Rules:
Everyone should know the basic rules. No bitching or fighting in the threads. Or shit talking. 1st offense results in 1 docked vote, 2nd offense results in dq. Everyone must vote on atleast 1 other topical or you will be docked a vote.
How to win:
If your opponent no shows, (IF YOU NO SHOW YOU WILL BANNED FROM ALL FUTURE TOPICAL EVENTS)
or 3-0 Ko or a 4-1 ko or a first to 5. If a vote is placed as a tie each will get 1 vote a piece. and if it goes to 5-5 i will be the deciding vote or xkwisite. If you have a problem with a vote pm me and i will discuss it with xkwisite.
Length: 30-50 lines

Have fun and enjoy.

Topic: you meet 3 guys at a resteraunt and they are telling you about this "game" hunting they have. they tell you what goes on and you are interested. well to find out when your at the site you are the "game" they give you a knife and a canteen and tell you that you have 72 hours to survive or they will kill you if they catch you. explain what happens and if you survive or not.



Deadline: Check in by Saturday March 19 by 11:59 pm EST
Verses due Sunday March 20th by 11:59 pm EST
Only have 12 hours leway time (docked 1 vote) Anything over you lose a vote. (This only applies for when verses are due not check in.)

..Ya..

Im in

Yup.. Good luck.. This is going to be close..

Dock me a vote, Im posting on Monday..

I have work

Well Im posting today.. Later on. When I write it.

Okay.. THIS is a NO show verse.. If he shows up .. I want an extra time extension.. not much.. like 12 hours... to do my verse

Reminder... THIS IS A NO SHOW VERSE

Hunted through the forest green across the floors of leaves
Trapped on an island surrounded by shores and seas
The three keep forcing me to grow more wise and smart
I cry in heart but only show signs of stars
My mind is hard, Unbreakable, unbendable and unshakable
They're going to hate me more when I take control
This games is life threatening, we're playing for keeps
Im slaying these beasts, in there game originally meant for me

Whas the final time for all of this..??..


Cause Im posting a quick keystyle

..Quick Key..

The hours seem drastic, passing, and as a thought burns in mind
I need to hold my head high even tho I could b burned in time..
No real weapons to sentence all I own is this knife and thoughts
Seems trite has crossed..n my strength is barely reached cause my might is lost
The lights are glossed, quite visible but my eyes become drowsy
Loudly; the horns are blown to show the game advances..its pounding
Ideas start to crowd me which directions to run or sprint
This was a terrible notion, I shoulda read the rules that were so blunt in print
I havent been hunting,-since..ever..Ive never had a deadly thought
But I have to make these evasive decisions or it`d be a deadly cost
Heading lost; the branches wave at a blanding pace but my mind is potent
The timing slows in..I cant believe they were serious I thought they were kind n joking
Smoking..I hear the guns shots near only thoughts in my mind are run, drop fear..
I eye around quickly..my body shifting..shivering..those hunt shots leer..

*BULLET GRAZES THE TREE NEXT TO ME*

Now Im not one to whine n bitch but shit..these are clearly demons of course..
But fuck they`re madness..I`ll use my wit to even the score
My breathing is coarse..now it seems I need to ease n breathe in silence
Cause the scheme of this team could make me bleed in violence
Silent..I notice the motion of my prey in which I could attack n stab..
He passes past and when he nears I lay one lasting jab..
There are mags to grab so I take the clips and quickly end his life
From ear to ear I adjust my blade and send my knife...
Ive had plenty strife, worthwhile but this shit I could have avoided
Thought it would be fun and games until I realized its jus toy shit..
Theres still more of these boys-in..poison..but I venture and gaze-round
I stay sound..quiet at all costs because Ill have to murder on their own playground..

*CRACK*..

I fall to the ground..I can already tell that the bloods draining from ear
I lay unconcious..but I can feel hovering now I know where I was gaining my fear..
He kicks my ribs..screams you lose like its a gift or some shit..

But I gaze up at him..shake my head..agree that its over..
And quickly send two quick clips to his lips..

I guess written words has to extend his verse


I'll be back with an edited vote whenever that occurs

he wont be extending his verse, he shouldve had a longer one and has had plenty of time to do one..so feel free to vote

okay...........well that seems very russian like, but whatever





vote = fixion


for a more complete content



i mean writtenwords was dope as fuck, that was a crazy rhyme scheme there man, props no doubt, but I cant extend you my vote since the story aint complete.........and fixion didnt spit real wack, so he wins, ditto to go out like that

written

you shoulda just came with the whole thing...maybe the rules got you confused or somethin...but you cant just post a short ass verse then think you can come back and extend....

fix

i know that wasnt your best...but it was nice...definitely stayed on topic....and it was a quick key also....you got it due to the extension of your verse

written your shit woulda been super hott if you woulda finishe...and i see why you dropped that verse..

but my vote goes to fix

this woulda been so hott if yall both woulda had more time...


peesh

lol, that's a strategical cheap shot if you do it intentionally... purposefully make your verse late, docking yourself a vote, and making your opponent thinking you're going to no show, so they slack off on their verse, and then the person who shows up late can just tally up the votes, and with 1 vote against him.

Can crew vote? If so, I'll just say what everyone else is...

Given, WW thought Fix was going to no show.... so I didn't really give Fix the credit of being an "awesome topical battler" since I know Fix was slacking too. Overall, I think this is a waste of a good match up. Fix's verse was just more complete... flow was iffy at points, but it was also a keystyle.... vote: Fix. Next time play it safe. Get a condom.

yeah it is a rip off.........I woulda done the exact same thing Written Words did......drop 6 lines and thats it



its a shame, because me and him woulda been in the finals.......now its whoever, lol