Rules:
First to 5 wins
3/0 is a Ko
10 bars MIN...20 bars MAX.
no dickride votes.
explain feedback/vote.
no feedin off one another.

due by tommorow at 5pm e.s.t......1

nigga i'll rip ya in to pieces like false scriptures / when you see the flashes it ain't the paparazzi taking pictures / hit you point blank leave you with a split decision / make your body look like the cause of death was a train collision / ...


rapping quit / you could be a Islamic Fundamentalist Terroist behind the controls in the AmericanAirlines plane cockpit / and still couldn't make a hit / if dead men could talk i'm going to leave you telling "Tales from the crypt" / treat you like a hoe make you strip but i'm a gentleman course i'm ma give you some (hollow) tips / fucking with me is gonna garruntee that you catching an "S.T.D"/ silently transmitted defeat / you couldn't spit sick even if you had herpes in your mouth and on your lips / ya only feeling yourself like Tweet / throw your music of a roof and it still wouldn't hit the streets / the only time you had clips(Clypse) was when you coped the cd / this kid was watching 106th and Park now he thinks he's man enough to beat me / wasting my skills on you cause i'm doing this for "Free" / you gonna throw up the white flag quicker than the Iraqi Army / do like Vietnam vets did to Vietnamese/murder you and your family calmly / brass and ass drop / the rest of your crew "dip" like cops at doughnut shops / when i pull the trigger i killing you softly / with silent shots / J-I-Z-M , i'll leave more kids on your face than a Summer time open fire hydrant spot / so you can see me come you cocky something stop / bitch do like your makup and run leave you and your team looking like "Hooter's" girls without "tops" / you against me is similiar to Israelis vs Palestians , guns vs rocks / acting like you the shit while during the day you wash pots/

lol...the funny thing is.....im going to post the minimum amount of lines and do away with you......

Suppertime.....


Ill smash the shit out you-u got me twisted-
half spittin ass nigga-im the butter on your buscuit/
Told you id smoke you-but you prolly missed it-
santa mustve forgot you at christmas-cause u NOT gifted/
Break you down like organic compounds-get at me BITCH-
your post gonna say "file not found"-with that trashy shit/
Jealous of a nigga- just because im much nicer-
We battle once-no back and forth shit like windshield wipers/
J-I-Z-M i spit venom like a viper-you a bump in the road-
Yeah your girlfriend and your mother-im humpin em both/
MY dick left some stuff in their throat-Scat victims-
Burn you in HELLS KITCHEN just cause i smell chicken/
Hit you wit DIVINE words-turn this into a BLOOD OMEN-
Told you to get a-HEAD in life-didnt think you would blow men/
You should learn how to flow before you flap your gums-
come through flashin guns-and give you fags the runs/
Unload an entire clip-and expose your mental capacity-
amass a victory over your ass-with pitbull tenacity/
Im ferocious, a blood thirsty demon whos bashin geeks-
the same massive beast who just wrapped your ass in sheets...



*wipe ya mouth*.........the minimun 10 bars.

yo...that 1 line was enough to beat your sorry shit.....and you should try and stop postin and let niggas vote.

hey, D, when we goin battle in rap battles?? Set it up, im in da mood!!

Well, Div ain't going ta like this but i'm a vote for Jizm but this isn't dickryding let me explain quickly.

While some of Divines lines were nicer than some of Jizms, i thought Div just overcomplicated. Now, maybe its 'cos i understand audio battling better but yours just wouldn't go - you spend tha first line and a half explaining tha punch thats last in tha bar on some parts. And that wouldn't be good in audio.

What i like about JIZM's is its funny (which is, imo, one of tha most important parts of a battle instead of straight punches) and its simpler punches were better - catchier and got a more immediate reaction.

So some points for you Divine.... i think you should lay out ya verses more conventionally so peeps can flow with it better. You had a VERY high grade of punches - some real ill shit - but you just overcomplicated it with unnecessarily advanced vocab which seems to be there for effect. I reckon if i wasn't such a fan of JIZM's style you'd have taken this, but his shit just appeals to me. Don't take this as beef or anything man - you got some serious battling skills (and although i didn't see tha match you went out in i can't see how you could've lost if you did that) but i just like Jizms approach.

And tha humour. I'll re-read it all later to go over it but it was close - as close as i seen JIZM come to losing. Tha humour and tha style stole it for me.... plus tha way you set it up put me off.

But i tell ya what - you wouldn't be out of place battling at bigger sites..

Dope shit but i like humour!

PZ>

yo oblivion goodlookin out........MC ILLEST...dont come in my thread unless you gon vote. dont come in here poppin shit.

