3 barz
i'll spit when you check in man
get your lionks in with your verse

I'm Here...Spit.

....if your the -illest- i must be *competeing against hospital patience*......cuz that noise you poppin we <lyricist> aint undastanded *like americans and the chinese language*....

....this aint a battle,this is my -calling card- to murk this no name......cuz you beeting me is harder than pronouncing your name....

....you the -newb- so bow down to the shot blocker of !!rapworlds!!.......so ima kill ya name 'fore you get 20 post *like pimps and mad girls*....

ROFL. Ur Done Kidd....K To Tha O.
get your lionks in with your verse
...This Kid Think He's Good?? Hah!.. U'll Get *Hailed Wit Keyed Spitz*... Ur Record Sucks.. Fuck RW, U Should Get *Mailed To Venus*...and This Kid Can't Even Spell Links...So When I Think Of HIM, I Think Of *DAT BOI Who Failed English*...

..Ur Not On Mah Level...U Couldn't Elevate If U *Inhaled Wit Chronic*... Ur Alwayz Second To Payr...*Like Tailz Wit Sonic*... and This Dude Is Nuffin'... I'll End DAT As If *I Exhiled Ebonics*...

..Testin' Payr.Uh.Doxx?? It's Obvious *Ur Past Ur Luck*...The First Bar Put You 6 Feet Deep..and My 2nd Is *Still Attackin' Ya*...So This 3rd Is Lyrically Raping You...So RW Will *Call You Casket Fucked*...

Keystyle. Get @ Me. Don't Get Anything?? Ask Me.

nice shit from both of ya'll
this kid came harder than what you thought boi

Dat Boi

....if your the -illest- i must be *competeing against hospital patience*......cuz that noise you poppin we <lyricist> aint undastanded *like americans and the chinese language*....
Nice opener

....this aint a battle,this is my -calling card- to murk this no name......cuz you beeting me is harder than pronouncing your name....
Not very good, rhymed with name twice which fucked it up bad.

....you the -newb- so bow down to the shot blocker of !!rapworlds!!.......so ima kill ya name 'fore you get 20 post *like pimps and mad girls*....
Don't like it.... 20 post like pimp and mad girls made no sense.

Payr.Uh.Dox(This nigga doubled and made that shit like 6 bars)

...This Kid Think He's Good?? Hah!.. U'll Get *Hailed Wit Keyed Spitz*... Ur Record Sucks.. Fuck RW, U Should Get *Mailed To Venus*...and This Kid Can't Even Spell Links...So When I Think Of HIM, I Think Of *DAT BOI Who Failed English*...
I like it, a little stretched to rhyme, but better than Boi's opener

..Ur Not On Mah Level...U Couldn't Elevate If U *Inhaled Wit Chronic*... Ur Alwayz Second To Payr...*Like Tailz Wit Sonic*... and This Dude Is Nuffin'... I'll End DAT As If *I Exhiled Ebonics*...
Good, nothing more, nothing less

..Testin' Payr.Uh.Doxx?? It's Obvious *Ur Past Ur Luck*...The First Bar Put You 6 Feet Deep..and My 2nd Is *Still Attackin' Ya*...So This 3rd Is Lyrically Raping You...So RW Will *Call You Casket Fucked*...
Decent...flow is killin' me


Good/Bad Points

Dat Boi
Decent, flows on point, and i see potentional...
but it seems like you ain't really try.

Payr.Uh.Dox
Your structure is killin' me... You do realize "..." means to pause, and pausing lasts 1-2 second... so your whole verse is stretched like fuck and is hard to flow.
But even without the flow you got it


Vote:
Payr.Uh.Dox

The "..." Is Just How We Do On HHE and SS I Can't ReallY Help That...But There Are No Pauses In My Verse, Just Read It Regular...Uppin' 1-0 Me.

DAT BOI
....if your the -illest- i must be *competeing against hospital patience*......cuz that noise you poppin we <lyricist> aint undastanded *like americans and the chinese language*....
decent opener, kinda weak

....this aint a battle,this is my -calling card- to murk this no name......cuz you beeting me is harder than pronouncing your name....
weak, no rhymes at all, wrekked ur hole verse

....you the -newb- so bow down to the shot blocker of !!rapworlds!!.......so ima kill ya name 'fore you get 20 post *like pimps and mad girls*....
this wasnt a good closer, left it wide open

fairly weak verse... overall - 5/10
decent flow keep up
~1

Payr.Uh.Doxx
...This Kid Think He's Good?? Hah!.. U'll Get *Hailed Wit Keyed Spitz*... Ur Record Sucks.. Fuck RW, U Should Get *Mailed To Venus*...and This Kid Can't Even Spell Links...So When I Think Of HIM, I Think Of *DAT BOI Who Failed English*...
good opener, could have been more explosive

..Ur Not On Mah Level...U Couldn't Elevate If U *Inhaled Wit Chronic*... Ur Alwayz Second To Payr...*Like Tailz Wit Sonic*... and This Dude Is Nuffin'... I'll End DAT As If *I Exhiled Ebonics*...
kept the flow goin, decent bar

..Testin' Payr.Uh.Doxx?? It's Obvious *Ur Past Ur Luck*...The First Bar Put You 6 Feet Deep..and My 2nd Is *Still Attackin' Ya*...So This 3rd Is Lyrically Raping You...So RW Will *Call You Casket Fucked*...
nice closer, could have been better, but still liked it

Decent lil verse, i enjoyed this verse... overall - 7/10
dont stretch ya bars so much, but still good.. stay up
~1

VOTE = PAYR.UH.DOXX

alirte
2-0 uppin the k.o
or a turn around(hopefully)

Uppin' For The KO.

Punches - Dox
Meta's - Dox
Multi's - None
Flow - Dox
Personals - Boi
Enjoyment - none
Creativity - ?
Overall - Dox

- this battle was kinda weak and it was short but from what i see Dox got the win.

VOTE - DOX

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^^^vote on my battle cuz its gettin slept on!
i gave this battle a vote now return the favor.

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Chill Out...Damn...And That's A KO For Me. Close This.

Flow was a bit bad for Pay, but Pay got this