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Topic: Your a camera man at a movie shoot. and during the shoot you notice someone in the crew getting killed in the far background of your shot. when you look up the killer notices you and the camera and sends a warning. what do you do.


Deadline: Check in by Saturday March 19 by 11:59 pm EST
Verses due Sunday March 20th by 11:59 pm EST
Only have 12 hours leway time (docked 1 vote) Anything over you lose a vote. (This only applies for when verses are due not check in.)

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As I get this warning I start~to~panic/
I fear the devil is in me, relating to Satan under~satanic/
I feel a volcanic blow through my organ~system/
I now have an undifferentiated tissue from Morgan’s~meristem/
He gives out the warning “If you move I’ll kill~you”/
I start shivering in my boots, suddenly a light beams which is bright~blue/
The man’s name tag say’s he’s called Morgan/
I read it blurry as my whole body whimpers in shocks all through my organs/
He says to the whole camera crew including me and the scared~actors/
Not to move and you might get out safely, he say’s it with unofficial~reactors/
I suddenly start distracting the gun man while others try to get~out/
I talk to him with efficient words just to get all this to set~about/
As everyone leaves the building I’m still talking to this~guy/
Suddenly he gets blinded by the blue light and I run out of there~alive/
I think I pulled one off as I run down the buildings stairs/
But unfortunately he chased me and I’m still feeling unaware/
He then pop’s his gun and puts a bullet in my right leg/
I fall all the way to the bottom of the stairs, weary, and I start to beg/
As he comes storming down the stairs and runs over~to~me/
I think this is where I die as my leg start’s~to~bleed/
As he stands there with the gun aimed directly at~my~head/
I start thinking to myself am I going to survive this or am I going to turn~out~dead?/
This is getting serious as I lie on the floor with this killer standing over~me/
As I think about where I am in Delaware, I feel the old clover~sea/
Suddenly police bust through the door as I’m weeping/
The armed forces take down the gun man, and tell me “Good~Keeping”/
As tears come down my eyes, I start to smile/
Feeling I just cheated death which to me was defiantly worthwhile/
I feel the luckiest man on this fucking~earth/
I saved peoples lives as well but now I have sick~berth/
The ambulance eventually arrives as the gun man get’s~arrested/
They say to me “Everything’s going to be okay, do you need anything?” They~suggested/
Now I’m under controlled treatment/
A week later, I’m still recovering my leg worn down in the hospitals basement/
I feel so relieved that all I went through has suddenly come to an end/
I feel as if someone was looking down on me from above, I feel as if I had god’s send/
But now all is over thank god/
Now I can relax and think unjustly domineering under roughshod/

Lights, Camera, Action, Fingers Reaction hit off Red Standby,
Assistant Hands My headset to me as i Settle the Zoom Apply,
Metal bars Loom High ahead, Steady breeze Through my Hair,
Few Spare props here and Their, Nothing wrong to lift a Care,
I start to Stare through tha Lense, And allow tha Amends to Begin,
Three Friends Sing to ignited instrumentals on speakers Burnin,
Whilst Turning 90 Degrees left from these Tightly held Pedigrees -
I Freeze, Hand accidentaly hits zoom away from the choir of Melodies,
A Sea of adrenaline rushes to my head as I Witness tha Scene,
Like Sickness of a Dream my stomach lurches from Disipline,
I let a small Scream rip from my unaided Vocal Chords,
Certain no one could see behind tha Wall of Boards,
Lord were my eyes decieving me? Lord, my Heart didnt Believe Me,
But tha Tip Cut on a Flip just above his Hip bone Angrily,
My ears Apparently Heard tha last Word and Breath Emitted,
As Death Commited itself the gates opened for him to be Admitted,
I Gritted my Teeth, Beneath I felt a Ferrari Racing round my Circuit,
Brain dead...I couldn't Work It, Eyes locked wishing i could Revert It,
But as I Raised my Gaze to tha Muderor our Retina's Made Contact,
With Sense's Laid Intact, Darkness Blacked my vision of Track,
I Cracked out of tha Daze, As tha familier Phrase of my Phone Sounded,
Dumb Founded, I fumbled uneasily and answered asif a Clown Did,
Heart Pounded, An anonomous voice Splintered through my Head,
What was Said, Was constant Threats, So I looked up and my organs Bled,
Forced to swear Blind-keep Stum, But my Eyes had already Resigned to Gloom,
I wern't Designed to Groom this drama, So I swept tha tape up and ran to Doom,
Jumped in my Caddy, Pumped down Rapidly ontha Metal Pedal,
Blossom and Petals became Unsettled like my hands itching from Nettles,
I Let All adrenaline rush, I gotta rid this tape of my Thoughts,
Caught site of him Behind me, Ontha Grind at 110 on a Short -
Interchange Gears, Like Stage Fears, These butterflys are mad like tha Flyin Dust,
A Dying Must decaying away to Multiplying Rust like Trying to Trust,
But like a shining light Ahead, I Embed into depth with Steady Idea,
Ready, But I Fear failure as he pulls furiously out from tha Rear,
Wheels Steer Right, I go forth with tha Plan and reach to tha Glove Box,
Unlocks and opens as a 9mil Falls to my palms and Plots,
Slot in a Mag, Grab the window Lever take a Toke of a Breather,
S'like my body Broke from Fever as tha killer levels up so no ones tha Leader,
130 on tha Meter as Slow Motion Throws Notion upon tha Ride,
Yet another Side glance brings contact and a nozzle on tha Unidentified,
Abide my Brain, And I Sighed I pulled my Finger on tha Trigger,
Let the Figures Lingure in the Air then Tear the comotion Bigger,
Didn't no what I hit but tha screeches led me to think tha Truth,
Over like that, But I didn't stop till I reached my Flat and under my Roof,
Shut my eyes, Let my mind back track on the Crazy Day,
Rewind, Resigned, Cus I i cant Find happiness after i pressed that button Play.

I coulda swore I replied to this already.... Maybe I forgot to hit the Post Reply button. Ugh... gotta type it all again.

k, so, I'ma have to go with Coral on this. Overall, TCE just got put with someone who is a lot more experienced than him. I see a lot of potential, but right now, TCE seems to be too self-concious of structuring multies and not so much the content of the verse which is a common mistake by rookies.... Coral, your verse is aight... definitely not the caliber that's going to win this tourney, but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and just assumed you slacked off since you posted yours second. At any rate, alright battle.... weird topic, so you both worked it decently. Vote: Coral

Coral spanked that ass on them rhymes

Alright 1 / 0 to Coral. I'm going to go voting!

Alright well this battle was pretty easy to judge..

TCE..Your using a lot of non need markings in ur so called multis..Your marking them
totally wrong and thats throwin people off cause they are expecting flow to be
perfection when they see that..Your content was mediocre and I didnt see anything eye catching when I read your stuff..Elevate..

Coral, nice shit..flow was cool, no real multi usage in my eye, but it was nice..
You clearly out classed him but meh, apparently it wasnt that difficult..Nice
shit tho..not knockin..


Vote Coral..

tce -youre structure was off...and you didnt stay onb topic....you had ta go up against someone whos elevating very fast and i think your self conscienceness took a hold on you in this one....

as for coral- that was very nice...i didnt know you had skill like that....you are elevatin very well...you stayed on topic...it was easy to read...you didnt have markings in places you dont need em like tce did....and you did well

my vote-coral

keep it up

this battle was just okay...coral prepare for the 2nd round cause the comp will get harder.....peesh