucking understand.....

anyways 3-1. fix

Fixion:
Its simple we've all "dropped the Dec" like playin' "school bus"
^^ Pretty Cool

Ya 'BLOWs dont catch us' X..like ya 'lines were still in the bag'***
^^ Nice Creativity... COuld've been worded a little Better

Cuz e'eryone on RWs got X stomped like we jus found the buried treasure
^^ Okay...

Xdecent:

Clap-dis-fake-up, da only time u get vote is when cats return back-da-favour
^^ Okay.. kind of Nice

marks-of-scars, the only time this bitch “keys-up” is when he parks-a-car
^^ Could be worded differently but "ok"

how u expect ya crew to be ‘illar’ when ya ‘dogs-depart’*****
^^ LoL... Straight Personal

ironically~i~figured, the only place he can “roll up” is da Tommy-Hilfigure’s
^^ Okay...

Stipulation: Fixion
Delivery: Fixion... Lot Less Forced Multis
Personals: XDecent
Creativity: Xdecent
Punches: Xdecent
Consistency: Fixion
Enjoyed: Xdecent
Vote: Xdecent

Rationale: Fix had forced wordplay such as the "wins-an".. That Line didn't work at all... The X D-Cent Line was Horrible same with X n' TC...

Xdecent had forced multis but his punches I felt were better plus more personals help...

I should have been Here... I would have Killed one of you... :mad:

..3-2...Uppin

finally an honest vote....OMG
thanx man

2-3 X
pz

aye Yo Someone Vote

Its 2-3 X

Step Up!!!!!!!!

Filthy fuck..has to visit the dentist always havin Fix in his yap
Idiot singin Dipset still wonderin WHO AM I..send the bitch to the back

first line was aight as far as plays on one's own name go...second was blah...and the rhyme wasnt part of the punchline..looks forced..

X tattlin on Fix; ur cards arent ever up Id play this fool but..
Its simple we've all "dropped the Dec" like playin' "school bus"

good linkage...the 'dec' part of his name doesnt sound like deck though...forced wordplay..

Oh god..I stay wit a ghat to ur nose, poppin X kno wat a rippins bout
N' its sad cuz we only wanna hear X n' TC when we trippin out

way forced...on both flips...and "Oh God" didnt fit well at all into the bar...

I have optimum skill..at my level? no brains u must got a high heart
Cuz really your bars dont mean shit like when Im readin' a pie chart

meehh...bar wordplay....and it coulda been worded better...

Ur neck resonates..pummel ya chest leave ya love handles smashed in
Got no wins in the park..so you still tryna get Virt like mangled fat kids

I dont think you know what resonates means...the second line was aight...decent..

Damn I cause havoc; smoke his chest in..restless then kill this fag
Ya 'BLOWs dont catch us' X..like ya 'lines were still in the bag'***

okay wordplay....needed another sylable between kill & fag to get the multi out..

Fillin the mag..I'll choke ya neck u broken vet n' mangle thawts
Its funny X's stats D-Cent (Decend) like mishandled stocks..

a little iffy on the decent/decend thing...whole thing needed to be worded better...

You plan to walk..stare thru this window..ur worse n' poor
I got affinity wins-an' (Winans)..ur punches still wont 'hurt no more'*

terrible...prolly ur worst...wins an' sounds nothing like winans...maybe if youd said I'll win an' - without the s....but even then its mario wine-ans...wine doesnt sound like win....and affity is misused...your thinking of infinity...

I lurch n' score..X D's MERKed, he gets ate watch this fairy's pleasure
Cuz e'eryone on RWs got X stomped like we jus found the buried treasure

ehh...dunno about stomped....maybe something like 'no-one's diggin X til they find buried treasure'....and even then...X wordplay is way overused...

overall this was very disapointing.....you coulda come way harder....for a tourney final especially...and even more so when you'd been given a second chance for it, really... i was very dissapointed with this..

Xpose this vixens-disguise, a man?? hes a “racist bitch” who be sexin-up-guys
Didnt i ‘fix u once’, then u ducked me so now I’ll be “fixin (fixion)-em-thrice”

fixin'/fixion...not quite...and it's not enough to use your opponents name for wordplay, you gotta make a diss out of that wordplay...like for example you coulda said fixi(o)n ducks like a vet does...or something..

Ehh! he be mixin~up~spice, cuz his “lame lil beefs” generally lack-in-flavour
Clap-dis-fake-up, da only time u get vote is when cats return back-da-favour

ehh was forced to get the acrostic out...first line was aight...second was quite decent...well worded for a simple punch...but the delivery made it effective..this was one of your best bars...

