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FIRST TO 5 WINS 3-0 KO 4-1 TKO

VOTES BASED ON:
ON TOPIC
FLOW
MULTIS
VOCAB
ORIGINALITY
IMAGERY
DEPTH
WORDPLAY
METAPHORS
HOOK ORIGINALITY

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TOPIC:
Your the President caught in a Gov. sex scandel. You have impregnated the VP's wife. Explain yourself to the country.

Good Luck

Wow....In...

Yea, wow. In aswell...

I don’t have a hook, so I’m just gonna drop two extra bars, instead of the hook...

December 29th, 2004

Before-I’m-impeached, I’d like to say this whole event is catastrophic and more-than-you-think
I’ll speak from my heart instead of composing-a-speech and afterwards I’ll be going-in-peace
The story-is-leaked, sex with the VP’s wife, but it was merely a revenge-plot
My defense-barks from a document where he slanders my plans, I-will-not
Allow it, it-will-stop, couldn’t find a way-to-prevent-it
He demeaned~me and now my political reputation-is-dented
Obscenely, I perfected~a~plan that could break his family-ties
Yes, the government is scandalous-guys and once I had my plan down packed, I let my insanity-rise
First, as~best~as~I~can, I’ll distract-his-spouse
And then just~pretend that I’m just~a~friend and ask-her-out
After the date was over, she asked what the fiasco’s-about
I told it was her husband going crazy, so to a shrink, he-has-to-go-now
I asked could I admit him myself, and yes was the answer
So with a smirk I said “Thanks” and I knew that my plan-worked
I can’t go on because my heart won’t let me drench-you-in-sorrow
So for now, I’ll just give up and continue-tomorrow

{The Next Day: The Story is getting wrapped up}

So after he was out of the picture, I knew there was no challenge-ahead
I had to have get him out of her mind, so I laid her down-in-the-bed
And continued-to-touch, she smiled and said “You can feel-if-you-must”
“I’ll allow you to use your Presidential power and use your dick-when-you-thrust”
It went by so quick-when-I-touched, but I blacked out, and I can’t remember all-the-events
But now history repeats itself and me and the first lady no longer-exists
Disregarded-her-kiss, and ran back to the Oval-Office
And reminded myself, never mix Vodka with Polish-sausage
So once I finished my plan, everything went great-for-me
But I had to keep this scandal behind doors faith-fully
Security saw~the~tape and knew it was the Head Prez and not the VP-in-his-bed
It was eagerly said by Republicans that after impeachment, I will be-in-a-jail
Ended up with a horrid lawyer, he said just admit-what-you-should
I listened to him, and now I’m gonna end up in the history-books
Fuck all governments, someone kill me, I’ve had enough-of-this shit
Never mind, the police can put these handcuffs-on-my-wrists

{Alarm clock rings}

Another day, another problem, Democrats never-win
So the actual~plot that I had~to~jot down shall-begin
Bush’s 2nd inauguration is going to come-in-two-weeks!-Shit!
I need to figure a good way to rig one of George W’s-speeches

*Succubus: Is a female demon that tempts men to have sex with her.
*The Second Lady: Is the Vice presidents wife.
*7 days, Craig David: Song, (look it up) on Sunday he rested.
*The Great Schism: When the Christian Faith divided into Protestant and Catholic read more here - http://mb-soft.com/believe/txc/gschism.htm


(Hook)
I solemnly swore! To stay honest to my nation and never follow this course/
So it’s Clinton and Gore remixed with more impeachment hearings in court//
But my bearings were forced out of socket so the "power"? I’ve lost it/
Morals were too 'slick' I 'dropped' it, wasn’t use to passing it up so I copped it//

