Rules:
Line limits= 12 min, 24 max.
No hate/dickryding/stupid/crew votes
No playing off opponents verse
No biting [I]at all[I]
First to 5 or 3-0 tko....
[I]Check in[I] by Tuesday 20th May
DROP VERSE by Friday 23rd May
-+=No extensions=+-

Good luck both. Don't no show. Breaking any of tha rules results in DQ....

Good luck

PZ>

iron BARZ checkIN in

In that case.....TRUTH's CHECKIN IN.

HEY I POST MY VERSE EARLY CUS I HAVE TO GO TO MY GRANDMOMZ FUNNERAL FRIDAY BUT THE HAVE THE WAITE TO DAY SO HOLLA 1


tHe "TrUtH-iS.."
Im WiCkEd-an-RUTHLESS, I can PROVE-THIS ~ When I 'swing,' betta
"play LUDACHRIS" and "MOOVE-BITCH!!!"/ LMAO!!!
WHO'S-THIS?! ~ PRICK-WHO challenged "QUiCk"-TO-DO-SHIT,
You'll wish I woulda CLICKED-"REFUSE" after YOU-LOSE-THIS!!!/
YOU-NUISANCE ~ DISSIN-ME'S YA-LAST-MISTAKE,
I'll put you "where the FISHES-BE" ~ hAvE YA-ASS-IN-LAKES!!!/
You 'MASTURBATE' ~ talkin like you "DOIN-YA-THING," (LOL)
This BASTID'S-FAKE ~ We all know you "NEUTERED-BETWEEN!!!"/
You BATTLIN-"NEWBIES," but you're not 'NEW-TO-THE-SCENE,'*
"TrUtH"-IS ~ ya CrEw'S-PISSED, cuz I RUINED-YA-TEAM!!!/
You 'TRY-TO-BE-REAL' ~ but you're just a "LIE-TO-ME-STILL,"
I'm R.I.P.pin ya 'BiTcH-cLiQuE' ~ IrON FIGHTS-WIT-THE-"STEEL!!!"/
The "DYNASTY'S"-KILLED ~ when it comes to RHYMIN-YOU-"FEEL?!"
I'm crushin ya "Instinctz" ~ leave you 'BLINDED'-FOR-REAL!!!/**
Ya SCAM-IS-UP ~ fuck ya "punches," I 'POUND-FISTS,'
(yOu) CAN'T-BE-"TOUCHED?!" ~ that's more "BS" than 'COW-CHIPS!!!'/

BrING soMe HEaT....

My SCRIPTS-ARE-JUSS-"SICK", but I got to PROVE-IT-TO-SOME ~ Like 'DRIPS-FROM-THE-DICK' you "RUNNIN" FROM the BOOTH-WHEN-I-"COME!!!"//
"SICKNES'S"-THE-NAME, you should be USED-TO-MY-LUNGS ~ SPITTIN-DEM-FLAMES, like I had LUCIFER'S-TOUNGE!!!//
This FAKE-faggot CHALLENGED-ME, so I'm TRUTHFULLY-STUNNED ~ Don't even BATTLE-ME, THAT'LL-BE STUPID-&-DUMB!!!//
It's like you on 'house arrest' cuz I RUINED-THIS-BUM ~ Who's Ya "ghost-writer" cuz he gets BOOS-WHEN-HE'S-DONE!!!//
Playin "Duck Hunt," talkin bout you USIN-A-GUN ~ You aimin at DUDES, but only thing you SHOOTIN-IS-CUM!!!// (homo)
ABUSE-YOU-4-FUN, easier than TWO-AGAINST-"ONE" ~ and "TRUTH," there's no "Problem" wit you LOSIN-THIS-SON!!!// (think about it ;)
I don't listen to you HOMIE, so just SPEW-IT-&-RUN ~ but I'ma still leave you "HOLY" like a CREW-FULL-OF-NUNS!!!// lol
While you reppin "VD.." I'm 'SICK'-OF-THIS-DUMB-FUCK ~ "exposin this pussy" QUICKER than "BITCHES-ON-"UNCUT!!!"//

PEACE AND GOOD LUCK MY FREIND TRUTH AND NO BEEF JUST SPITTEN TO WIN I HOPE 1

waitn for him to drop

I'm crushin ya "Instinctz" ~ leave you 'BLINDED'-FOR-REAL!!!/**

Why is instinctz word play and where is the follow up info?

SICKNES'S"-THE-NAME, you should be USED-TO-MY-LUNGS

Who's Sickness?

While you reppin "VD.." I'm 'SICK'-OF-THIS-DUMB-FUCK ~ "exposin this pussy" QUICKER than "BITCHES-ON-"UNCUT!!!"//

that's deffinately a spin on a click name.....

just wondering no beef

well wondered^^^

oblivion, mcd....come on, surely this has gotta be a breach of the no biting rule.

You BATTLIN-"NEWBIES," but you're not 'NEW-TO-THE-SCENE,'*

I'm crushin ya "Instinctz" ~ leave you 'BLINDED'-FOR-REAL!!!/**

hes been pulled up for this before, and yet hes stupid enough to do it again. * followed by a **, with no explanations at the end of his verse, especially when the lines could easily be personals.

plus check the wordplay...it just doesnt make sense.

