View Full Version : ~Rnd 1~ Illicit Lyricist Vs MoneyMan
Oblivion 05-17-2003, 06:54 PM Rules:
Line limits= 12 min, 24 max.
No hate/dickryding/stupid/crew votes
No playing off opponents verse
No biting [I]at all[I]
First to 5 or 3-0 tko....
[I]Check in[I] by Tuesday 20th May
DROP VERSE by Friday 23rd May
-+=No extensions=+-
Good luck both. Don't no show. Breaking any of tha rules results in DQ....
Good luck
PZ>
.Inphinite. 05-19-2003, 02:36 PM OfFiCiAl SiGn-In by:
MoNeYMaN............
illicit-lyricst 05-19-2003, 02:42 PM Official sign in...my post gon b here prolly on friday or thursday crazy shit goin on in my life ...ya kno ...holla
.Inphinite. 05-22-2003, 07:56 AM Right... here we go...
I dont know which sucks more, ur supposed skill or the what seems like the lack of it/
Even if u had the latest Internet technology, in the rap game, u still couldn’t hack~it/
What a shame… each and every male got a permanent tattoo of you/
Every nigga born with a dick when they see it they see you/ (Dickhead!!)
i could be a penny from the top of the empire state bulding and you still couldn't drop me/
you can call me a pussy, but I say im a cork, i'm stopping your flow like a blood-cot be/
lyrical visions attack with precision leaving your ass ready to get decapitated/
Perform an autopsy on your beat and destroy each note so the rhythm gets obliterated/
Illiterate-lyricist shouldn’t battle me on a see saw, cause these two sides display no balance/
If he posted his rhymes to the left of this, he wouldn't even show marginal~talent/
This man likes using the word faggot but he seems to be sexually bemused and confused/
Rhymes so sharp, they will leave Illiterates whole body circumcised like if he was a Jew/
Your flows like a prossy’s (prostitue) pussy, they wide, U need to make your flows~tighter/
cos Ur lyrics couldn’t be “prestige” if “da_pristine_1” was your ghost~writer/
U lick ur pussy crew so god-damn much, no wonder u cant rap: cat~got~ur~tongue/
My verse like arrows, they aimed straight at ya chest to punch~ture ya lungs/
Electric currents coming off putting u in shock, leaving your soul away as if ur body was on idle/
This mans gone and turned pop like LL~fool~J – You might as well try out for American Idol/
You so dumb, you thought a sex drive was something on ya through a computer/
Stuck your floppy dick into the modem and now ya Digitally neutraled/
uppin for feedback and his verse....
Multiplaxed, 05-22-2003, 08:31 AM Woooooo! That was MoneyMan's best drop ever i think. Illicit gotta come up with some good reply.
illicit-lyricst 05-22-2003, 01:10 PM yo the kid sick/leave u wit upset~indegestin/twist ur insides show this kid his cattles~intestines/flow hotter then~vaginal~corruption/slashen through ur intellect/like anrexics on they first~meal,just~munchin/kid couldnt step up to me/if your verses~steel(steal)/wit stilts from ~munchkins~/
your rhymes/like throwin females at me in a straight~edge/just trhowin pussy~lines~across threads/spittin sicker and sicker/like paraplegics~havin~seizures~while~the~tv~flickers/
verses throw~curses/more den nas quotes biblical~verses/spittin since nigguhs been shittin~in~pampers/ill email u this flow/so when I~serve~you/it's Digitally~transferred
/now my murder~intentions/are worth the collection~of~lyriks~perfection/to spit~attentions/in every~direction/to split these kats,i~meant~this/nigguh u can run but u cant hide/i got enemies tallyd up like the~U.S.~census/wars~A~prevention/nigguhs dropping faster/then Kmarts~stock~investments/now hit the flatline watch monitors~beep/when i pass through metal detector/they cant detect~the~heat/so they respect~the~fleet/while my fleets~increase/there numbers~decrease/by the flow dat melts~bones/scars~the deminor~/my shit~so~ill/i make SARS~look~like~A~childs~fever.
its 28 bars sorry off by four...the way i worte it ...looks like more sorry....//if yall want ill edit it ..just tell me
just give feedbaq about the battle...im goin thru some shit so i cant post if i win for next round...so give it to him....but by flows who won...i wan kno
Tupac 05-22-2003, 02:13 PM Vote - Moneyman
Great verse he totally kill illicit-lyricst... Better punches, more disses, better flow, better wordplay...
Fav. Line:
You so dumb, you thought a sex drive was something on ya through a computer/
Stuck your floppy dick into the modem and now ya Digitally neutraled/
That was da shit!!
.Inphinite. 05-22-2003, 02:35 PM 1-0.. thanks Pac
uppin for more votes...
Dominate 05-23-2003, 03:08 AM If he posted his rhymes to the left of this, he wouldn't even show marginal~talent/
that was tight as...
U lick ur pussy crew so god-damn much, no wonder u cant rap: cat~got~ur~tongue/
that too.
real nice verse man....the bars were a little too long for me but apart from that it was very tight
IL, not bad either.....but i think the nullifiers got this one :)
pz
illicit-lyricst 05-23-2003, 03:13 AM yuh dawg its kool...my mind somewhere esle as you can see as what i said at the bottom of my reply...but even though homie no crew votes...but its kool dawg....0-1 uppin
Dominate 05-23-2003, 03:27 AM ya i know, jus givin feedback fer my fellow nullifier
.Inphinite. 05-23-2003, 07:40 AM Uppin for more votes even tho im in second round anyway........
1-0 to me...
illicit-lyricst 05-23-2003, 08:59 AM yeah money good luck homie.....sorry i wouldve posted harder ...but i already said wuts goin on so ....good luck dawg in the next round
.Inphinite. 05-23-2003, 01:47 PM ^^ thanks bro.. u cool...
uppin for votes still thoi man......
Oblivion 05-24-2003, 11:30 AM MoneyMan took this by a lot in my opinion...
nice rhymes both but MoneyMan was just generally better.
i liked I-L's style and all... but MoneyMan just had tha better battle rhyme
Illiterate-lyricist shouldn’t battle me on a see saw, cause these two sides display no balance/
If he posted his rhymes to the left of this, he wouldn't even show marginal~talent/
^^ liked that
It was a good battle but i vote for MoneyMan
VOTING ENDS SATURDAY 24th 11:59 CST
.Inphinite. 05-25-2003, 06:04 PM Uppin for Votes to end this......
Oblivion 05-25-2003, 06:10 PM MoneyMan wins by 2-0 and advances to round 2....
PZ>
Multiplaxed, 05-25-2003, 06:11 PM MoneyMan took this by a lot in my opinion...
nice rhymes both but MoneyMan was just generally better.
i liked I-L's style and all... but MoneyMan just had tha better battle rhyme
Illiterate-lyricist shouldn’t battle me on a see saw, cause these two sides display no balance/
If he posted his rhymes to the left of this, he wouldn't even show marginal~talent/
^^ liked that
It was a good battle but i vote for MoneyMan
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