End ya stack~of~paper like a rising-hike, ya hits deviatin like a licence plight*
Nukkah to defeat me ya need more accurate punches than a tyson-fight

harder punches maybe...first line was better than the second, shoulda flipped it...second line was blah...

To Hide~ya~dypies u dont need no under-pants cuz u need more balls than
a rumba-dance, son how u expect to win with bars like T.I’s rubber-bands **

two balls would be enough for a guy i should think...the rumba dance wordplay was blah...T.I.'s was irrelevant...bars stretch like rubber bands woulda done....'twas ok...

u need ya mothers~hands to help ya spark-cigars, ya reps gonna fed like da
marks-of-scars, the only time this bitch “keys-up” is when he parks-a-car

"keys" stuff is played...

n fuck~ya~bars they so weak Ima break em like surgeons dissect-da-specimen
when I straight-pick-on-em, da ‘after impact’ is heard like da effect-of-resonance

decent attempt at wordplay around a word i gave you...coulda been better, but you get points for not just inserting the word randomly into the verse...dont mark stuff as multis that arent though..

respect~ma~arrogance, da only time ur a man is when u atach ya dildo-modified
a kiddo-in-a-fight, he keeps ‘hangin’ on ma words, so shut em like windows-95

ehh...and all of the rhymes are off...

Ima~usa~ma~45 to uproot em from da hood cuz hes optimum fa spread-of-herbs
even ghetto-curbs were so fed up, he had to switch to net to “set-up-merk” ***

meehhh...okaaaay...again with the marking words that dont rhyme though..

str8~up~served, ya butts-whack-n-terrible n u wish ya nutt-sacks-were-spherical
ya crews breaking up cuz u need more “affinity” than da fuckin-lab-chemicals

this was decent...again with actually using a word i gave you....and flipped as a personal...why would he wish his nut sack is spherical though? dont use filler that makes no sense to get out multis...second line was good though..

i like slappin~petty~gals like u who needs ta fist with a stick-to-fix-one (fixion)
feel da heat-of-friction, how da hell is he ‘real’ when he sticks-ta-fiction(fixion)

nup...fake/fixion is old and you rhymed the same thing twice...

lick~ma~dick~son, ur so fuckin weak, to begin spittin u need a “pair-of-starter”
a starin gangster? rather call ya “crazy lil party gal” like “Aaron” Carter ****

again, just cuz his name is in it doesnt mean it's wordplay...you gotta do omething with it..

u arent~smarter, when ya reps suffering ‘ups & downs’ like da stocks-in-mart
rip ya cock-apart, how u expect ya crew to be ‘illar’ when ya ‘dogs-depart’*****

simple but decent...

ima stop~ya~heart n hit u like Israelis smack-a-jew, pack ya rhymes in ya bag
n send u back-to-skool n change ya name bitch cuz u havent clapped-a-crew

ok...coulda been worded better to come across harder....

yo slap~this~fool, in order to ‘top over me’ he needs his mommys-heel-slippers
ironically~i~figured, the only place he can “roll up” is da Tommy-Hilfigure’s

good personal concept...you need to play off something more though....not being able to roll up isnt quite a diss...

overall...you're getting better...still got a bit to go...verse was good for you, but not tourney final material...

overall I'm gunna go with xdecent by a little...he did the stipulations better - using two of five words decently to form a punch concpet instead of inserting them randomly into the verse (and he at least tried with the others) - his rhyme schemes were slightly better even though a lot of multis were forced, or not multis...he simply had more....content wise...although he also had some forced shit or stuff that didnt work...he used more simple but decent concepts, or kinda played shit as opposed to the majority of fixions lines which just didnt work....

close-ish...

but i vote for xdecent

3-3

thanx homie
3-3.....

..Heh..


Uppin..

