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Vokals
12-09-2004, 11:31 PM
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TOPIC: You are a schizo who goes to a Doctor for treatment. You are prescribed medicine and when you go to pick it up you unknowingly pick up the wrong medication. Explain what happens.

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DatThurrPoet
12-11-2004, 03:18 PM
Tight-As-Fuck Topic... DAMN, Vok'... Checkin'-In... :cool: TRILLZ

~Damien~
12-12-2004, 11:11 AM
....In....

Xkwisite
12-19-2004, 06:52 PM
....An Extension Has Been Given For This Round Until Tomorrow, Some Competitors Have Family Problems Going On At This Point, I Apologize For Not Doing This Sooner, Vokalz And I Had To Discuss This

DatThurrPoet
12-20-2004, 01:43 PM
* Don't Know If This Round Is Goin' Down Or Not, But Hurr's My Drop*
~Might As Well Make Defeat A Reality... Good Luck, Dame'~

*REGISTRAR*
*DOCTOR*
After I’m Done Totin’ This Joint, Man… I Gotta Get To Doctor Winslow’s
For My 1:40 Appointment… He Was Appointed To Stop These Schizo-
Phrenic Panic Attacks… Otherwise, The Chances Of Relapse Are Elevated
In Substandard Fashion… And That Upon My Relapsing, It Has Been Stated
That In Fact I Shall Be Detained… Restrained, Limb-Strapped & Sedated
‘Cause I Am "Who I Ain’t"… This Man Can’t Be Him, Don’t Have To Debate It
Nah’… I Ain’t Settling, Please… I WAS ‘Out Of It’… Dumber Than This, So-
What I Smoked Heroin & Weed… Then Followed It Wit’ Some ‘Crystal’?
That Was Da’ Shit, Though… Mother Can’t Get Furious; I’m Jus’ A Kid, So-
What I Was Curious? Told I Suffer ‘Delirium’… Administer Ur Prescriptions… “So
This Stuff Won’t Give Me Hard-On’s, Doc’? How ‘Bout A Viagra Sample?”
Grabbin’ Pamphlets, Mackin’ Da Registrar “Wow, Ur Character’s A Handful”
She Said Jokingly… “Miss, I’m Hoping U Let Me Hold Them Numbers”
Then Doc’ Broke-In & Said “Are U Aware Of What Ur HMO Covers?”
“Yeah, It’s Full Coverage Now… All Paid By The Government, No Prob’.”
“Them Fools Subjected Me To Federal Aid… I Ain’t Workin’ @ No Jobs.”
“ OK, Good… Get These Filled, & Check-In Wit’ Me In Like A Week’s Time.”
@ The Pharmacy, I Stood… Gettin' These ‘Pills’, Getting Thru My Anxiety, I
Should Be On Track, But I Feel Derailed… Meds’ Crash Into My Weak Mind
But… I Would Be Back… Jack-&-Jill Fell, But Trekked High Up Da Peak Side, So…

Fuck These Pill Bottles… It’s An Awkward Experience
I Feel Gutted & Hollow… I'm Not Down For This Extra-Curriculum
Fuck These Pill Bottles… I’m Not Often This Delirious
Fuck ME, I Feel Borrowed… Now I’m Stalked, Stressed By Delirium

But… I Should Be Back, Right? Now I’m Scanning @ The Label’s Writings
& Fuck… It Looks Bad… Handling A Package Meant For A ‘Ms. Abele Smithy’..?
My Name’s Abel Smith… DAMN I Know I Probably Would Not Have Noticed
A Change Unstabling, Swift To Acknowledge Second Thoughts To Stop The Dosage
But… I’m Utterly Obsessed… I’ve Come To Love This Fluttering In My Chest
No More Mumbling Under My Breath While Downstairs Buttering My Bread
@ The Breakfast Table… I Feel… BETTER!… I Feel Able To Run More Errands
Watch Less Cable… I Feel Like Having Fun, My Parents Can’t Understand This
But… As My Research Unfolded The Substance I Hold In My Cupboards
Was Really To Abode Heart Functions… Allow The Strode Of Accustomed
Medicines Designed To Slow Arrhythmia… Otherwise An Explosion Or Bustin’
Of Arteries Is More Than Obvious… Feelin’ Guilty, I’ll Be Exposing A Monster
If I Don’t Undertake Measures… I’m Holdin’ Ms. Smithy’s Life In My Hands
Not One To Take Pleasure, Nor Bold Enough To Give That Strife To My Fam’
I CAN Be Unheralded For My Actions As A Conscience Human
I CAN File For Malpractice… Ha… But Honestly I’m Not Into Suin'
Instead, I’ll March This To The Pharmacist… Inquire A Complaint
Heart-To-Heart This… Situation, Hard To Acquire Info'... Is Ms. Smithy Sufferin’ Pain?
No, 'Cause She Got My Meds’ & Was Happy… Doin’ Well Now, Purposeful & Amazed
‘Cause She Got My Meds’… It Was Two Half-Ounces Of ~Purple Haze~…

“U Betta’ Give Me Back My ‘Meds’, Ms….” ..Ha..

Fixion.
12-21-2004, 03:09 AM
..Sad that Dame wouldnt show..