RULES

votes - must be sufficiently explained.. any bland votes lacking reason or analysis will be disqualified immediately. No dickryding or Hating. 3-0 = TKO or First to 5 votes Any one is free to vote - as long as votes are well explained. Verses must be 15-20 lines

deadlines i will post a date for each battle where verses are due - there will also be a signing in date to avoid no-shows. Any body failing to meet the deadline will be disqualified.

Biting-any biting of lyrics or material will result in immediate disqualification - if other cats see examples of this, please report it but with evidence to back it up

sign in by Monday
verses by Tuesday

...let's wrap this up

*signs in*

signs in....gosh, cant the deadline for verses be Wednesday??? I do got a life

Illest, I would have given you each 2 days but this tourney has gone on for too long....let's wrap it up.

Divine...stop free posting in this thread.....RESPECT THEIR BATTLE.
I deleted that thread with you & Illest......you can't just try to bum rush the tourney. Chill out...the next tourney starts on Wednesday.....your in it....in the mean time, get your battle flows ready.

Ms. Mack, just let us drop our verses by Wednesday. You tryin to rush things and s***. If we got 2 days before, just give us 2 days now. All Im askin.


Peace

You have until Wenesday Illest....the other tourney will start on Thursday night

thanx man




Peace

how about yall share the crown...and we get the tourney started...this is taking wayyyyyy to long...sorry Ms Mack...

I dont wanna drop mine tomorrow if Moses dont drop.....that'll be a waste of a verse. Moses you still in this??? Haven't heard from you in a while

as the clock ticks away...tick...tick...tick...another day is lost

Moses is still in this man...why don't you post first? You're the one who wanted extra time anyway? Let's get this poppin'

Yes I'm still in this. What the fuck are you thinkin'? I'll post later tonight.

P.S. This is not the way a real site would run. Goin through tournaments this quick.

be patient.....niggaz also got a real life.....Im fin to post soon anyway.....I think Moses wants me to post first so he can use my rhymes against me....oh well....if he plays like that, nothin I can do since it doesn't say it in the rules

hat the fuck, it's MC Such-n-Such
Can't even call you by your name cause you don't live up/
MC Condom Spit a.k.a DonUwit
Had no idea this the shit I'd BombUwit/
Try to grip the mic in my presence, but your palms would slip
Saw the bulge in my jeans, asked if he could fondle it/
Thought you had a chance, you must be loco
Read my rhymes, thought I was black,went coocoo for cocoa/
You so on Nas' nuts, you got pubes on your face
Your rhymes suck, stick to moderatin boy, stay in your place/
My Griff alread gave you the real meanin' of M.O.D.
So why you think you could battle either him or me/
your location's fake cause the only hood you rep is the one on your sweater
Next time let me write your verse, that's the only way you'll do better/
Afraid to claim where you're from, chances are slim and none
I had this tourny locked since day one, you're fake SON/
That's why the GODS don't claim you
they're too ashamed to/
Your team traded you and payed your salary
So me owning you was just a fucking formality/

oh...you went already....well im bout to spit after I finish this paper im doing, from the looks of it...nice rhymes

aight, im ready. but my rhymes been slackin.....ok, no escuses


Yo, check it

The end is near, It's like Terminator 3 for Moses
Black roses on ya grave, lost future, ya rhymes are bogus
It's Y2K all over, you and ya pussies tremblin in fear
Lights out faker, Hell awaits you, nigga grab ya gear
choose a new career, I prophetcize you goin fail in this game
Along with ya hoes, Skyline, Flowz, and them other lames
Ya'll play cheesy, unevenly, Claim Im on Nas's dick
Funny, ya hoes said the same thing, ARE YOU RIDIN THEIR S**T??
Pussy, you blow harder than my b***h in a good mood
I eat seafood, you suck dick to pay ya bills and buy food
Niggaz call me the Master of words, I spell out ya whole life
Let's see...M-O-S-E-S, in hood Egypt, that spells DYKE
You might have a chance with the prince, but the King don't take no mess
I'll fill ya body with metal, have you s**tin up tecs
Hold you down and spit rhymes that leave you confused like the Knicks
You come at me 5 deep, no brains, ya only option is to set a pic
Ima fighter, you a rider scopin talent from the sickest
Wanna roll like G-UNIT and flow like the ILLEST
Read my lips, Im Daboss, future holder of the crown
Double L molded you down, but you cried to the host with a B***H SOUND



whatever happens, nice battle


Peace.....ONE

Moses
MC Condom Spit a.k.a DonUwit
Had no idea this the shit I'd BombUwit/
^^ allright lines

