Line limits= 12 min, 24 max.
No hate/dickryding/stupid/crew votes
No playing off opponents verse
No biting at all
First to 5 or 3-0 tko....
Check in by Wednesday 28th May, 11:59pm CST
DROP VERSE by Saturday 31st May, 11:59pm CST
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G'luck...

PZ>

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k, here we go.....excuse the min. length, you wouldnt believe how much homework and study i gotta do :(


Yo, yo, yo……

I’m easily defeating-his-thesis, the only “head he could beat”-here’s-his-penis
He “doesn’t know how to be Ill” (Ill~licyt), so this geezer must be-an-amnesic//
Exceeding-ingenious in rhyme-so-hold-tight, like flat tires your lines-“don’t-roll-right”
You don’t just em-body whackness, you take it to a “mind-and-soul-height”//
I might-dissolve-lines with acid, just to neutralise your “basic”-verses
When I maim-this-herb-it’s “far from fair”, cuz the clown escaped-the-circus!//
deflate-your-purpose when I cork-this-bitch, all your doing is talking-shit
And your “flow is more inconsistent” than……a menopausal-bitch!!!//
Call-in-sick again kid(*), cuz you don’t got-nuff-talent to cop-the-ballots
This kid’ll “drop off tight lines” like a rope walker that lost-his-balance//
Stop-the-battle contorting-your-neck, battling me is a calling-for-death
Anyone who says you can rap well must be “pulling” much more-than-your-leg//

* Ill~licyt no-showed in a battle vs. MCD a while ago because he was sick

pz and good luck ill~licyt

tight verse

Solid drop Im pissed. Good luck



oh look another nullufier caught in my flames..
a ton of fire run inside ya and disorder ya frame..
harden ya arteries and brought ya the pain..
charged with arson and petty larceny when i caught ya place in the game//
Ya face will get maimed when i bring heat in abundance..
ya verse speak in redundence.. battlin me you seakin a sonnin//
belive you were set up and done in.. get up and get to runnin and call in ya man
tryin to land punches im crushin ya brittle hands//
you aint seein no belt you can belive il be felt..
when you just like ya little man ya stay peeing on ya self//
you can thank oblivion's mum for the ass woppin recieved..
so im givin ya some till ya crash and ya bleed..
Fold ya up backwards put ya head between ya ass and ya knees..
you lucky this is text cause im adict for audio.. leave more tracks then bad weaves//
come watch as im pissed gets ripped from dusk til dawn you can trust its on..
and when im finished you can change ya name from pissed off to pissed on//
for this song.. watch it i got this bitch in pink panties and purpel pumps..
fuckin pansey jump out the closet if you think ima punk//
come and get fucked.. so i can blow seeds in ya overies..
then you can tell peeps in ya gut.. is a growin MC who flows like poetry//





Yo i dont know when il be able to get online again im on vacation down in florida and dont have access to a computer that much. so if i advance could you email me when the next round is up. I can check my email from my cell phone. That way il know. Thanks Oblivion.

^^^^^edited to add this^^^^^^

tight drop^ uppin fer some votes

uppity.....

im pissed <vote ..cuz he said nice wordplay,good punches,..illict when off in some bar but it wuz hot tho but wont enough punches to counter im pissed..overall nice battle peace (no beef either)

ta

*cries because this battle is the least viewed of them all*

*sings* nobody loves me.....nobody loves me......i think ill go eat worms*/sings*

^^:POINT AND LAUGH AT U:: MUAHAHAH

*cries some more*

i won't vote on this 'cos I'm Pissed is crew...

just ta let you know that voting ends at 11:59pm CST tonight

And Pissed, stop crying you big girls blouse

PZ>

Has enough respect to honor your vote if you want to.

^^^respects that............but continues crying

alright then... cheers on tha compliment Ill

I'm Pissed
I’m easily defeating-his-thesis, the only “head he could beat”-here’s-his-penis
He “doesn’t know how to be Ill” (Ill~licyt), so this geezer must be-an-amnesic//
^^ blah!! come on man!!! they're kinda played!

When I maim-this-herb-it’s “far from fair”, cuz the clown escaped-the-circus!//
^^ thats more like it!! Ill as fuck...

And your “flow is more inconsistent” than……a menopausal-bitch!!!//
^^ yeah... flow/pmt a little played but thats cool. Reminds me of D's style of lines that

This kid’ll “drop off tight lines” like a rope walker that lost-his-balance
^^ doooooooope

Finisher was weak in comparison to ^^^^ but a tight verse

Ill
tryin to land punches im crushin ya brittle hands//
^^ nice

you can thank oblivion's mum for the ass woppin recieved..
^^ lmao GO MY MUM lol

leave more tracks then bad weaves
^^ ill

when im finished you can change ya name from pissed off to pissed on
^^ tight play on name.. ill

Damn.... some ill lines... lol at my mum being in a battle rhyme

Flow: Prolly to Ill... but thats 'cos Pissed flowed like text... and Ill had his audio flow that i rapped out loud and suited it
Punches: Pissed.... Ill's was more audio based again
Multies: Pissed just... its that audio/text thing again...

I'm afraid i'm a have ta vote for I'm Pissed - i think if this was audio it'd prolly be Ill~lycit... due to flow and style of punches... but its text. So i think Shane just came harder.

Well done man ta I'm Pissed. Sorry man ta Ill.

Dope battle tho' - prolly hottest of this round. Good stuff from both of ya... i reckong you/D (if Ninja didn't pop back) would contest an audio final when we get to it, Ill. Just more suited to it than text.

So, yeah. Have fun on ya vacation, man. And stop blubbing Shane.

PZ>

thanks fer the vote

*cheers up somewhat*

OK i changed my mind Oblivion is not aloud to vote.. LOL j/p

Yea you right its been a while since i did text but just figured i contribute to the tourny.


Ok im not mad at oblivion's vote, witch i must say was very well explained but dam dog you could have mentioned my favotite 2 lines.


you aint seein no belt you can belive il be felt..
when you just like ya little man ya stay peeing on ya self//
^^his lil man relay looks like its peeing on its self, lol

come and get fucked.. so i can blow seeds in ya overies..
then you can tell peeps in ya gut.. is a growin MC who flows like poetry//
^^^ this had to get some love^^

Good look for voting Oblivion i would have sucked for it to end on one vote. Now atleast thier is 2. lol

Good luck Im pissed.

^^ lol... sorry man...

Both those quoted parts were hot... and i didn't quote them for a reason i'm not entirely sure of lol But they have been seen and respected lol

Anyway... I'm Pissed advances to round 3 and, sadly hehe, Ill~lycit doesn't... i'll expect ta see ya sign up for that audio tournament tho' dawg :D

PZ>