View Full Version : Shaven V.s Brooklynite (T.I.W V.s AV)


Adham Amir
12-24-2004, 01:36 PM
rulez have been stated.....

5-barz
house rulez
each battle is a point
post ya own links


ding-ding-ding

brooklynite
12-24-2004, 10:02 PM
Lost Outlaw is taking the place of Shaven i guess so whenever Outlaw checkins i'll drop....1

DIJINN
12-25-2004, 08:29 AM
Hmm.... Checkin in Ill spit first

DIJINN
12-25-2004, 10:32 AM
TIW is dead! Hanging on the last string's of this thread,
brook neva bust gat's like you said, You just act it and pretend,
So time for this actor's play script to end,
Brook Dont Wanna Bash or Brawl, He Wont Last At All
His "Line's" are Stretched Then "International phone Calls"
Battling You's Aint Drastic, Ya Crew's RW's Wackness AKA Spastics
Stretch Em All Out Like Elastic, You on my Wack list, Battling you is only practice,
Smother Ya crew Like Bein Sat On By Some Fat Bitch
TIW IS RAN BY PUSSY AKA -B-itch
She aint even battlin her own battles, That why she got u pricks

Didnt Even bother really....
Gettin links

brooklynite
12-27-2004, 04:16 PM
this cocky little nigga well time to crush him i don't know who put a batter in ya back

This kid was lead by a homo coach, i could tell by the fags that poke you
its 'toxic' when semens 'down ya throat' dude, true meaning of "Acid vokals"
dumb ass i'll choke you, punch lines crush ya lungs, u in need of an ambulance
if you spitting on top of monopoly boards, bitch still wouldn't 'stand a chance'
you name 'lost' cuz i sonned you and left you, so i'll call u my bastard child
keeping talkin that bullshit i'll leave you laid out like plastard tile
this faggots wild, and that shit drop (u know) is the worst~rhyme~heard~when
everyone saying that pussy's was fucked, like a first~time~virgin

stop the games youngin uppin for votes

brooklynite
12-27-2004, 04:22 PM
I almost forgot about the links:

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=422567&posted=1#post422567
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=422716&posted=1#post422716

wouldn't want to do that

-- Ox E on ----
12-27-2004, 05:15 PM
Punhline- Brook
flow- Brook
multi-Brook

Really this was a sweep under the rug I saw hardly any effort from shaven might of underestimatyed your opponent because you got sunned and beheaded in this the fat check line was good and the bastad child was right to stay up vote -Brook

Adham Amir
12-27-2004, 08:11 PM
1-0........t.i.w

brooklynite
12-27-2004, 08:27 PM
uppin for more votes

snowwizza
12-28-2004, 10:57 AM
Multis: Outlaw
Wordplay: Outlaw
Punches: Outlaw
Personals: NA
Structure: tie
Flow: tie

Both had decent verses but Im giving this to Outlaw he used better wordplay and his punches came a little harder.

Vote: Outlaw

Bdatgurl4ya
12-28-2004, 11:05 AM
its 1-1 yall come one uppin for votes... TIW in it to win it...

brooklynite
12-28-2004, 02:20 PM
uppin for more votes lets get this shit over with please but good looking on the vote wiz now its gonna take a little more time to finish this shit than i thought.....

NorMeD
12-28-2004, 03:29 PM
alrite i wasnt feelin this battle at all, nothing great just a bunch of shit talking lol.

flow- brook
punchlines- brook
multis- none
creativity- none

lost outlaw really did look like he didnt try, the stretched like international calls line was the only one that was decent. While brook umm had that stand a chance line and acid vocals, but really nothing good from both of you, crappy battle.

vote - brook

Bdatgurl4ya
12-28-2004, 05:18 PM
2-1 tiw is up... uppin for votes

brooklynite
12-30-2004, 12:49 AM
damn i seem to get that a lot crappy battle and this battle sucks, type of shit well whatever couple more votes to get this over with....

brooklynite
12-30-2004, 12:50 AM
uppin for outlaw to post his links too...

Xkwisite
12-30-2004, 01:14 AM
...


Brooklyn took this.....even though his punches were mediocre they were better than Lost's attempts at punching at him.....Niether of them had multis and what not.....no real personals........the wordplay was aight....but like i said...Brooklyn juss came out the victor....

Bdatgurl4ya
12-30-2004, 09:04 PM
the votes are 3-1 brook is up ...... come on yall..VOTE

Adham Amir
12-30-2004, 11:06 PM
1-1........

Absolute
12-30-2004, 11:25 PM
Punches: Brook
Flow: Brook
Wordplay: Eh....


The battle was pretty week, overall the lack of complexity took away from the feel of it, but brooks verse was better overall.

Bdatgurl4ya
01-02-2005, 12:20 PM
4-1 come on yall uppin for votes .. TIW (Brook) is up

L.E.E
01-02-2005, 01:32 PM
horrible forced rhyme..it doesnt matter.....anybody else lose in my crew???
cuz if its me...
haha

SomethingAwfl
01-06-2005, 09:59 AM
hmm................................

F a M e
01-06-2005, 11:25 AM
all votes go ta brooklynite. wasnt a good battle but he attempted some punches n came harder. outlaw wasnt really good no offense. elevate both but this battle was terrible unlike othas ive seen but keep elevatin. no hate pz

overall=brooklynite

F a M e
01-06-2005, 11:25 AM
sorry, ment all *cats* go ta brooklyn , didnt mean votes

BkBrawla
01-06-2005, 11:47 AM
Congratulation Brooklynite wins 5-1,Thanks to everybody who've voted