Saw the bulge in my jeans, asked if he could fondle it/
^^ lol - but does that mean you're gay 'cos you "bulged" at him

your location's fake cause the only hood you rep is the one on your sweater
^^ real good punch

I had this tourny locked since day one, you're fake SON/
That's why the GODS don't claim you
^^ okay effort at wordplay and linking...

an ok verse but not too hot on hard punches. Had a decent flow tho'... got a good chance

Illest:

The end is near, It's like Terminator 3 for Moses
Black roses on ya grave, lost future, ya rhymes are bogus
^^ good rhyme scheme and an ok opener

Grab ya pad, I prophetcize you goin fail in this game
^^ i'm assuming thats a bible reference - with tha prophet, hmm?

Ya'll play cheesy, unevenly, Claim Im on Nas's dick
yo - i'm not on with playing off verses but if that ain't in tha rules props

Pussy, you blow harder than my b***h in a good mood
^^ lol

You might have a chance with the prince, but the King don't take no mess
^^ hot line in context

I'll fill ya body with metal, have you s**tin up tecs
^^ mmm - good good

Wanna roll like G-UNIT and flow like the ILLEST
^^ ok

Read my lips, Im Daboss, future holder of the crown
Double L molded you down, but you cried to the host with a B***H SOUND
^^ good rhyme scheme again

Good flow and vocab but you could do so much with tha shit hes given you..... not any super hard punches either tho'... but a good verse man

Hmm... this is a tough one. But i'm a give it to MC Illest. Moses had one hot line and tha rest kinda tailed off from it. And MC Illest was consistently better tho' prolly none of his lines quite matched up to tha hood line (even tho' its a tiny bit played).
But overall he justed pipped it.

PZ>

i have to be straight and call this one a tie!

^^ties dont exist in battles foo!'......


aight cant be fucked to break it down completely....

MC Illest
really nice flow...rolled straight off the tongue no problems..
Good opening line.
Ya'll play cheesy, unevenly, Claim Im on Nas's dick
Funny, ya hoes said the same thing, ARE YOU RIDIN THEIR S**T??
^^real nice
Liked the personals too.
some rhymes seemed a little iffy.

Moses
dodgy opening bar. Didnt like it much but it picked up from there.
MC Condom Spit a.k.a DonUwit
Had no idea this the shit I'd BombUwit/
Try to grip the mic in my presence, but your palms would slip
Saw the bulge in my jeans, asked if he could fondle it/
^^real nice..the second bar had me laughing.
Sometimes i think your lines are a little short.

Vote - Moses
His verse seemed a lil more original and enjoyable to read..lyrically, you're both on the same level..this was a real close battle but Moses took it...~pz~

that's 1-1, since the tie didn't count, uppin

Originally posted by Divinebloodomen
i have to be straight and call this one a tie!



LOL....What were you thinkin, we were gonna share the crown...lol....trying to catch my breath.


Alright, back to real life. He D, you gonna vote for one of us???



YOU DONT NEED TO IF THE D*** MEMBERS WOULD PLEASE VOTE. I MEAN THEY WANNA ANOTHER TOURNEY BUT CANT EVEN VOTE FOR THIS ONE.

SORRY BOUT THAT....MY TEMPER IS GOIN WILD.....IM FIN TO REST OR SOMETHIN

dude seriously you got problems and o yeah remember when i dismembered and destroyed you with that one on one battle that Ms Mack deleted to save your "Illest" REPUTATION...well its gonna happen again...soon...D***....peace and respect!...out of respect i ain't gonna vote in this battle...cause i don't want my vote to look like a hate vote...tie=cause yall skills are matched...but Moises nice flow everything before ...slip...MC ILLEST...you aiight...but you still got to prove to me why you the ILLEST!...thats a hefty title for yourself!...OOOOOOOOOOOO... ;)

I aint crazy, im just clownin around. And you didn't kill me in that battle Mack deleted!!! This verse I dropped wasn't my best, but I had a deadline and this is what I happen to drop.


