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Topic: your out w/ some friends criving around fucking with other drivers and houses when you come past a house thats on fire, what do you do.



Deadline: Check in by Saturday March 19 by 11:59 pm EST
Verses due Sunday March 20th by 11:59 pm EST
Only have 12 hours leway time (docked 1 vote) Anything over you lose a vote. (This only applies for when verses are due not check in.)

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only problem is i won't be able to post til Monday...

Fuck i'ma have ta forfeit... I didn't read the rules and i've only done 9 bars..



I'll post anyway...



I also noticed the other breh hasn't posted anythin' up.



My yard inclined in wake, as my bredrins foot slides from the brake/
Blind to others fate, motor struggled 'cause his clutch timin' was late//
Still finding his feet, nigga held a provisional, but was schooled through Stratford/
Accidents all liable to happen, spliff'da wrapped 'n it ain't cool to be strapped up//
Fool should be slapped up, even worse when sheep'sa blind to be followin'/
Breh pressurized piers to ride, started reckless when a truck drive all up on his side//
Wasn't even insured for his Citroen Saxo, still span, skid a unexpected horseshoe/
Driven down one ways, oncoming traffic unexpected but drunken; forced through//
On this occasion, horn'sa blaring, ignorant niggas regarded this shit as amusement/
Front hydros pumped at high speed to the amplified heavy beats they in tune wi'//
Speed restriction abusing, turned 'bout one-eighty to return home again/
Stoned friends pointed out some fiery trouble, like "what's all the pandemonium?"//
Pulled upside some smokin' suburban yard, front door penetrated by a burnin' car/
Side door removed from imact, hangin' out one breh screamin' 'cause he's hurt his arm//
Rear wheels still rotated elevated, hanging off was the number plate on the reverse/
Petrol dripped on bare spark plug, came closer, vehicle discharged a flaming outburst//
Shit's ignited further more, limp flaming bodies hung from the door/
Faces turned solemn as fuck, drivin' stoned like crazy wasn't funny no more//

i was gonna drop on monday so that me and crooked could have same amount of votes but when i tried getting on last night, the site was down just like the other night....i hope this dosnt happen everynight....heres my verse..take it or leave it



"consumed by the flames" (jesus loves me)

Red lining and revvin the engine kicks into v-tech
Upshift into 3rd gear then these kids givin re-spect
I win and just eat debt as i take my money with ease
Now it seems that ya cars weezin with some funny disease
So me and some of my g's leave and go to Sonney's to eat
My teams runnin the streets..wit guns and the heat left slumped in our seats
Its nothin to see..everyone knows were not to be fucked with
Alot of em duck quick and if they look twice theyve gotta be nuts, bitch...

...whats up mitch?! and whats up with the black gloves and pitch black look?

pack up!..were knockin bob and todd on the noggin for talkin some sick wack shit...

..so i get a quick black lit before i sit back and crank the H-22
page Laney too, tell her ill be home after we prank these fake funny dudes
and i take chunny hoo, this chink who speaks absolutley no english
so i crank the tunes and the two fifteens hit so clean its-
so mean- its so dreamish..my team is on a mission to cream these liars
i seem so wired yet i see my eyes are more closed than this chink with fire(weed)
i think im higher..iuno whatever man fuck, he wont even speak...

"A FIRE!!!!!!!!!"

what the fuck!?! oh shit man!!

this brownstones blazin from the 3rd story window..flames like a dragon's breath
its so insane..my tach is revved..so i let off the gas and im amazed by what happened next
some africans were trapped in death's building screamin with agony
even in traffic we all stopped our cars and couldnt believe in this tragedy
people have actually started to jump from 4 or 5 stories up!
just the sight of innocent people dieing horrified and tore me up!!
and more alive were boarded up inside with wives and babies who's crys had made me tear up
maybe they're fucked...or maybe their luck wasnt saving their butt
im hatin this rut..satans a slut!..fuckin all these people
theres christians in there jumpin off their steeple!
this slums an aweful evil, costin people their lives for no apparent reason
im even impaired with weed and im darin myself to pair some heathens-
together and bust through there with sleeves and gloves and masks and bats
and say to myself that jesus loves me and thats just that...



...and thats that

Im not gonna lie to you
But both verses were done poorly but I see why..on Crookeds part..

Crooked ya verse had some good content, Id rather see some more multis
from you, just to make the verse more enticing and grasping. With flow..
it pulls the reader in and allows him to run along with it..but nice verse..

BAM..kid I was feeling ya verse..but then I realized..I onyl liked the flow..
Flow was nice..but the content was ass..you throwin mad multis..but
extremely forced multis..it was terrible..

I was quite upset with this battle..

Both could have done better with the use of the basics..

But I gotta give it to you Crooked due to content..

I ain't got too much to say here... I just liked Crooked's flow a little better... a bit short, but s'all good... BAM is aight... just feelin' like Crooked has a better grasp of things. Vote: Crooked.

B.A.M

you had a sick verse multi wise...but you were waaaayyy off topic...and when you got on topic it wasnt hardhitting.....ya verse was hott if you were just spittin...but this is a tourney....you gotta get more determined god fa real...

crook

i see why you couldnt spit at your full potential.....but the verse sounded like it was gettin heated...even though it was done quickly and poorly as was b.a.ms.....but ima still go with you due to the fact that your verse wasnt forced and you stayed on topic and on point fairly well

satisfactory verses from the both of you but

my vote goes to crook...keep elevatin...1

crook would have won, but he forfeit earlier due to no net access, ..B.A.M.. consider this a gimmie.