Filthy fuck..has to visit the dentist always havin Fix in his yap
Idiot singin Dipset still wonderin WHO AM I..send the bitch to the back
ehhh... not feelin it
X tattlin on Fix; ur cards arent ever up Id play this fool but..
Its simple we've all "dropped the Dec" like playin' "school bus"
nice nameplay
Oh god..I stay wit a ghat to ur nose, poppin X kno wat a rippins bout
N' its sad cuz we only wanna hear X n' TC when we trippin out
didnt make 1 lick of sense... no punch at all..
I have optimum skill..at my level? no brains u must got a high heart
Cuz really your bars dont mean shit like when Im readin' a pie chart
weak
Ur neck resonates..pummel ya chest leave ya love handles smashed in
Got no wins in the park..so you still tryna get Virt like mangled fat kids
ehhh... wordplay was off... ite personal
Damn I cause havoc; smoke his chest in..restless then kill this fag
Ya 'BLOWs dont catch us' X..like ya 'lines were still in the bag'***
ehhh.....pretty complex... but... this was ite
Fillin the mag..I'll choke ya neck u broken vet n' mangle thawts
Its funny X's stats D-Cent (Decend) like mishandled stocks..
decent wordplay...nice punch
You plan to walk..stare thru this window..ur worse n' poor
I got affinity wins-an' (Winans)..ur punches still wont 'hurt no more'*
nice...
.I lurch n' score..X D's MERKed, he gets ate watch this fairy's pleasure
Cuz e'eryone on RWs got X stomped like we jus found the buried treasure
ehhh.. wordplay was kinda off... decent punch


Xpose this vixens-disguise, a man?? hes a “racist bitch” who be sexin-up-guys
Didnt i ‘fix u once’, then u ducked me so now I’ll be “fixin (fixion)-em-thrice”
multies were waaaayy off.... nice personals..
Ehh! he be mixin~up~spice, cuz his “lame lil beefs” generally lack-in-flavour
Clap-dis-fake-up, da only time u get vote is when cats return back-da-favour
lol.... this had me laughin
End ya stack~of~paper like a rising-hike, ya hits deviatin like a licence plight*
Nukkah to defeat me ya need more accurate punches than a tyson-fight
tyson concepts are plaaaaayed
To Hide~ya~dypies u dont need no under-pants cuz u need more balls than
a rumba-dance, son how u expect to win with bars like T.I’s rubber-bands **
ehhhh..no
u need ya mothers~hands to help ya spark-cigars, ya reps gonna fed like da
marks-of-scars, the only time this bitch “keys-up” is when he parks-a-car
lol..nice wordplay
n fuck~ya~bars they so weak Ima break em like surgeons dissect-da-specimen
when I straight-pick-on-em, da ‘after impact’ is heard like da effect-of-resonance
no
respect~ma~arrogance, da only time ur a man is when u atach ya dildo-modified
a kiddo-in-a-fight, he keeps ‘hangin’ on ma words, so shut em like windows-95
blah..... didnt make 1 bit of sense
Ima~usa~ma~45 to uproot em from da hood cuz hes optimum fa spread-of-herbs
even ghetto-curbs were so fed up, he had to switch to net to “set-up-merk” ***
hmm...ite..
str8~up~served, ya butts-whack-n-terrible n u wish ya nutt-sacks-were-spherical
ya crews breaking up cuz u need more “affinity” than da fuckin-lab-chemicals
blah..
i like slappin~petty~gals like u who needs ta fist with a stick-to-fix-one (fixion)
feel da heat-of-friction, how da hell is he ‘real’ when he sticks-ta-fiction(fixion)
lol...2 nameplays in the same bar?... not feelin it
lick~ma~dick~son, ur so fuckin weak, to begin spittin u need a “pair-of-starter”
a starin gangster? rather call ya “crazy lil party gal” like “Aaron” Carter ****
no..not feelin it
u arent~smarter, when ya reps suffering ‘ups & downs’ like da stocks-in-mart
rip ya cock-apart, how u expect ya crew to be ‘illar’ when ya ‘dogs-depart’*****
nice personals....
ima stop~ya~heart n hit u like Israelis smack-a-jew, pack ya rhymes in ya bag
n send u back-to-skool n change ya name bitch cuz u havent clapped-a-crew
lol... real ice personal
yo slap~this~fool, in order to ‘top over me’ he needs his mommys-heel-slippers
ironically~i~figured, the only place he can “roll up” is da Tommy-Hilfigure’s
lol.... decent personal


ok...

wordplay: decent
punches: tie
multies: fix
personals: decent
flow: tie

vote: decent

better personals.... most of his wordplay wasnt near as forced as fix's.... pretty close battle.. but weaaaak as fuck...

hmmmmmmmmm

4-3 ma way i guess.


yo fix its gonna take a long time.......just gimme da win :)

..I'll give you the win when I see ur skill..

Which I still dont..

yeah its really strange

peeps there call u WEAKEST FIXION in the B.A
yeah iam telling the truth

no B.S

anyway its 4-3 me.......

..What are you blabbing about??


I dont care what ppl CALL ME..


I know where my skill stands..and if you want me to come HARD..
I can..

Jus move on child, when you do some of the shit I have..
Then speak to me..