(Verse 1)
I solemnly swore then fell slipped and stumbled, and balls popped out when her bra fumbled/
I knew it from the start trouble, she had me calling her cookie until the plot 'crumbled'//
Teased ‘till my eyes were looking blinded by the brightest *Succubus disguised as woman/
She 'sucked me in', 'brains' ‘till my mind was 'stupid' 'twisting' up multiple lives by 'screwing'//
Looks now like I was Judas explaining all men have 'Vices' then again, not all have his wifey/
So the arguing and fighting "airs" to frenzy, with wannabe 'Starr’s' trying to spite me//
Late night comics are seeking to hype me 'roasting' our 'fireworks'- until their speaking 'ignites' me/
Now I'm needing 'unwinding' but the clauses they're reciting are legally 'binding'//
So my arms are 'behind me' connected as these "closing in walls" confine me arrested/
The media’s 'verdict' was a 'death slip' so I'm running-round working these cameras 'headless'//
It was a 'sweeping' election, 'clean', so this 'mess' is straight what I never expected/
Seems now like it was an eclectic partisan conspiracy erection erected//
Simply to ejaculate on my record racking my temper tender till they wreck it/
It's hectic I'm 'choking' like my 'neck's slit' searching for my 'character's assassin' in the message//
I’m stressing to the vice prez confessing head 'pounding' with reality till it 'gets in' with lessons/
Haven’t slept in? Too long to mention, I’m held waking with my head aching in mental detention//

(Hook 1x)

(Verse 2)
Flash backs of bodies clashing and pressing sperm, sweat and spit splashing the wetness/
In passionate sex with *the lady second, that came 'immaculate' since the 'sinful' conception//
An infectious obsession, clouded the senses, served by her oh so heavenly presence/
So the light and respectable stepping? Were bound to just 'give way' with all the 'gravity' contesting//
Cause men "cave" to convention of bone headed pig ways when the sleek sway is that tempting/
'Weak' (week) 'framed' by that penchant the *'7 days' was not Craig David’s there was no resting//
Just bold wrestling close caressing was the only way I wished her 'posed' in a 'hold' 'against me'/
Now thrown against screens I commence screams with pants down and it’s no intense dream//
I 'peddled' 'spins' on it like '10 speeds', spooled it up, a rap ‘till court battle had me schooled and crushed/
Just a fool in lust, or where we 'two' (too) in love? Doesn’t matter with both known to delude like drugs//
Lies diluted the trust between me and the Vice, yesterday I bought her a drink and now I’m seeing the 'price'/
I’m not feeling alright as forces align democracy dies with hypocrisy’s rise feeding the plight//
Not believing its slice like *Great Schisms with partisan 'divisions' 'raiding' verbally 'slaying' the victims/
Absurdly displaying 'conviction' to unnerve me unearthing my business with these federals digging//
Wasn’t part of the vision not that I was 'honestly' thinking as my 'dishonesty' 'sinks' me/
I’ll be 'drowning' in drinking 'floundering' thinking what it was they found of me 'fishy'//

(Hook 2x and fade out)

I thought to leave it out, but just in case someone's clueless...

Vice - 1. An evil, degrading, or immoral practice or habit.
2. A serious moral failing.
3. Wicked or evil conduct or habits; corruption.
And it's a saying that "all men have vices."

Also Ken Starr (yes S-t-a-r-r) was the guy incharge of the Monica Lewinsky Scandal.

I have the perfect beat for this too... maybe I'll do an audio.

t1..seriously..you my nigga.But chances are..if it takes that much explainin.its too advanced for the majority..

ON TOPIC - D Iller 1,Easier to understand and dident stray trying to incorpate other layers..
FLOW- T1 oracle..D iller was aiight the first 4 bars..then it just got long and some lines werent needed..
MULTIS - D iller 1..Dident see many in t1's..
VOCAB- T1..Obvious..he had alot of words and refrences i had no idea about till i read them in his verse..
ORIGINALITY - T1 oracle,D iller's was a dream and that was played in my opinion..
IMAGERY - T1 Again..Mad Depth and Maad Vocab and discriptions painted the picture..Complicated..but a picture
DEPTH - T1 whole shit was deep..
WORDPLAY - T1..I dont think d iller 1 attempted to add wordplay.
METAPHORS - Tie
HOOK ORIGINALITY-T1 because he actually had a hook..*its required)

I just enjoyed reading T1 Oracles Piece more.Made me think..and i couldent figure out the ending before i got to it.Good drop by both though.Pat ya selves on the back.

another nice battle to read...both well written pieces...

d-ill...nice read...

