TheKhan G
07-21-2005, 03:19 PM
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=574990#post574990
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=48135
wait I will post my rhyme in a little bit
TheKhan G
07-21-2005, 03:37 PM
Flashlight I take your cash right
In a stick up pick up your teeth
this is how real men settle beef
Relief needed to save flashlight
Relief like I gave his mom last night
she was moaning like she died,
You tried to pinkslip _____ but he aint me
you get slipped GHB
when he wakes proceed
to make him bleed
Fuck alex D
see your sig kid you are 13
penis hardley working
just reached puberty
none of your rhymes will humor me
Bleed with a knot on your dome
You got at home// a mom to run to
you aignt nothin but a cunt too
"you know what fuck you "*
I already knocked out your front tooth
You can check lines one two
* see his sig
That shit, Writting in ~ Ten-Second ~
How you no my dick size? ~Been-Checking~
Guess what faggot. my dicks ~Bigger-Then-Yours~
This kids a charity homo ~Wigger-Lends-Whores~ - His mom YOUR MOM.
After I wip your ass you can give me a ~Gift-mabye~
You remind me of a pus ball like a dog ~With-Rabies~
This kids not rick James, he's ~ Wayne bank~
Ill leave your mined gassed like a ~ Propane tank~
Im thirteen, And you say Im ~ The light ~
Mutha fucka you may be online
but offling you cant take a fight//
Stay black son
Uppingg.g
Tw!stEd
07-21-2005, 03:56 PM
Hmmm....
this is pretty weak but both are gradually improving...
Punches: Theking G
Personals:Neither
Flow:Flashlight
Meta's:None
Multi's:Flashlight
You both have to work on metaphor's....neither of you came with any good en's...
The disses were elemtentary school stuff...
But ya gotta start somewhere..
Stay up..
Speak.
07-21-2005, 11:47 PM
Punches: TKG
Personals:TKG
Flow:Flash
Meta's:-
creativity:flash
Vote:TKG
spyder-man
07-22-2005, 12:57 AM
wtf flashlight you didnt beat me fix your sig bitch
X-NINE
07-22-2005, 01:05 AM
weak ass battle
punches-hardly
structure-flashlight
creativity-plain as fuck
flow-flashlight
vote-flashlight
both of yall need to work on those metaphors like twisted said n shit
k?
The punchlines....i was not feelin em....yall need to make what you are saying MORE CLEARER so that we understand wtf ur saying, cuz the wordplay was very weak here.
$tyle$
07-22-2005, 05:22 AM
pretty weak in all categories, only thing making me vote for flashlight is that he had better punches and a couple multis no real metas for either
Vote: FLashlight
-twizted-
07-22-2005, 12:43 PM
Punches: Theking G
Personals:Neither
Flow:Flashlight
Meta's:None
Multi's:Flashlight
vote
flash
now get ya ass over to my battle thread against Too Fresh and vote!!!!!!!
vaughn187
07-22-2005, 07:21 PM
Punches: Flash
Personals: n/a
Wordplay: neither
Metas: n/a
Multies: n/a
Structure: flash
Flow: T
Consistency: flash
Vote: flash
Notes/Summary: T you was real basic with your flow, you just needed a bit more elevation than flash needed... Flash decent but your punches could be a bit stronger... we all working here keep working namean
.Blessed
07-22-2005, 07:30 PM
flow=theking
punches=flash
personals=both
metas=flash
wordplay=both
structure=flash
enjoyment=both
multies=theking
effort=theking
consistency=flash
Vote=flashlight
no hate you both did good