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16-18 BARS
FIRST TO 5 (4-1 TKO...3-0 KO)
VOTE ON:
ON TOPIC
DEPTH
IMAGERY
ORIGINALITY
FLOW
MULTIS
VOCAB

PARTICIPATING MEMBERS & MEMBERS WHO WERE INVOLVED CAN VOTE. ALSO VETS CAN VOTE. EACH MEMBER MUST VOTE ON ONE (1) BATTLE!!!

TOPIC: YOUR PLOTTING A TERRORIST ATTACK. PICK THE PERSON (REAL LIFE OR MADE UP), LOCATION (COUNTRY), MEANS OF ATTACK (VEHICLE, PLANES, IN PERSON, ETC) AND DOES IT GO THROUGH?

GOOD LUCK

i am present

sounds good

Fortunate times Kataracks


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Dressed in all black like a funeral service
With soldiers who never hesitate to put 2 in ya cervix
Target in sight, you would think what could he do to deserve this
We're just brute executioners seeking revenge for numerous murders
For living with head above water when he merely had it cover his knees
Because all of us niggas stay in the hood like we government cheese
Some might say we serious..others say we too stubborn to please
But we laugh at death and show Chaos our dicks and tell it so suck on like fleas
So with a fist of assasins we meet and discuss a future list of our actions
Before we plan our movements....we first remenisce on the facts then
We mind map the assault based on blueprints then we all relaxing
Knowing we gonna put people in the box like they fuckin captions
The plan was to scope before we move..Wiz would make sure the cameras were broke
To calm our nervousness like cops driving right pass a nigga with a handful of coke
This thang aint no joke..its the basics you gotta understand how we cope
Cuz jumpin into war will not only get you wet up it will get you fuckin soaked
We scared? nah...normal pressure from being around bricks like a house
Plus they got my back..thats why I always roll with a click like a mouse
6 on the team and in 6 seconds they would put 6 on ya spleen
Some quick shots with big plans..we had a fix on the cream
We moved through with stealth with heavy weapons that were brutal to health
Heavily armed so the cops had better stay out because it was futile to help
Crept through the night camouflaged in the nights wing never step in the light
Because invisibility was the key component in order for us to do this right
Surrounded the lawn...the guard who tipped us off we found he was gone
Well of course the fucka never stuck around..he was warned
Down in a form of some navy seals type shit..we steady closing in
With our minds cleared and hearts blacker than the clothes we in
Broke the alrams along with the locks now we snuck in house
Like that nigga sneaking through ya backdoor when he be fuckin ya spouse
Saw my target I almost never squeezed cuz the coward seemed almost dead in his look
Next day in the Washington Post it read shocking news...found dead was PRESIDENT BUSH

Critique:
Ok. I'm not too sure if what Axiom dropped was 16-18 bars. That certainly doesn't look like it. Ax, you had something going here but you needed to extend it and set the structure so it would be easier to read for the competition. This just isn't enough. Due to these circumstances..

Vote: Kataracks

i agree with Jerome.... due to teh fact that Kataracks piece wasnt all that bad it was pretty good actually...not that its shocking...lol..but due to teh fact that he actaully followed the rules.... i will also have to give this one to him...

MY VOTE: KATARACKS

Dressed in all black like a funeral service
With soldiers who never hesitate to put 2 in ya cervix
^ I liked that bar, I did a quick search on "cervix" lmao

ON TOPIC: Both
DEPTH: Kat mainly since he gave more description which drew out a fuller picture of what was going on. It wasn't very deep though.
IMAGERY: Kat, again more there was more decriptive imagery in his verse
ORIGINALITY: Kat, neither were to awe shocking in concept, but Kat's verse had a target, Ax's verse was more general
FLOW - Kat, Ax's was harder to follow and his structure wasn't consistent
MULTIS - Kat, he had larger more consitent multies
VOCAB - Ax, he used a more extensive vocab

I don't know if Ax put much into this, anyway nice verse Kat. It was an ok verse, although some of you wordplay was seemed a bit miss placed. Things like "roll with a click like a mouse" are alright in normal battles, but that was still a slight stray from the theme of the verse.

Vote = Kat

Kataracks wins 3-0 KO and will advance to face Me in the Bracket 2 Finals.

Good Job.