Peace.....ONE

Man enough of this yappin bullshit. Let's get some votes goin on with this thing.

Yea, come on niggaz, vote!!!!!

Now,I ain' no nigga but I'm votin still.Just to prevent ANYONE from thinking ANYTHING,I would like to say I don' hate none of the batallion MC's here,y'all know it.

Now,lemme break it down for a minute.

MOSES21X:
I flowed both verses before I write this,just to see how they sound like.I must say,sometimes I was waiting for the rhyme.

"hat the fuck, it's MC Such-n-Such
Can't even call you by your name cause you don't live up/"

A good start.You basically insulted him by saying 'you don't live up to yo name,you ain' the illest!',a good opener.

"MC Condom Spit a.k.a DonUwit
Had no idea this the shit I'd BombUwit/
Try to grip the mic in my presence, but your palms would slip
Saw the bulge in my jeans, asked if he could fondle it/"

What I see here is the thing I call"double rhyme."Apart from the last word,the word before it rhymes too.Nice flow,nice lines. Especially the"try to grip the mic" line,where you said his palms would slip,(coz he's afraid).

"You so on Nas' nuts, you got pubes on your face
Your rhymes suck, stick to moderatin boy, stay in your place/"

Nice.You're saying that he should moderate and not rap,coz he sux in it.

"your location's fake cause the only hood you rep is the one on your sweater
Next time let me write your verse, that's the only way you'll do better/"

Those are yo best lines,as far as I'm concerned.Anyone who reads it will know what it means.

"I had this tourny locked since day one, you're fake SON/
That's why the GODS don't claim you"

Nice wordplay.Referring to "God's Son" album of Nas,another thing that's collabo with 'You so on Nas' nuts".

"they're too ashamed to/
Your team traded you and payed your salary
So me owning you was just a fucking formality/"

Well...Nice...But I don't get it really good,maybe it's me,but teams usually like trade good playas,not suckas.

Avarage flow,good wordplay and punches,but there are some points I got lost.

MC ILLEST:
You had a better flow going on.You used "last word" just like moses did,but you used some "in-sentence"type of thing too.

"The end is near, It's like Terminator 3 for Moses
Black roses on ya grave, lost future, ya rhymes are bogus"

This is the flow shit I explained."Moses,roses,bogus."Anyways a better opening than moses did.

"It's Y2K all over, you and ya pussies tremblin in fear
Lights out faker, Hell awaits you, nigga grab ya gear"

Kinda sentence rhymed.Quite nice,where you are "dooming" him with the Y2K thang.

"choose a new career, I prophetcize you goin fail in this game
Along with ya hoes, Skyline, Flowz, and them other lames"

"Career"rhymes with the previous sceme,makes it sound better. So you're "a prophet",just like Oblivion said.You're also shittin on his buddies,and making him look like a loser in many other losers.

"a'll play cheesy, unevenly, Claim Im on Nas's dick
Funny, ya hoes said the same thing, ARE YOU RIDIN THEIR S**T??"

Quite good...

"Pussy, you blow harder than my b***h in a good mood
I eat seafood, you suck dick to pay ya bills and buy food"

I think "I eat seafood" was unnecessarry there,it rhymes but I don't quite get what you're sayin here.But a good punchline.

"Niggaz call me the Master of words, I spell out ya whole life
Let's see...M-O-S-E-S, in hood Egypt, that spells DYKE"

Uhh...I have absolutely no idea what you'Re talkin bout here. I understand the first one,but not the second one.Maybe it's just me.

"Ima fighter, you a rider scopin talent from the sickest
Wanna roll like G-UNIT and flow like the ILLEST"

Nice wordplay,just like moses did with "GOD'S SON".Wanna roll like G-UNIT is referring to 50 Cent,if I'm not much mistaken or remember correct,and ILLEST is to you.It's like accusing but sound real good.