^^wow u sounded so different few days back


n now.........psstt
ur just like a female
double faced

..Ur the one cherpin like you deserve the W..


You're not better than me..jus face that..

Both of you shut up. Neither one of you dropped like you're supposed to be here. And don't give me that I don't battle excuse Aaron. Why would you sign up for a battle tourney if you don't battle?

..Jus seeing if I still had it..


I couldnt give two shits about this battle tourney..

It was run horribly..

And shutup Dez, all I get is grief from you..SHUTUP..

wtf?????

fixion, that win thingy - i was just joking about that i wasnt serious at all............
n u were just friendly to me, cuz u wanted me to accept ya friend's votes.
n after its been done - u dont even know me
WOW!!!!

n dillar1 wut the..

oh well forget it..........
this argument is over

..Im not being a dick with you


Stop taking shit personally..chill out kid..

..Jus seeing if I still had it..


I couldnt give two shits about this battle tourney..

It was run horribly..

And shutup Dez, all I get is grief from you..SHUTUP..


Smh... The Tourney was designed to run smoothly, effectively, and with the stipulations, be the most creative tourney...

It was run well but people didn't show... Now we're left with you two and you're wack verses... :(

Let The Voting Commence and quit Freeposting

..

Uhhmm


Shut the fuck up??.

It was run well but people didn't show... Now we're left with you two and you're wack verses... :(

^^^exactly thas y u r mad at me.....n ur saying shit like

"sign in to step out"

hoe showing n then getting mad - wut the fuck!!!

dont blame ya whack verse on me fixion....i fucked this round up but if i hadnt you woulda been dq'd for no-showing....it worked to your advantage...

..I aint even gonna respond to you..

^^ wuddup 2 faced bitch :(


uppin for some votes here.......

..Theres a difference between 2 faced and knowing where I stand


Youngsta..

^^ aye shut up!!

VOTES...........

hmmmmmmmm can i vote on this????


otherwise hav fun trying to get 1 more honest vote on this ish....

This ish is confusing...

yeah anyone can vote........
must be explained tho.

[QUOTE=Fu~Shun]hmmmmmmmm can i vote on this????


[QUOTE]

yes you most definately can...just make sure you explain why you're voting for who you are and refer to the verses somewhat in your explanation...

a well explained vote would be a much appreciated

SOMEONE VOTE UP








the score is 4-3 ma way
should have been 5-2 but oh well sympathy votes......:o

".I lurch n' score..X D's MERKed, he gets ate watch this fairy's pleasure
Cuz e'eryone on RWs got X stomped like we jus found the buried treasure"
^^^^Fav. line from Fixion....
Fixion: Most of your rap was ok, decent Rhymes, sum played, not alot of real HOTT lines, multis were ok, Flow was sumwat Difficult to follow, but overall was good


"u need ya mothers~hands to help ya spark-cigars, ya reps gonna fed like da
marks-of-scars, the only time this bitch “keys-up” is when he parks-a-car"
^^^^Fav. line from X.....
X: I think you came harder in generally every Cat. Flow was good, Multis were good too, Rhymes hit hard, an most of them were fire....

Overall Vote: X


Ya'll remember my vote....hmmm...if ya want a vote so bad...why didnt accept it....I HAVE NO CLUE WHY.......???....Accept it if ya want...if not...dont care....juss tryna help you out

SOMEONE VOTE UP








the score is 4-3 ma way
should have been 5-2 but oh well sympathy votes......:o


..Please battle me for real..


Cuz I will destroy you..

you want me ta battle you....??? WTF well I never turn down a battle.....ummm....Set it an spit...I'll git bak to you....

^^ he wasnt talking to u i guess

n yeah yer votes counts, since it was explained......

5-3 ma way...................

..Yay you win..




You should feel proud..

need two more votes to win

HURRY UP!!!

..Im lost..
I thought u won already..

its 7 votes to win smart one...this will still need voting by time the next tourney is done and over with...

