TORCH SAID HE FORFIETED AND GAVE HIS LAST VICTORY TO RELLIK DUE TO HIS GOAL IN PERSUING A MORE RELIGEOUS LIFESTYLE. *YES I AM SERIOUS*

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FIRST TO 5 (4-1 TKO...3-0 KO)
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ON TOPIC
DEPTH
IMAGERY
ORIGINALITY
FLOW
MULTIS
VOCAB

PARTICIPATING MEMBERS & MEMBERS WHO WERE INVOLVED CAN VOTE. ALSO VETS CAN VOTE. EACH MEMBER MUST VOTE ON ONE (1) BATTLE!!!

TOPIC: YOUR MIXED UP IN A SERIES OF EVENTS WHERE A MOBB BOSS CONFUSES YOU WITH SOMEONE ELSE. HE THINKS YOU KNOW INFORMATION ABOUT A NEW BREED OF DRUGS AND ABOUT A SHIPMENT. HE'S TRYING TO FIND OUT IF IT IS OK TO SHIP THE DRUGS. HE'S AFTER YOU TO FIND OUT THIS INFORMATION YOU HAVE NO CLUE ABOUT. WHAT DO YOU DO?

GOOD LUCK

Check-Checkin' In... Good Luck, Rellik... :cool: TRILLZ

Check in......

I guess everyones waitin till the last minute to post....

^ Yep... :D... I'ma Post Tomorrow... :cool: TRILLZ

I'm gonna need a 1 day extension if it's ok with DatThurrPoet... because this is the Week for my class Finals.... Alot of studyin... ya'll already know my situation with school right now.. sorry for the delay...

But just incase he Dont show tonight heres somethin... and if he do come after I Post I'll spit somethin serious....

The Mobb is after me..
tryin to charge me like a Battery..
Sad to see this tragedy of battery..
Their jabbin me..
I lay down slowly..
I need someone to hold me..
My legs broken from the way they fold me..
Oh please, I dont have the shipment of KI..
So why you mentionin me..
I will kill thee so quickly after recovery...





NO EXTENSIONS!!!

^ :D ...
Smoothing Out My New Trench Coat, I Think To Myself “Damn, It’s Cold”
Just Flew In An Touched Land... Need An Airport Bench So This Map Of My Plans Can Unfold
LaGuardia Is Known For Pick-Pocketing, So I Stick My Wallet In Hidden Sockets
Time To Guard Mines... I Grind Too Hard For This Tick-Tock On My Wristwatch
It's Gotta Be A Quarter 'Til 7PM, I'm Needing A Taxicab
So I Walked To A Corner Outside... Traffic Is Speedin' Past Me Fast
I'd Presume It's Not Hard To Catch A Ride To The Park View
Noticed A Stench Of Perfume Behind Me... Some Lady Tapped Me, I Gasped & Was Almost Startled
This Dame Asked If I Knew 'Esther'... I'm Like "U Mean Madonna?"
"Yeah, That's Her Nickname, I Think"... Her Smile Gleamed As If I Charmed Her
She Handed Me This Paper & Said "They'll Meet U Right Here Tomorrow @ 3"
It Was Just An Address... No Phone Number, But No Obstacle To Me
Thinkin' Maybe A Booty Call Was Waiting @ Her House & She Was Antsy & Horny
But My Guess Was Truly Wrong As I Stepped To A Warehouse... Still, I Can't See The Warnings
I Got Grabbed & Clamped By This Dude Big Enough To Break Me In Two
& Dragged To This Damp Room Where All I Saw Was A Stairway To A Room
Once Inside, I Heard Mumbling & Speaking...
Every Step Forward, I Felt Da Floor Under Me Creaking
"Esther"... A Deep Voice Said Out Of Da Dust
"Now, How About Dat Rush?" He Asked... I Just Nodded & Hushed
"U Got Da Map?" Da Voice Asked... I Thought About Da One In My Back Pocket
If I Had A Way To Stop This, It Was Now... Or Find My Body In Back Of Da Docks & Shit
"Yeah, 'Esther' Is On Da Star In Da Middle Of Da Map... U'll Find Her In A Little Black Dress"...
They All Bust Out In Laughter Like "Yes, Dat's How Da Drug Feels... It's Actually Da Best"
They Let Me Go, & Said I'd Find Da Money @ Da Same Spot I Met Dat Girl
I Was Like "OK"... Split & Headed To Cop Dat Dough, & A Plane Ticket To Get Outta This Part Of Da World....

^ Rushed, Steamin' Pile Of Garbage... But Since Vok' Said NO EXTENTIONS (Sorry, Rel'), I Think It Is Suitable For Now... :D ... Wish I Could've BTL'd Better This Round... Both Of These Prior Have Been Fairly Easy... Sorry For Da Wackness, Dough... Not My Forte` @ ALL... :cool: TRILLZ

Critique:
There is almost no need for an explanation..

Vote: DatThurrPoet

Man wtf.... I was just about to spit somethin serious... fuck it... it dont matter...

I apologise....

I'll give this win to DatThurrPoet... I didnt even read your verse, I KNOW its better than mine...

Good Job.... Good Luck in your future battles... Right now I have classes to worry about on da real....

~1~

ON TOPIC - DTP, it's like Rellik didn't even try...
DEPTH - DTP, although Rellik had the psychic depth going on...I didnt even read your verse, I KNOW its better than mine...IMAGERY - DTP, gave much more to work with
ORIGINALITY - DTP
FLOW - DTP, Rellik didn't even have a rhyme scheme
MULTIS - DTP, again Rellik didn't rhyme much...
VOCAB - DTP, the biggest word Rellik used was "apologize" and he spelled it wrong.

VOTE - DTP

Keep elevating Rellik. Nice drop DTP. Though I liked your murder mystery more, that thing was sick.

Please stop voting this shit... lookin at this only pisses me off.... just give him the win...

sorry Rell but DatTHurPoet.............

^^Yeah... its nothin Black... I wish I coulda had 1 more day.... DatThurrPoet know he coulda gave it to me if he wanted to... but he rather take the easy win... its nothin... smart thinkin on his part...

3-0 KO..... DatThurrPoet....

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