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Blind Verses
Verses due 5-26-03 by 11:59 est.

Aight checkin in and spittin the same time (I suggest you so the same).1

Ayo
I'll have-you-in-awe, throwin punches that will frac-ture-your-jaw
You claim you from 'Heaven' then Ima send you back-to-Allah
You stepped to a god somebody must of beat out your mind
The "The Beast Is Hungry" prolly why he tryin to feed off my rhymes
I'll be-your-demise applying force of my knee-to-your-spine
Cutting nerve signals to your brain so they won't reach-it-in-time
I see through your rhymes they transparent not as they seem
Im makin you nervous like you got a fuckin knot in your spleen
You dream to conquer RW but Im thinkin not with your team
They couldn't spit fire if their tongues were drenched with gasoline
And my thesis he aint nothin but a semen drinking demon
Believe me I seen him with his mouth cleaning a penis
Ima leave-em emotionally beat-en like Freeway when Cassidy beat-him
Im styling with freedom (freestyle) you need to switch your style just to battle me
But Demon couldn't switch styles as much as he switches his sexuality

Ha. Figured I change my style a little bit for this one, see what the response will be

15 lines dog. I wont bother to explain my bars since only 'experienced' members are sepposed to be voting so they should recognize the punches.1

uppin for Demon's verse

"I'll have-you-in-awe, throwin punches that will frac-ture-your-jaw
You claim you from 'Heaven' then Ima send you back-to-Allah"
--LOL. Get him!!

"You stepped to a god somebody must of beat out your mind
The "The Beast Is Hungry" prolly why he tryin to feed off my rhymes"
---Fire!




*waiting for Heavon's Demon's verse*

They claim to want to take over Rapworlds then they better impress me. I would love to see them come up with some personal disses to top that. Good flow Kataracks! SUPREME KINGZ!!!!!!

uppin for this kid verse

Heaven's Demon's verse...Because he couldn't get on...


Kataracts ain't seeing Heaven's Demon like that mythical God you believe in
Heated speach known to breach lungs, lighter fluid in flem flung from the tip of my tongue
Kataracts couldn't rhyme wit a decent metaphore freestyling ta Big Pun
Ambitious please... ya style's not malicious, couldn't beat me with a miracle and any genie's 3 wishes
Leave this kid phazed fa days stuck in a daze, amazed I corrected his clouded vision
Packing punches like immates in a crowded prision, now ya wishing
You hadn't accepted this lynching, stick ya head between bars, and grills
And bounce bumper cars till powdered bones mix with blood and puss then spills
From nosal cavities, with the help of gravity launch your anatomy with a velocity
That almost impossibly, gets caught in the Earth's pull till this fool orbits the planet
A loss for me wouldn't be in your blueprints if you planned it
And I wouldn't give a damn about ya opion when and if I demanded it
ya punches wouldn't have impact if ya fists had meteors crammed in it
Kataracts couldn't rock me out my stance, causing a avalanche
Confess you can't take the stress I am the answer the best you can do is g

hmmm that 3rd and 5th line ain't wrap when I keyed it in note-pad.... I'll have to adjust that in the future... Kat can decide if that counts or not...

btw that last line ends

"the best you can do is guess"

must of got cut off when I e-mailed it

*Vanishes*

Its cool dog.......

uppin for votes

uppin for some votes

Aight, this my last damn mothafuckin time Im gonna be uppin this shit. Lets see the votes rollin' in ya'll

Kataracks= 0
Heaven's Demon= 0

Good shit Kataracks

"I'll have-you-in-awe, throwin punches that will frac-ture-your-jaw
You claim you from 'Heaven' then Ima send you back-to-Allah"

goddamn what a fuckin ILL line yo you killed it

wtf was that war godz gonan take over rw haha dman well w.e 1

all you fags can suck om my dick

I wasnt feelin kataracks to be real, his flow and that was good but the punches werent so good, i think HD got this a tad bit. Tight battle though

Vote - Heavens Demon

vote - HD

Katarcks probs had the better punches, but i felt HD had the better flow, word-play and creativity...