Fixion

Filthy fuck..has to visit the dentist always havin Fix in his yap
Idiot singin Dipset still wonderin WHO AM I..send the bitch to the back
not feelin it
X tattlin on Fix; ur cards arent ever up Id play this fool but..
Its simple we've all "dropped the Dec" like playin' "school bus"
nice nameplay
Oh god..I stay wit a ghat to ur nose, poppin X kno wat a rippins bout
N' its sad cuz we only wanna hear X n' TC when we trippin out
average....
I have optimum skill..at my level? no brains u must got a high heart
Cuz really your bars dont mean shit like when Im readin' a pie chart
weak......u know this
Ur neck resonates..pummel ya chest leave ya love handles smashed in
Got no wins in the park..so you still tryna get Virt like mangled fat kids
ok personal
Damn I cause havoc; smoke his chest in..restless then kill this fag
Ya 'BLOWs dont catch us' X..like ya 'lines were still in the bag'***
aight punch
Fillin the mag..I'll choke ya neck u broken vet n' mangle thawts
Its funny X's stats D-Cent (Decend) like mishandled stocks..
nice punch...aight w'play
You plan to walk..stare thru this window..ur worse n' poor
I got affinity wins-an' (Winans)..ur punches still wont 'hurt no more'*
good punch.....
.I lurch n' score..X D's MERKed, he gets ate watch this fairy's pleasure
Cuz e'eryone on RWs got X stomped like we jus found the buried treasure
decent punch...w'play wasnt feelin
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X-Decent


Xpose this vixens-disguise, a man?? hes a “racist bitch” who be sexin-up-guys
Didnt i ‘fix u once’, then u ducked me so now I’ll be “fixin (fixion)-em-thrice”
nice personals...multis???
Ehh! he be mixin~up~spice, cuz his “lame lil beefs” generally lack-in-flavour
Clap-dis-fake-up, da only time u get vote is when cats return back-da-favour
good punch
End ya stack~of~paper like a rising-hike, ya hits deviatin like a licence plight*
Nukkah to defeat me ya need more accurate punches than a tyson-fight
played...x u know tyson ish is played..
To Hide~ya~dypies u dont need no under-pants cuz u need more balls than
a rumba-dance, son how u expect to win with bars like T.I’s rubber-bands **
not feeling
u need ya mothers~hands to help ya spark-cigars, ya reps gonna fed like da
marks-of-scars, the only time this bitch “keys-up” is when he parks-a-car
nice wordplay
n fuck~ya~bars they so weak Ima break em like surgeons dissect-da-specimen
when I straight-pick-on-em, da ‘after impact’ is heard like da effect-of-resonance
not feelin
respect~ma~arrogance, da only time ur a man is when u atach ya dildo-modified
a kiddo-in-a-fight, he keeps ‘hangin’ on ma words, so shut em like windows-95
could have been worded better
Ima~usa~ma~45 to uproot em from da hood cuz hes optimum fa spread-of-herbs
even ghetto-curbs were so fed up, he had to switch to net to “set-up-merk” ***
aight..not bad...
str8~up~served, ya butts-whack-n-terrible n u wish ya nutt-sacks-were-spherical
ya crews breaking up cuz u need more “affinity” than da fuckin-lab-chemicals
average..
i like slappin~petty~gals like u who needs ta fist with a stick-to-fix-one (fixion)
feel da heat-of-friction, how da hell is he ‘real’ when he sticks-ta-fiction(fixion)
hmmmmm this was aight..the fiction ish is played even i know that

lick~ma~dick~son, ur so fuckin weak, to begin spittin u need a “pair-of-starter”
a starin gangster? rather call ya “crazy lil party gal” like “Aaron” Carter ****
aight....
u arent~smarter, when ya reps suffering ‘ups & downs’ like da stocks-in-mart
rip ya cock-apart, how u expect ya crew to be ‘illar’ when ya ‘dogs-depart’*****
nice personals....
ima stop~ya~heart n hit u like Israelis smack-a-jew, pack ya rhymes in ya bag
n send u back-to-skool n change ya name bitch cuz u havent clapped-a-crew
nice personal
yo slap~this~fool, in order to ‘top over me’ he needs his mommys-heel-slippers
ironically~i~figured, the only place he can “roll up” is da Tommy-Hilfigure’s
decent personal
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wordplay: decent
punches: tie
multies: fix
personals: decent
flow: tie

vote: decent

Reason: Reading over this a few times....x's finishing few lines is what sealed my decision....X some of your multi's were non-exsistant n mismatched...both were inconsistant with connecting punches...

^^ aite thanx mayne

its 6-3 ma way........

just 1 more vote :)

unfortunately, i have to agree with some of the preceding votes....Fix...you didnt come as hard as you usually do....plus some of the lines (nameplays) were forced, and/or didnt work........thats what made your verse a lot less appealing than what it should be....

Decent...don't think that u are ill.....ya verse was average.....a lot of played concepts.....some of the nameplays and personals were aight......but the rest of it was either filler or trash.......the only reason why you got this win is because of the subpar drop by Fix......there should be a rematch..........


in anycase.....


Decent grabs this one....

yay! its over!

Congrats to xdecent, the new playoff champ

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