one single verse - 6 bars (12 lines)
first to 5 votes
3-0 KO
4-1 TKO

Topic:
- there is a shooting at your school
- he just shot somebody
- he is right in front of you
- what do ya do next

- check in with links -

Many a thoughts racing thru my mind-
As this fuck stands infront of me with a 9
3 bodies on the ground, added to that collection will not be mine
Tryin to pull a columbine – how’d he get thru the detectors
My belt buckle beeps- they search the crease in my coogi sweater
They say they do it for the better—but what should I do
Hmm… Should I run or should I confront this dude,
I cant go out without a fight—but im not ready to die
He got his 9 and he proved –his raps wasn’t a lie
I cant let this slide, so I punched dude from the side
He pulled his 9 and aimed at this range he’s gonna hit me
He pulled the trigga I heard a “click........” the clip was empty
Damn………………..


http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=43717
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=524462#post524462

do i need any more links?
yo blink -- thanks 4 settin it up

thats good for links - you dont need any more

still waiting on DAT BOI

the subliminal message was in front of my eyes
so im taking advantage and im not waitin to die
so the misery of my heart and souls lies awake to this bullied child
he points the mack at me and that was just it,i started acting wild
he's already missed once so im one lucky fuck
he fired once more im taking smart so i ducked
tackled him to the ground,weapon flew across the floor
broke three of his fingaz,as a teacher opened his door
held him to the gound while i went to the cops
told them theres been a shootin 4 peeps were shot
as they arrested this chump i thought of my life
but im one Libberated Exageration so i pulled out a knife........

links in a few

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/sho...8700#post518700
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/sho...8417#post518417

aight lets get some votes

yo botha dem was hott.
but my vote gon go 2 MattJones.
cuz towards then he kinda left u in suspence.
"i was like damn wat's bout 2 happen?"

my vote= MattJones

iight man
1-0

i liked em both but id give it to dat boi i just liked his flow better but i like jone's endin but my vote goes to dat boi
good raps guy

cool
1-1

uppin fa' more

nice post man-that shits hot, keep it up-

aight, 1-1

tha votes count but we need a little better description like a bar breakdown or sumthin

more votes

uppin this shit

yo dat bois was just more complx and more filling
vote:dat boi

yeah dat bois was a little better
i liked jones ending but you need moree than that
vote-dat boi

yeah dat bois was kind of a little tighter
i rekon jones was close though
good battle guys

my vote goes to:

"DAT BOI"

these votes are horrible

yall need to read tha rules for ya start postin this shit

flow=dat boi
multies=dat boi
complex=tie
best opener= lil blinky
punches=tie

good battle but my vote goase to dat boi

V=dat boi

dat boi!!!!!!!!!!11

dude i dont mean to be mean or sound cocky but
even if they explained their votes im gunna win cuz they all voted for me anyway

i also dont wanna sound mean but one of tha votes for you thought you were battlin me!!!!

what tha fuck is that about

shit that was me maaa bad nigga!!

fuck it....
Dat Boi gets the victory

lets do it again, pic a topic

aight DAT BOI gets tha victory

close this

start a new thread if you are having a round two