"Read my lips, Im Daboss, future holder of the crown
Double L molded you down, but you cried to the host with a B***H SOUND"

Nice ending and quite a good "THAT'S IT!"line.

(for the lines I didn' write,those were what I couldn't figure out.)

My vote goes to "MC ILLEST",coz he was betta.

No hate or nuttin to noone here.

Peace out!AND LET'S END THIS,IT'S TAKIN WAY TOO LONG!

aight, can someone else vote now???


Peace

Whoa, this is some competition!! I'll drop my vote later, but It wont be easy. GP and Moses got some ill rhymes there. Im leanin more to MCI, but we'll see,cuz i gotta go right now


Peace

hurry and vote rone, aight it's 2-1(me) some else vote to get this over with

Both had decent flows....moses some of your lines were MAD corny and played....ILLEST you too dont get it twisted.....illest had better punchlines...and thats what counts in a battle...gettin more personal and better punchlines...thats why its called a battle....so by a narrow margin my vote goes to MC ILLEST.

Aight, Im ready to vote real quick

First Moses:

I don't think you started off nicely

"You so on Nas' nuts, you got pubes on your face
Your rhymes suck, stick to moderatin boy, stay in your place/
My Griff alread gave you the real meanin' of M.O.D.
So why you think you could battle either him or me/"

The Nas thing kinda got played out (lookin at previous posts on Drop Rhymes)
And the way you mentioned Griff was weak

Nicely done how you had GODS SON in there claimin he's on Nas's dick

"Your team traded you and payed your salary
So me owning you was just a fucking formality/"

good vocab, but I don't like the understandin of the content, didn't really make sense
I give you in this battle a 7/10

Now MC Illest:

Nicely done the way you started it.

"It's Y2K all over, you and ya pussies tremblin in fear
Lights out faker, Hell awaits you, nigga grab ya gear"

Sweet!! how you connected Y2K wit Lights out faker, sayin that.....well ya'll know what i mean

"Ya'll play cheesy, unevenly, Claim Im on Nas's dick
Funny, ya hoes said the same thing, ARE YOU RIDIN THEIR S**T??
Pussy, you blow harder than my b***h in a good mood
I eat seafood, you suck dick to pay ya bills and buy food
Niggaz call me the Master of words, I spell out ya whole life
Let's see...M-O-S-E-S, in hood Egypt, that spells DYKE"

Real good with the Nas dick beef, and nice punches in there. When you spelled out M-O-S-E-S, that was nice, sayin that since biblical Moses is from Egypt, you said in Hood Egypt, that translates to Dyke. Real nice punch


"Ima fighter, you a rider scopin talent from the sickest
Wanna roll like G-UNIT and flow like the ILLEST
Read my lips, Im Daboss, future holder of the crown
Double L molded you down, but you cried to the host with a B***H SOUND"

Nice ending............real nice


Real good battle, but my vote goes to MOS... uhhhh.....I mean MC Illest

I give his rhyme a 9/10

He had better punches and a better flow.

So, there you have it.

Hey, Ms mack, what do you mean first 5 votes?? Does that mean the first 5 votes and who ever has more wins??? EX. 4-1

First person to get 5 votes wins

So, I just need one more vote to win??!!

So, I just need one more vote to win??!!

^^ you first in ya class at maths? lol j/k

Uppin

PZ>

LOL.........well, just waitin for members to vote

I apologize for my delay in voting on this battle. I wanted to give other peeps a chance but folks are lagging. Everyone wants to battle but no one wants to vote........go figure. This was almost a evenly matched battle. I like both your flows but I have to give MC ILLEST the edge on punches. This is a battle and I felt like he came harder. Moses this is my opinion but it appears to me like you got tired of this tourney and how long it was taking so you kinda rushed your verse. I've seen you do better. I was hoping you would win this thing, (no disrespect MC ILLEST) since you beat me but hey...one can't always get what they want. Nice tourney Illest. You earned a first round bye in the next tourney

So I won the first ROFC Crown. Actually, i don't feel like I thought I would feel. Then again, it's not like I actually have a golden crown.:rolleyes: