Ok.....most Of Yall Have Seen Me Rhyme Right In The Battles N Shit?


I Neeed Sum Serios Advice...

My Worplay And Personals Is Good In The Battles But I Trouble With Coming Up With Very Effective Punchlines......somtimes I Got The Punchlines, And At Other Times It Seems That Im Not Really Usin Any Punchlines And It Seems That Im Just Talking Rather Rapping....help Plz:)

help plz..............

mayne.. you're whack, & any wordplay you DO have is played..

but if you wanna get better... here:

Step 1) Accept that fact^ -- self analysis is the key to elevation.
Step 2) Put your verse into lines/bars instead of paragraphs -- it's easier to read & it'll help you sort out filler/garbage from the better lines

when I see you doing that i'll give you the next couple of steps..

uhhhhhhhhhh.....i see..

but give me an example of the self analisis shit..

start spitting on a mic
the longer you do any type of text the deeper of a hole your digging yourself in

ya cant get ya structure right now
wait till later

oh yeah... step 1 shoulda been realise that text battling & rapping/freestyling are not the same thing... they're somewhat related.... but very different... if you like complexity/wordplay/lyricism in battles then make a go at text... otherwise "start spitting on a mic"...