Vokals
11-13-2004, 08:17 AM
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TOPIC:
Your involved in a plane hi-jacking. Explain how it happened, it's destination. Whats going on what you do and the outcome of it all.
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crooked
11-14-2004, 06:14 AM
wow tough topic... this will be hard to relate
these are all pretty good original topics, well done voks and whoever else came up wit them
.....in
g'luck thurz
big DADDY wAr™
11-15-2004, 04:24 PM
yeah ill shit Voks..................
and good luck ta you to Crooked.................
in...........
big DADDY wAr™
11-18-2004, 05:33 PM
UH OH.....................*eye of the tiger music playin loud*
big DADDY wAr™
11-19-2004, 02:24 PM
..........................*music stops*
Flight 187 leavin' from Mitchell International en route to New York~ NOW BOARDIN' GATE 13
knew the whole trip started off wrong in sorts,
cats welcomin each other with their right hands up like they was bein' sworn in court,
but i kept on sormin forth, ready ta scorch New York,
the bad seats is all i could afford, so im like 'fuck you' to the skiin dude yellin yaw betta get a-board,
first class, i passed, i was in them cheap economy seats,
smirked out the window gestured goodbye and gave a Sam Sosa Peace ta my peeps,
take off went excellent, ghost floatin smooth,
in my iPOD i was bumpin some XK vs. D-illar 1 downloaded E tunes,
everyone was peaceful, i couldnt forsee doom, then it drama comes,
over MerryLand, some scary man, started threat-a-nin TERRINPINS with his tongue,
swearin with cocaine air in his lungs, that darin is dumb,
he was possessed w/ a spirit from Nam, fucka goin through dispair w/ a bomb,
ducktaped to his abdomen, frantically laughin, cancerous lungs had him gaggin,
"ONE BRAVE NIGHT MOVE & THIS PLANE A BE TURNED INTO A JEAN GREY PHOENIX WAGON",
ta my self im askin, what we do, what he goin through?,
then outta first class came these lads all mad, his adjoinin crew......
OH LORD! dont let this bitch go up in smoke, im scared,
nowhere ta run so there can be no hope, i feared,
that the worse was yet ta happen, i hope you rot fuckas,
thought about action but these cats wasnt packin no fuckin boxcutters
my braveness now in question, stomach TWISTed ADRENALINE RUSHIN,
under the mere pressumption, these some non-death fearin stuntmen,
thought i was gone go out from to much liquor consumption and fuckin,
!TICK TOCKL BOOM! and the whole fight a be smeared ta nothin,
my 2 seeds flashed before my eyes, swear i saw they whole futures,
rather go out a hero, than like them other zeros remembered fa no gettin sutures,
had 2 figure out who was the infamous ring leader,
there he is with the meanest heater, shit, Goons 3 seats and 2 feet in either-
direction, no time ta choose who makes moves through election,
w/ no detection- i stood proud, startin crackin jokes like "WE GOT A GOOD CROWD" -
in this bitch this Evenin, w/ disbelieven' the Goons started laughin,
thats when i took avtion, cosest goon ta me i grabbed em',
took his semi, like gimme, leaned back like Don Carta and Remy,
and blessed they squad like gangstas crackin open any-
bottle, the crowd followed, the aisles neck bottled,
Goons got swallowed by pure heroism real quick..............
"PLEASE INSERT ANOTHER 50CENTS, FLIGHT SIMULATION ENDED"
'MAN AINT THAT A BITCH
lol....
Vokals
11-20-2004, 10:21 PM
Black Thurz advances to face ~Damien~ in the next round due to Crookeds ho-show.
Sorry you had to waste a verse Thurz
:mad: ho-show bitches