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i'm gonna drop now..this aint about who's better cuz i don't have beef with you..

yo - This Poodle got tears in his eyes cuz he's been crying like a bitch -
After JIZM dropped-his-shit// damn son - you got-ripped -
and now it's like the Fire's too hot and you cant face it
ya desperate for a win but you cant even tie-ya-laces
I got my foot in divines mouth cuz he tasting-da-feet
This loser's made-to-retreat// you weren't made-for-the-streets-
you'z a fake-thug - aint gettin respect -
want me to write you some lines? let me right-you-correct -
cuz this is a waste of my time but lets get this battle-on-herb -
divine couldn't get in with the crowd bein trampled-at-concerts!
Thats how much of a little bitch you are - I'm just bein-truthful
cuz you the scurge-of-the-youth -and you look like a fruit-yo!
feelin violated cuz you think we voted for the wrong guy?
shit - your boyfriend MC Illest well make sure you feel hard-done-by!
you better-run-guy - aww shit, stop cuz you trippin -
thinkin we all hate you:( DAMN BITCH ARE YOU KIDDING??
you're a faggot! I couldn't discriminate enough-if-i-tried -
this victory is like-a-landslide - divine be gettin-buried-alive!
you messin-with-fire! so fuck this white boy tryin-n***a
you better make-like-Timberlake bitch - and Cry me a river

[Closed]

WHASSUP MAN? DIVINE YA GETTIN ONE OF YOUR BOYS TO WRITE YOUR SHIT OR SUMTHIN? SHIT MAN - THIS FAKE-THUG GONNA PLAY RIGHT OF MAH SHEEEEEEYYYYYT.

dick.

INTRO

you couldn't be a "vet" even if you worked with animals / you couldn't get "brains" even if you were Hannibal / you never tasted defeat? / well let me give you a sample / soldier the only medals your gonna get is shrapnel / put them guns away you can't even "blow out" candles / while my rounds hit more skin than sandles / your verse is worse than President Bush speaking on all the t.v channels /

BARS

this wanna be a star couldn't get "shine" if he wore solar panels / you ain't a weapon of mass destruction but your still gonna get dismantled / you beat me?! you have a better chance paddling "UP" the White Water Rapids / you couldn't be "fly" even if you were reincarnated into a maggot / you beat me? shit you couldn't beat a faggot! / this battle i didn't plan it / i demand it / took your life for ransom / but i only got "50 cents" / from a priest who said ," He ain't worth a dollar , but when he "grow up" he might turn handsome" / your scared of the "Dark" thats why you sleep with a night light / since i'm way above you(skill level) / your afraid to battle me cause your frightened of heights / but heres your ticket anyway this evening you'll be boarding American Airlines / and if the plane happens to crash at least you got your chance to "blow" / what a minute that not true you love "JIZM" though / and go ahead and say NO but by the looks on whats on your top lip / it look like your in a "Got Milk" commercial" / and how you gonna stand and fight when your always on bended knees?! / well your getting a better look of the "Heavy Weight Title Belt" at least /
...damn i could have kept going on and on my bad
pEaCe aNd ReSpeCt

aight..you got today cuz i aint a bitch.
It only takes what?..10 mins to drop a versE? no excuses Divine - you will be d/q if there's no verse up tonight.

My vote goes to MCD in this battle. Divine how in the hell are you going to call everybody out and then take forever to post.

MCD your drop was nice....you clowned him in your opening & closing verses.

"and now it's like the Fire's too hot and you cant face it
ya desperate for a win but you cant even tie-ya-laces
I got my foot in divines mouth cuz he tasting-da-feet
This loser's made-to-retreat// you weren't made-for-the-streets'
----I'm feeling that. Your basically telling the truth

VOTE MCD

1-0 upp

My vote will have to go to MCD too. Divine, you had an ill drop, but MCD had iller lines

"yo - This Poodle got tears in his eyes cuz he's been crying like a bitch -
After JIZM dropped-his-shit// damn son - you got-ripped -
and now it's like the Fire's too hot and you cant face it
ya desperate for a win but you cant even tie-ya-laces"

Nice start

Divine, you should have waited to battle him for a while.

My vote was more like Divine=7/10

MCD=9/10

MCD had better punches and a nicer flow

thanks peeps...2-0 upp.

very nice divine

thanks hun i don't know whats with all the hate...i'm losing battles i should be winning(or should have won...i ain't getting any props or love...but its all good...their votes or the losses don't matter cause i know who's better!(guess thats what happens when a rap site is run by kids)...you kids are jokes!

stop crying - my verse was better - i aint usually big-headed but i know it is.

MCD.

I did type huge feedback late last night, but it didn't go through and explorer crashed, and i went to sleep.

So here it is; tha shortened version - rest assured i've read it all tho'

Divine - MCD's flow/punches/wordplay were all better than yours. You had a good verse but MCD just was better.

And whos acting like tha kid? Us - who are voting how we see it and not changing 'cos you moan? Or you, whos bitching everytime someone votes against ya?

But it was a good battle.

PZ>

3-0 TKO - you got sonned :D...*thread closed*