WHO'S-THIS?! ~ PRICK-WHO challenged "QUiCk"-TO-DO-SHIT,
You'll wish I woulda CLICKED-"REFUSE" after YOU-LOSE-THIS!!!/

why is the word quick typed in upper case/lowercase format when the rest of the bar isnt? and why is it highlighted with ""?

plus, 'wish i woulda clicked refuse' ....theres no click refuse button on this board. Ive done a little bit of searching, i havent found exactly who hes bitten from, but im close. i typed iron barz into a search engine and found another site, goldmic.com .....theres a cat there by the name of iron barz whos verses seem suspiciously similar in style to this iron's. on this site, theres no talking and whatnot, just battles and votes. mcs challenge each other kind of like a pm thing, then the mc being challenged can either click accept or REFUSE....my theory ties in pretty well with that line there ey?^^


I'm R.I.P.pin ya 'BiTcH-cLiQuE' ~ IrON FIGHTS-WIT-THE-"STEEL!!!"/
The "DYNASTY'S"-KILLED ~ when it comes to RHYMIN-YOU-"FEEL?!"

again, bitch clique looks very much like a name in that format. and why is it, steel, dynasty and feel highlighted like there wordplay? it doesnt make sense


ABUSE-YOU-4-FUN, easier than TWO-AGAINST-"ONE" ~ and "TRUTH," there's no "Problem" wit you LOSIN-THIS-SON!!!// (think about it

again, why are one and problem highlighted? i thought about it, as iron suggested, but couldnt find any sensical wordplay in it

maybe its just me, Iron bars, what does it mean?...cuz i sure dont get it, but im sure you can explain your OWN work, right?

smh.....

i agree its too suspicious....

Iron Barz - i'm a give you a chance to explain all that, ok?

If you can explain how it relates to Truth or other parts of wordplay, and i can see it makes sense then thats cool.

If you can't, or D and I agree with all that (well) pointed out by Pissed and Buster (cheers - saved me more effort lol) then ya gonna be DQ'ed

But i'm a fair man, so lets see explanations of all questionable lines please

PZ>

Ummm....in this circumstances can I be givin' leave on the rule: NO FEEDIN' OFF VERSES. I think the situation warrants that a relaxation of that rule applies here. This is my application to remove that one rule...Please reply asap.

no - just 'cos he breaks a rule (yet to be determined) doesn't mean you can. Then you should both be DQ'ed

But hes bitten (allegedly) in tha past, so if you wanna get at him for biting talk about his past stuff that Ninja made a case for.

But you can't say "you had to bite ya verse against me" or anything relating to his verse - a rules a rule.

Sorry, but thats tha way it should be

PZ>

lmao

ugh... this shit makes me sick.

^^yup

i'm assuming thats at tha biting

It does suck and i have a pretty good idea of tha persons names hes bitten, 'cos its that style exactly and he said a name that rang a bell.

So, if i fine evidence i'll post up

PZ>

^^^<insert dramatic music here>



Uh Oh!!!!!!

iight ...i got a idea to finish off and see if he really bitin:::


when he comes back on...make a battle whoever wan take him on....and they got 10 mintues to drop a key.....dats it....he cant bite if..he got 10 mintues to make a flow.....;;;;just my 2 cents

word i know sickness to look it was obviously written by him and check the word play on his name in there to

it's obvious

Originally posted by illicit-lyricst
iight ...i got a idea to finish off and see if he really bitin:::


when he comes back on...make a battle whoever wan take him on....and they got 10 mintues to drop a key.....dats it....he cant bite if..he got 10 mintues to make a flow.....;;;;just my 2 cents

I thought you were the one who didn't like people scrutinizing "his" verses?

Why couldn't he bite in 10 minutes? It takes like half a second to copy & paste something...

Even if he did keystyle something it would probably be wack as fuck compared to the 6 or 7 verses he's had with all these stupid slip ups --

ie: wrong names, personals that don't relate to opponent, destroyed rhyme schemes, accidentally dissing himself, asterik shit etc etc

-- no matter what he writes, this stuff still happened.

^^^tru..

ummm ive never said shit about iron-barz and his biting......u mistaken me for some 1 else......and yeah but if you feed off that and make more rules.like direct disses.and it has to b in a certain way.....like every other word caps no caps.and all slashes or somethin ya kno???

I thought you were "illycit", my bad.

lol its kool

i think this will be enough proof, he wont explain it, just watch...he wont. i dont even think that was his own stuff in the context sensitive battle.....my guess is he just found lines here and there that started with the right letters....prolly why he couldnt do his own name, with the z and all. or perhaps he upgraded to recycling in that one.....doesnt matter

actually, looking at his verse now, although id rather see him dq'd for biting....hes gone over the limit. this was set at 12-24 lines.....hes done 16 lines and then a further 8 bars, which, if set out in the previous format, would total another 16 lines.....which is 32 lines alltogether.

actually, it doesnt matter that the structure changed from lines to bars....the bars are two lines each anyway, and a line is a line, no matter how short

Iron Barz is disqualified for breach of the biting rule....The Truth moves on to the next round.

*closed*