Kat had decent lines but some other were not that good... so it was quite inconsistent...

vote - HD

2 - 1 in my favor uppin' for more votes

hmmmmm

stop free-postin' ... uppin'

LMFAO ok hd won this one.. but if you planned on battling me with that weak shit.. lol i would smash you.. herb ass faggot.. anyways stronger wordplay and punches, so he gets the Master's vote..

^ *smirks*

3 - 1 in my favor uppin'

uppin' for more votes... 3 - 1 in my favor

*waits*

uppin' for more votes... 3 - 1 in my favor

*waits*

Vote - kataracks

better wordplay, flow and he had sum multies but not much....
you had good imagination, the first lines were ill, you have skill

Hd - you ae getting mad dickrhyding votes man... foreal cuz (yo ass got koed cuz this shit its one sided)

w.e good luck to both...

^ you don't have enough posts to vote

150 + posts to vote... sorry

3 - 1 in my favor uppin'

Better Punches and that allah line wus sick...nice personal......well anyways i think hd is gettin some dr votes cuz this wus onesided the punches wer way harder from kataracks..but anyways thats my 2 cents....

vote=Kataracks
***Matrix jumps out this thread***


(i could do it 2 hd) lol

what fuckin battle are ya'll lookin at. kataracts killed this man with a passion. Somethins up with that son u got killed and u know u did. i dont think i can vote but that is some fucked up shit over here swayin votes he know kataracts killed it

I haven't swayed a thing... I barely even have spoken to tell the truth

3 - 2 in my favor uppin

Kataracks came with the personal disses, man. Point Blank Period. You can tell it wasn't no premeditated shit, or recycled garbage. But good battle though.


P.S. Y'all niggas ain't taking over a damn thing, especially with no average ass verses like that. LOL. SUPREME KINGZ!!!!!!! BITCH!

Originally posted by Master Disaster
Kataracks came with the personal disses, man. Point Blank Period. You can tell it wasn't no premeditated shit, or recycled garbage. But good battle though.


P.S. Y'all niggas ain't taking over a damn thing, especially with no average ass verses like that. LOL. SUPREME KINGZ!!!!!!! BITCH!



and you had people sit in this same thread and be like "why you tryin to sway votes" and HD aint sayin shit but "3-1 my way" or "you dont have enough post".... but when you got this niggaz crew member in here sayin that shit.....nothin is said.....


imagine that.......

this site is jus like UF....









*walkz away, shakin his head*

hmm, i can see why theres the difference in votes...

Flow: kataracks easily had the better flow i thought, and much more consistent.

Multis: while HD had some pretty good multis, i thought kataracks' were structered better they fit his flow more.

Punches: first reading kataracks's i thought there wasnt much punch content in it, but then i saw HDs sig, which made for some pretty good personal disses in his verse...but i wasnt really feeling the others......ive seen you come a lot iller if my memory is right, so i dont want to sound patronising here, but i think you need to up your wordplay a bit in the punches....the last line i liked

HD verse i felt was a bit stronger in wordplay and punches, but not by much......you need to come with something stronger than saying how your going to rip/kill/beat your opponent....plus try rhyming more than one word

so, overall my vote is for katarcks

yo this was close but to me kataracks won on flow multi's and punches

I'm pissed I see what you sayin about me comin iller cuz I was tryin to change my flow a lil bit from my previous ones to see how it would work, obviously it didnt work out very well so Ima stick to my original formula.

Anyway, thanx for the votes yall

Kataracks= 4
Heaven's Demen=3

More votes plz

uppin

*sighs* smh

uppin AGAIN

^^nigga be sleepin right..bunch of anus

i vote = Kataracks he had better word play and flow he most of createity he gets my vote PEACE OUT

Good lookin man. Finally this shit is ova.

That was a tight battle Demon, I see your skills and I hope you stay active.

Anyway I got this one 5-3