... dickryding let me explain

I reckon if i wasn't such a fan of JIZM's style you'd have taken this, but his shit just appeals to me. Don't take this as beef or anything man - you got some serious battling skills but i just like Jizms approach.

close as i seen JIZM come to losing. Tha humour and tha style stole it for me....

But i tell ya what - you wouldn't be out of place battling at bigger sites..

Dope shit but i like humour!

...i thought battling was about ripping your opponent in to pieces...i thought it was about "skillz"...i'm beyond the K.I.S.S APPROACH (keep it simple stupid)...want humor watch a comedy...go see as stand up comedian...this is the "killng fields"...man this is jokes!...this is like a race between a Dodge Viper and a bicycle...and the bicycles WINNING...but whatever man...i've had several battles like this...peace and respect...i don't mind losing...as long as the other person was definetly better...this kid didn't bring his A game...uppin

yeah - a lot of winning battles are punches - but if you look at tha more creative battles (Eminem in 8 mile, Warbux, Point Game, Ill Chris and tha like) and you'll see a big part of it is taking tha piss out of ya opponent and making people laugh at him.

And don't try to validate your complicated style by saying i'm too stupid to get it - its good but in audio it just wouldn't go 'cos you trying ta use complicated words for tha hell of it.

Ya a damn good battler but its tha humour that appeals to me and JIZM had more.

PZ>

complicated words...hahaha...funny...UPPIN fo votes...

J-I-Z-M = 1
DBO = 0

aight, it's like this, both of ya'll had ill verses but I go with divine as the winner....... he had a better flow and better punches

hahaa...this nigga mad cause i shitted on him in a thread, whatever kid...drop HATE votes if u got to....your next.

why you tryin to make beef up in here??? I voted how I feel, and just cuz I didn't vote for you don't mean Im hatin. Stop cryin, cuz you probably still winnin anyway.

uppin 1 - 1

Divine:

nigga i'll rip ya in to pieces like false scriptures / when you see the flashes it ain't the paparazzi taking pictures / hit you point blank leave you with a split decision / make your body look like the cause of death was a train collision / ...
------very nice open

if dead men could talk i'm going to leave you telling "Tales from the crypt" / treat you like a hoe make you strip but i'm a gentleman course i'm ma give you some (hollow) tips
--------excellent word play

Divine, you also had some stand out lines:

do like Vietnam vets did to Vietnamese/murder you and your family calmly

you against me is similiar to Israelis vs Palestians , guns vs rocks


Jizm:

Told you id smoke you-but you prolly missed it-
santa mustve forgot you at christmas-cause u NOT gifted
----funny shit

Hit you wit DIVINE words-turn this into a BLOOD OMEN-
Told you to get a-HEAD in life-didnt think you would blow men
-----good word play

MY dick left some stuff in their throat-Scat victims-
Burn you in HELLS KITCHEN just cause i smell chicken/
---ugh, that was nasty...lol

Jizm's standout lines:

your post gonna say "file not found"-with that trashy shit/

come through flashin guns-and give you fags the runs

My vote goes to Jizm. I loved the comedic word play. Divine, I agree with Oblivion...some of your lines ran a little long so it took away from your flow..you dropped some nice shit though

JIZM 2
DIVINE 0

i'm d/q'ing Illest's vote (no beef) cuz you cant just vote on shit without explaining your decision. Where's the analysis? where's your purpose - quote - reason shit...highlights?..i'm sure Devine aint even happy with that vote. Peeps need feedback to improve.

my vote -

Divine - you started off with two ill lines which created the atmosphere for a hostile verse..then you fell off.
nigga i'll rip ya in to pieces like false scriptures / when you see the flashes it ain't the paparazzi taking pictures / hit you point blank leave you with a split decision / make your body look like the cause of death was a train collision /
That was fucking dope....
After that - lines got longer and more of a mouthful. I'm more audio compatible that text so it didnt work in my head. You over-extended your lines - too many syllables - just didn't flow.
acting like you the shit while during the day you wash pots/
^^that wasn't dope.

Jizm - what can i say? probably one of the best text-battlers along with Ninjamic that i've ever seen
Ill smash the shit out you-u got me twisted-
half spittin ass nigga-im the butter on your buscuit/
Told you id smoke you-but you prolly missed it-
santa mustve forgot you at christmas-cause u NOT gifted/
^^that was fucking awesome - flow - perfect with a dope punch at the end.
Unload an entire clip-and expose your mental capacity-
amass a victory over your ass-with pitbull tenacity/
^^dope - nice multi's.

Jizms verse was just better on the whole. More organised, funny and in my opinion - iller. It showed more experience and maturity towards battling than Divine's verse and basically ripped shit up.

Vote - Jizm

Jizm wins 3-0 - thread closed.