The story-is-leaked, sex with the VP’s wife, but it was merely a revenge-plot
My defense-barks from a document where he slanders my plans, I-will-not
Allow it, it-will-stop, couldn’t find a way-to-prevent-it
He demeaned~me and now my political reputation-is-dented
^fav piece of first verse...

...hook at the end through me...wasn't feelin it too much although it def stayed on the topic...

second verse wasn't as strong as the first imo & agree with torch that the dream bit is a tad eh...

So after he was out of the picture, I knew there was no challenge-ahead
I had to have get him out of her mind, so I laid her down-in-the-bed
^opener def strongest part of this verse...

kept on topic throughout but felt some of the concpets were a little basic...flow in this was ok - agree some of the bar lengths and rhyme scheme affected this...

ON TOPIC - 8
FLOW - 7
MULTIS - 8
VOCAB - 7
ORIGINALITY - 7
IMAGERY - 8
DEPTH - 7
WORDPLAY - 7
METAPHORS - 7
HOOK ORIGINALITY - 7
total - 73


t1 -

flow was real nice throughout and vocab was sick...

Looks now like I was Judas explaining all men have 'Vices' then again, not all have his wifey/
So the arguing and fighting "airs" to frenzy, with wannabe 'Starr’s' trying to spite me//
^the first line here is ill...

The media’s 'verdict' was a 'death slip' so I'm running-round working these cameras 'headless'//
^lovin this...

(Hook)
I solemnly swore! To stay honest to my nation and never follow this course/
So it’s Clinton and Gore remixed with more impeachment hearings in court//
But my bearings were forced out of socket so the "power"? I’ve lost it/
Morals were too 'slick' I 'dropped' it, wasn’t use to passing it up so I copped it//
^hook was solid without being too crazy...the last two lines were nicer imo...

verse two kept the whole piece going nicely...

Flash backs of bodies clashing and pressing sperm, sweat and spit splashing the wetness/
In passionate sex with *the lady second, that came 'immaculate' since the 'sinful' conception//
^sick opener...

Wasn’t part of the vision not that I was 'honestly' thinking as my 'dishonesty' 'sinks' me/
I’ll be 'drowning' in drinking 'floundering' thinking what it was they found of me 'fishy'//
^diggin the closer to the piece as well...

two solid verses that had mad vocab and attacked the topic well...

ON TOPIC - 8
FLOW - 8.5
MULTIS - 8
VOCAB - 9
ORIGINALITY - 8
IMAGERY - 8.5
DEPTH - 8.5
WORDPLAY - 8.5
METAPHORS - 8
HOOK ORIGINALITY - 8
total - 83

nice reads guys...vot = t1

Read both 2 times...pretty good on both sides...

Multiples: Oracle...D-illars didnt flow at times...actually alot of times...
Flow: Oracle...D-illars were streched alot
On Topic: D-illar...was on topic more....
Vocab: Oracle by far...and vocab counts alot more in topicals than in reg battles...
Originality: I felt Oracle took this because as torch said...d illars was kinda played
Imagery: Oracle...mad similies and metaphors...I could picture what he was sayin...and it was tight....
Depth: Oracles...D illars was more laid back
Metas: just about the same shit as imagery
Wordplay: Doesn't matter in topicals
Hook: Oracle..had one...

vote: Oracle...

good battle

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T1oracle wins by KO 3-0.
T1oracle will advance face the winner of Sadistyk and The Youngin.