Hit Ms Mack with a "preemptive" attack / knock you off your feet but your use to being always being on your back / try to climb this mountain / and get your crown cracked Jack /

riding Amtrack is the only time you ever been on a track / don't rap /change your mind about battling me? / go ahead and wish you can dissappear make your heels clack / everyone knows you love "JIZM" thats why niggas be calling you back /cause your known to "suck" and thats a fact / drop more shells than drunken Italian waiters when i make your scream like Kia " My kneck , my back!" / you should of listened when your friends said bitch pack / now their yelling " its behind you " and the Jaws music is going off in the back / after this feasting ain't gonna be no "Return of the Mack" / you ain't man enough to beat me cause balls you lack / even though you prolly rock Baby Phat when the guns go off i'll have you wearing your "chaps" / or i might leave you giving brains to yourself with your brains on your lap / truth is when it come to beef even your shadow don't got your back / when your shaking your ass for money is the only time you make it clap / so since you on niggas dicks can i get a lap dance? /

my rhymes saturated with phat / yours are 100% phat free / took me a week to read your verse cause it kept putting me to sleep / i'll battle your whole crew / leave your "Mobb Deep" /

fo the kids who like K.I.S.S (KEEP IT SIMPLE STUPID) here you go...

lol....I just saw this...I'll respond as soon as I get off work

lol she dont LIKE me...she LOVES me..this kids an idiot.....lol Ms.Mack please eat this kid up.......1

damn...you done writing your shit?...got someone else writing it for you?...drop from the top!...it ain't that hard!

forgive me for the delay but I had practice right after work.....
since there are a lot of different types of judges I wanted to clue some of you in on a few things.

Notes:
*caps don’t mean I’m shouting…I’m just showing related words/phrases
*Bitch Ass Niggas is a Onyx song off their 1st CD
*8 is Sprewell’s jersey number


It kills me that MC’s don’t know when to back off
Divine I’ll beat you like BILL GATES till your fucking MIC-GROW-SOFT (Microsoft)
Its obvious that your words are sufferin' from chronic disorder
I'm bout to STAMP your big lips permanently “OUT OF ORDER"
I’m talented with this shit like the late Big L with ebonics
I rip BITCH ASS NIGGAS and shut ‘em down like ONYX
Everyone has their flaws, dawg yours is obviously spittin’
Do something more constructive with your time, take both your wrist & slit ‘em
I put suicidal thoughts on your mind, how long will they last
I treat your lyrics like a blunt…puff…puff…nah, I’ll pass
Your the offspring of a lost cause, you never were God's intention
While I stay attracting more attention than a nigga at a KKK convention
My words hit like hollow tips & buck shots they infest in your soul
Your like a weak ass COLLEGE FOOTBALL TEAM, you going to the “TOILET BOWL”
If I was a dude we could take it to the street and raise hell
Fuck fighting, Divine you can catch 8 in your back like SPREWELL
Do us a favor dude and BOUNCE like they do in the dirty south
You a rookie fighter son, you ain’t ready for a title bout
My flows got the force of when the Niagara spills
Your rhymes wouldn’t be hard if ya fed ‘em viagara pills
Right about now I bet you got your panties in a bunch
Advice: Try rhyming in HAWAIIAN maybe ya lines will have more PUNCH
Come at me again and you’ll have to sign a waiver
You fucking maricon, you suck dick for the flavor
Your style is played out, DivineBloodomen ya got stale
These cats couldn’t FEEL ya rhymes even if ya wrote ‘em in BRAILE
You tried to battle this femcee but weren't up to the task
That's what you get for acting like PRINCE nigga, stop "SHOWING YO ASS!!!!"

hmmm whats this smells like fish...nice except most of those lines are old and used up...shit i used several of them myself...and i knooooooow you didn't freestyle that shit...whatever...come on J-I-Z-M vote for your girl...MCD come on do your thing...wherever i go its the same old politics!...uppin

Divine what's up with all the damn hating. Is it really that serious???? I hate when punk ass MC's tries to discredit their competition by hating. I use to have respect for you and your skills but fuck you. There was no need for you to even post again....all you had to do was wait for the voters to decide whose verse they liked better.

