Rules:
Line limits= 12 min, 24 max.
No hate/dickryding/stupid/crew votes
No playing off opponents verse
No biting [I]at all[I]
First to 5 or 3-0 tko....
[I]Check in[I] by Tuesday 20th May
DROP VERSE by Friday 23rd May
-+=No extensions=+-

Good luck both. Don't no show. Breaking any of tha rules results in DQ....

Good luck

PZ>

yo i'm checkin in, i'll get my verse in by da due date

checkin in.. glorius you spit first.

k heres my verse,

Rass-Kass u think u a lyrical gangsta but really u notin but a wanksta trying to be a wannabe rappa//
I’m glorius for fuckin sakes I’ll hand you out like shake and bake on fathers day//
All I c is a washed up emcee on the creek without a paddle and these rhymes of mine will leave u dazed and frazzled//
Now it sais on my watch that its time to end this battle but not right now cause I’m jus getting started//
Now Rass after I’m done wit u you’ll be leavin the stage with the mic up your ass jus like when u were gettin it from your dad//
*yawn*, your rhymes are my pillows cause they’re makin me fall asleep and watch out for that hole cause that’s jus for u 6 feet deep//
In my tower I shoot u wit mah sniper rifle, watching you fall and die is sweet music to my ears like eatin a green apple while watchin cheers (lol)//
While vultures are pickin at your body I’ll be somewhere else counting all my fabulous riches and money//
It’s almost time to close dis shit cause u bout to be silenced by the one and only glorius//
Slammin my rhymes in your face like Shaq and shootin threes (rhymes) like Trace I leave u there hangin all amazed//
Serving u endlessly I intentionally and mentally hurt u and ignore u not adore you so fuck u//
Now to end dis shit all I have to say is that you’ve been served and silenced by this true emcee glorius//

uppin for rass's verse...

Wasnt your first two lines you used before by you? Anyways nice rhyme...

Here it goes:

Damn I asked fo' a BATTLE Instead I got Kids on Playgrounds/
I'm Feedin Yalls Brains wit Rhymes-that Got Yalls Left and right brain gaining Pounds/

Leeets goooooooo..

These cats sayin you elevated, "fuck what ya heard", i incenerate ya homeplate, now you simply stuck on third/
You'll never score, too many "concepts" in my "words",i "surround" ya "stereo" types,you "mono" spitten ya cursed verse//
Ayo Glorius, Rap is like a race I cruise by while I meditate.//
you gassed yourself up and you still can't accelerate.//
I verbalize paranormally while Glorius holds battles in anticipation//
Gazing skyward as i descend from the clouds, buring spirit like acidic precipitation//
u an "ILLITERATE BASTARD", your style aint even mastered//
my shit be spirtually blessed so you could say im pastured//
Beating Ras-Kass is harder than climbing MT Everest//
Pop all pimples on ya head and make u drink the puss as a beverage//
Take a seat Glorius I’m bout to educate you like a teacher//
Leave the remains of your body on your school campus under the football field bleachers//

k now that puss line was jus sick dawg but good verse, we'll now c who goes to round 2

vote- rass - better flow, wordplay, punches

glorious...not bad, ya had a couple of multis that worked, but get punches with wordplay down before you bother with them. they take priority in a battle. ya flow was a little off too, setting it out in lines not bars at this stage might help


rass,

liked

You'll never score, too many "concepts" in my "words",i "surround" ya "stereo" types,you "mono" spitten ya cursed verse//

and the gassed himself up line was sick. the flow was a lil inconsistent, would have been fine if ya picked any two lines and stayed with that flow throughout, but it kept changing.
pretty nice verse overall tho

pz

vote - Ras kass

he has skills...Glorius was out of his depth (yet again)

I verbalize paranormally while Glorius holds battles in anticipation//
Gazing skyward as i descend from the clouds, buring spirit like acidic precipitation//

liked that shit.

Glorius..you came harder here than you did against me and Vision..but you still need to elevate...

you’ll be leavin the stage with the mic up your ass jus like when u were gettin it from your dad//

thats some immature preschool shit...flow was aight..

Rass took it.....

vote - Rass

I think Ras took this...

I verbalize paranormally while Glorius holds battles in anticipation//
Gazing skyward as i descend from the clouds, buring spirit like acidic precipitation//
^^ MCD already quoted but it was nice vocab with it

These cats sayin you elevated, "fuck what ya heard", i incenerate ya homeplate, now you simply stuck on third/
^^ would've been better if this was tha 3rd round

Pop all pimples on ya head and make u drink the puss as a beverage//
^^ what an image(!)

Slammin my rhymes in your face like Shaq and shootin threes (rhymes) like Trace I leave u there hangin all amazed//
^^ my favourite part

I agree with what Oni is saying too - some of it was just too basic. But keep rhyming!

So i vote for Ras.... before I (or D) close this maybe we'll let Glorious acnkowledge tha result and Ras gloat lol

PZ>

daaaamn i got tko'd, good battle rass, and ya oni i did come stronger on dis battle, from our battle i was jus bein lazy but thanx for da advise u guyz, and o yeah oblivion i'm still eligible for the nex up comin tourney right?

yep - certainly.

You put in a good verse, you didn't bitch about losing (like a lot of people do) and more than anything you showed.

So of course.... i dunno how tha long tha break should be from tha end of this one to tha next one but there WILL be a next one!!!!

Ras, get in here and say something so i know you've seen this and accept it all

PZ>

Thank Yous for the Votes. :)

*closed*