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Topic: You are part of a submarine crew in a major nuclear outbreak between 2 countries with alot of tension. Explain what country you are with and who the opposing country is. Also your submarine is hit w/ a torpedo and it's starting to take alot of water. An enemy sub comes and aides you. Seeing that as treason in your country you try to sabotage their sub, explain how and does it work?

**Note you can add a hook if you want and dialogue, this will not count against your line limit**

Deadline: Check in by Saturday May 7th 11:59pm EST
Verses due Sunday Sunday May 8th 11:59pm EST
Only have 12 hours leway time (docked 1 vote) Anything over you lose. (This only applies for when verses are due not check in.)
Will be strictly enforced this time.

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Check one, Check two...Good luck Twisted :)

Chris:
Well hopefully this mission goes a-ok! You know I'm always bound to get nervous during this time.
Gabe:
Everything should be ok. We know our mission, we got the best technology, I mean c'mon man we're the fuckin US of A....Aint nobody gonna touch us. Besides the last time that a mission went bad was in May of '68 when the USS Scorpion was lost. Think of the technology then and what we're rollin with now. Shiiiiiit buddy we're legit...
Chris:
Nah man I agree with what your sayin, but there's always that "what if" in the back of my mind. Nothing is ever "bulletproof" man.
Gabe:
Listen....Trust me man everything will be fine, and lets say for some odd reason that something DOES happen.........
Well we'll deal with that when and IF it occurs, but we've known eachother since preschool and you know I aint gonna let no bullshit happen to you.
Chris:
Yea man same here homie....Man fuck sweatin this lets go catch a movie...
Gabe:
Nah man you go ahead and go I gotta shoot a email to wifey and let her know everythings straight.
Chris:
Aight man well I'll meet up with ya after the movie. Don't forget that we got watch in a couple hours...
Gabe:
I know, I know...
*Letter to Wifey...*
Christina,
It's me again. I got some time before watch and thought that I would send ya a few lines to let you know everythings all good. I won't lie I'm kinda nervous, but I gotta play that shit off cause I can see deep down Chris is really sweatin this mission. How have the kids been? What about you? Well I gue...
*ALARM SOUNDS*
*ENEMY SUBS AND SHIPS AHEAD. MAN WEAPONS!*
*REPEAT ENEMY SUBS AND SHIPS AHEAD. MAN WEAPONS!*
Thoughts process as the heart begins to pump faster
My mind trys to master this devilsh puzzle of disaster
Enemy ships & subs ahead, thinkin about what Gabe had said
Mind on overdrive was I mislead, nows not the time to go brain dead
Nuclear wars goin on above, wars a memory I'm reminiscent of
Cant get caught up now, gotta make it home to the one I love
Years 2016 the russians are greatly prepared with submarines
But our machines are equipped to blow theirs to smithereens
Sailors manning their positions ready for war with high ambitions
Orders been givin to carry out missions, nomatter the conditions
Equipped with cruise missiles, torpedos and nuclear war heads
Anything ahead is blown to shreds cause were Navy thoroughbreds
All our minds are racing, captains walkin back and forth pacing
Waiting on the enemy, do we fire first? thats what were debating
Flipped the firing switch, hit the button *oh shit* theres a glitch
Eye muscles began to twitch, torpedo fired *fuck* it was a miss
"Captain theres two more ships" everyones still tryin to come to grips
Russias got enough nukes to blow the US up like a solar eclipse
A loud explosions felt, suddenly I thought my feet began to melt
Couldnt begin to imagine the hand of cards that destiny had dealt
Reactor Officer shouting that they blasted the nuclear reactor
Emotions flow faster once my brain processes this deadly factor
Members fiercly searchin for their own special life perserver suits
Ever so quickly equippin our suits and boots tryin to grab the recruits
Navymen gettin infected from all the radiation that was unexpected
Affected but displaying dedication, its sad death will leave em neglected
Waters pushin the sub down caught in the moment frantically lookin around
Reaching the profound depths of the ocean, briefly it looked safe and sound
Another explosion in the depths of the sea something you only see on TV
Subs about to blow the pressures beginning to reach up to a 1000 degrees
Escape trunk found, latch the hatch, the top quickly became detached
I was suddenly dispatched, thats when I noticed we were mismatched
But wait! An enemy sub looks to invade, or are they coming to my aid?
I'm dismayed and its easily displayed but I had a plan, weapon and grenades
Entered the sub and everyone stared, luckily I had came onboard prepared
It was a trap I was offically ensnared, I had a clue that I wouldnt be spared
Captain started speakin in Russian, this was definitly a serious discussion
I was facing a repercussion, *WHACK* I was pistol whipped into concussion
Awoke numb and sore, but what did I see? Looked like this to be an encore
This is whats called for, all this shit seems too reminiscent of the cold war
If I stay with the Russians its treason, So this is my chance to get even
Blow the reactor they'll be caught breathin, loyality to my countrys my reason
So I caused the explosion and their sub was doomed for nuclear erosion
Ducked out the escape trunk swimmin to safety at the top of the ocean
Seen an American DSRV, this is when I knew I was soon to be home free
Russians sub reached 1000degrees, only remains was bodies and debris
The Rescue Vehicle slowly departed, while I left the war had barely started
There was still so much area uncharted, what I saw wasnt for the fainthearted

Chris never saw Gabe after the mission...
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