Stop hatin up in here, I like the beef, but respect D, respect the person if they win, and J and Ms. Mack, if ya'll win, I don't think ya'll should rub it in the person's face. That just discourages them.

feel me???

VOTE=Ms.Mack

Ms.Mack's had a nice flow....punches were hot, this is one of my favorite posts from her....she really stepped her game up.....this is not a dickride vote..first off cause she aint got a dick, second off she came off way nicer than divine...although his was good too...i think if he structured his rhymes different he would come off nice...also his rhymes are too basic....still a good post.

quotables:

Ms.Mack
"Divine I’ll beat you like BILL GATES till your fucking MIC-GROW-SOFT (Microsoft)"-hot

"Advice: Try rhyming in HAWAIIAN maybe ya lines will have more PUNCH"-pretty funny...Lol

"Everyone has their flaws, dawg yours is obviously spittin’"-i liked that..

peace

MC Illest....you don't fully understand the issue. I know Divine is your boy but face facts.....he immediately started hating after he peeped my verse. What kind of shit is that? Common sense tells me that he did it because he felt intimidated. What victory are you talking about???? Jizm is the only person that has voted thus far. No one has won this battle yet. If I were to win, I wouldn't rub it in his face....I don't get down like that. Go look at my response in Divine's battle vs Jizm. I gave him his props but because I didn't vote for him he wants to hate on me......if that shit wasn't so pathetic it would be funny. Jiz won that battle fair & square. There's something else that you don't know......Divine was hating on you too. When you were battling Moses for the "crown", he kept PMing me and asking me to let him battle you first in the next tourney cause you were weak & he wanted to rip you. Wow Illest....with friends like Divine, you don't need enemies.

man this is great action...got to love the game!...Ms Mack 1- 0...uppin

oh yeah JIZM talking about too basic the battle you won vs me look at "your verses" compared to mines and you still won...couldn't get anymore basic than that!:rolleyes:

Where are the voters????

everyone knows you love "JIZM" thats why niggas be calling you back /cause your known to "suck"
^^ not only is that tha most played line against JIZM in tha history of mankind (trust me - i've used it before :)), but it kinda loses its effect when its against Ms. Mack. A Girl!! Girls tend to suck idiot. That lines more suited to a man.

after this feasting ain't gonna be no "Return of the Mack
^^ i see what you tried to do but its not good when you don't make any kinda link to who made tha song. Then its wordplay - i dunno who made but just saying "return of the mack" and nothing else doesn't work.

or i might leave you giving brains to yourself
^^ (*coughs*)Shes a girl(*coughs*)

and i don't think even you get tha hang of K.I.S.S. (catchy title fool). That wasn't funny. So that loses marks in my books.

It had some nice (if a little played) lines.

riding Amtrack is the only time you ever been on a track
^^^ principles good but shes kinda on a track with every verse she drops. And even I - who can't battle for hell - used that line when i was starting out.

i'll have you wearing your "chaps"
^^ as far as i grasp American terminology this is an ok line

But it was pretty short and i still don't like tha way you set it out. No offence but it makes it harder to scan... and tha lines were uneven too. Not overall bad - you could prolly beat half tha kids here if you dropped tha attitude.

Divine: 6.9/10

It kills me that MC’s don’t know when to back off
Divine I’ll beat you like BILL GATES till your fucking MIC-GROW-SOFT (Microsoft)
^^ dope - beaten his whole verse already.

