first to 5 votes
3-0 KO
4-1 TKO
4 Bars (8 lines)
Due 12 Hrs. from this post
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check.

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=516639#post516639
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=43466&page=2

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ok yall here it is

This dude admittin that he took days to write his verse and he think he-cooler
Pinky’s raps are kindergarten and he made you look like a pre-schooler
You just a rookie, Tha title under ya name describes ya perfectly
I could write one line that don’t rhyme and you’d still be worse-than-me
You had this verse written for days so don’t even try-to-go-clutch
It’s like he tryin to save tha earth tha way he recycle-so-much
But we all been knew that ya verse was finished so that’s-OK-dun
Cuz his rep power matches how many battles-J-Wun


Explenations for tha people that are a lil slow:
-in his battle with pinky he told him that it took a few days to write his verse
-it says rookie under his username (dont go changin it after this)
-go clutch = at tha last second
-"to save the earth he recycles" (recycle = copyin his verses)
-his rep power is 0 indicating that he hasnt won any battles
- wordplay with his name J Wun - Wun = won (victory)

spit ya verse homie, ya better get this shit in quick cuz i aint waitin around

IIGHT QUICK SHIT!!!

Kid how you sport-that-name, hold the tears, cause J ‘stops wine’ like ‘corked-champagne‘//
Fork-yeh-brain, after I warp-yeh-frame, beef? Ill ‘dead~dis’ faster then when ‘corps-complain’//
Too short-for-fame.. How you hit me Lil-Blinky? ‘Bruised fists’ last time your ‘punches-sore’//
Ill crunch-dis-whore, then hunt-for-more, yeh verse couldn’t be ‘well~come’ if you read em in ‘front-of-doors’//
Dis cunt-get-floored.. U aint sick-J-WoN, they’ll pick-me, blame it on quick-keys, but ‘horkin in hotel rooms’ last time you ‘spit-suite’//

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aight, lets get some votes now

i cant even do categories-if ya want me to-give them all to blinky lol----vote=blinky

1-0 lets get some more votes yall

Punches: blinky
Personals: blinky
Wordplay: j wun
Metas: blinky
Multies: j wun
Structure: blinky
Creativity: Tie
Consistency: blinky
Vote: blinky


Good battle...but blinky had some pretty nice punches n personals dawg...return the feed back i got 2 battles out..

2-0 one more for tha KO

Punches: blinky
Personals: blinky
Metas: blinky
Multies: j wun
Struc: blinky


Vote: blinky

blinky basically came harder.
j, a little more work on ya punches and you'll smoke folks

Is it just me or did J Wun just get fucked over cuz his verse was better!

its already over but this is how i saw it:
Punches - J
Meta's - J
Personals - Tie
Multi's - J
Creativity - nothing great but its still J
Enjoyment - J
Overall - J

- Blinky's shit was basic there was nothing to show that he should have won.
- J was nothing special but he had decent meta's and punches.
- these fucking rookies need to learn how to vote.

VOTE - J WUN

Da Mut didn't count...
Score: 2-1 Blinky


*Moved*

why doesnt that count

punchlines: blinky
enjoyment: blinky
personal: blinky
creativity: j wun
multies: tie
flow: blinky
vote: Lil' Blinky

3-1 some more votes peeps

punchlines: blinky
enjoyment: blinky
personal: blinky
creativity: j wun
multies: tie
flow: blinky
vote: Lil' Blinky

are u kidding me? multis him?pffft and punches him? pfffft
your forgot the meta categorie..this n1ggaz need to learn how ta fucking vote

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Punches: blinky
Personals: blinky
Wordplay: j wun
Metas: blinky
Multies: j wun
Structure: blinky
Creativity: Tie
Consistency: blinky
Vote: blinky

Punches - J
Meta's - J
Personals - none
Multi's - J
Creativity - none
Enjoyment - none
Overall - J

sorry dracula this battle is already over - 4-1 TKO
thats house rules

good shit J keep doin ya thing

close this

im'ma give u tha real tha real... read this thoroly.... i kinda liked both... but there can only b one...so...

im'ma have ta go wit' blinky juss for tha simple fact that ya'll both had punches but his was personal, essential for any battle... j aint tryna take nothin away from u...

if ya'll was doin' a track, im pretty sure i would lean more ta j on this butttttt.... its a battle...

wordplay i felt wassa tie...

multi- j

personals- blinkz...

overall blinkz...

if it was up ta me, i'd say WHERES THA RD.2??? i needa see who really really wants this W... peace

nates spoken... stfu

thanks whodi but this already over

yeah round 2.. this time il demolish you kid...