I’m talented with this shit like the late Big L with ebonics
I rip BITCH ASS NIGGAS and shut ‘em down like ONYX
^^ do you know how hard it is to find an Onyx cd in England? anyway... back on subject.... sick line. Nice vocab with tha setup and cool wordplay with tha punch - Shut 'Em Down is an amazing song. Sticky kills it

Your the offspring of a lost cause, you never were God's intention
While I stay attracting more attention than a nigga at a KKK convention
^^ lol note to Divine: humour

Fuck fighting, Divine you can catch 8 in your back like SPREWELL^^ nice - wouldn't have got it if you didn't explain

You a rookie fighter son, you ain’t ready for a title bout
^^ nice line and kinda personal too

My flows got the force of when the Niagara spills
Your rhymes wouldn’t be hard if ya fed ‘em viagara pills
^^ first line is a little played to be honest Ms Mack, and tha second line is kinda too but you put a new spin on it and went well tha rhyme scheme

These cats couldn’t FEEL ya rhymes even if ya wrote ‘em in BRAILE
^^ dope like drugs

Excellent verse. You're prolly among tha top 6 odd text battlers i've seen lots from. (prolly D, you, JIZM, Ninja, Exodus and Sex when he does it).

You killed him. He'll prolly whine and call out everyone that voted against him but you did.

Great verse.

Mack: 9.6/10

Vote: Ms. Mack

No beef or whatever... and uppin'

PZ>

Well, this is an honest vote, I vote for Ms. Mack

"yo - This Poodle got tears in his eyes cuz he's been crying like a bitch -
After JIZM dropped-his-shit// damn son - you got-ripped -
and now it's like the Fire's too hot and you cant face it
ya desperate for a win but you cant even tie-ya-laces"

Those were some really nice lines and a good start.

Divine, you had some nice lines

" riding Amtrack is the only time you ever been on a track / don't rap /change your mind about battling me? / go ahead and wish you can dissappear make your heels clack / everyone knows you love "JIZM" thats why niggas be calling you back /cause your known to "suck" and thats a fact / drop more shells than drunken Italian waiters when i make your scream like Kia " My kneck , my back!"

That Kia relationship was pretty good. I just think MS.Mack had an edge with her lines. It had better punches and D had a better flow. But a diss is supposed to be about punches, so I vote for Ms.Mack

Thanks for the votes Jizm & Oblivion (love how you give your feedback)......Illest, I'm a bit confused by your post.....those lines you posted were from MCD's verse against Divine

""yo - This Poodle got tears in his eyes cuz he's been crying like a bitch -
After JIZM dropped-his-shit// damn son - you got-ripped -
and now it's like the Fire's too hot and you cant face it
ya desperate for a win but you cant even tie-ya-laces""

----thats MCD verse......Now I'll admit that it was hot but I can't take credit for the man's verse. Can you please re-cast your vote?

Damn i'm so GOOD THAT I'M BAD!...Oblivion kid my bars are above your head!!!...their some much dickriding this should be a porn site! if i would've spit her verse and she spit mine she'd still win...

Originally posted by Divinebloodomen
if i would've spit her verse and she spit mine she'd still win...

^^ no, 'cos her verse was better. Idiot. :D

You need to check tha attitude and stop acting like a bitchy little prima donna, whining everytime you lose.

Her rap was BETTER than yours - everyones voted for her in this battle so far, i think.

But NOooooOOOOoooOOO, they must hate on you. It can't possibly be that they've preferred Macks sick, funny verse to you're pain't-by-numbers, attitude ridden pap. I think you should maybe take an objective look at yours and Ms. Macks and then honestly say that you think you should've won.

If you do, you're a liar.

And don't get at me 'cos you're whacker than you think you are, ok? If you've noticed, when i vote against you shortly afterwards other people share tha same opinion. Why don't you go to a pre-school site where they can marvel at your "big and complicated" words (K.I.S.S.? my god, thats shit) and just ignore tha others points - y'know, like flow/humour/punches.

Just stop acting like you're as good as Warbux or Eminem or something and just get better.

Oh, and don't call me out like a bitch 'cos you don't like tha truth. Even if i did battle text (or audio regularly), i wouldn't 'cos you'd moan either way.

Just cut tha attitude fool.

Uppin'

PZ>

Ms. Mack ripped this dude ..

nice shit ma ....


vote = ms mck ... easily .. punches waay betta .. flow way betta .... jus completely a betta verse ..

good try divine ...

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Battle over......winner Ms Mack