6 bars
explained votes
3-0 KO, 4-1 KO
this is my check in...u go first

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=48112&page=2
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=575241#post575241

You have nothing like an African
I rip of half your skin

Leave you disfiguered
Tell this nigga
You a fag like Big Tigger*

Like Snoop Dogg you better lay low**
on you're sig you qoute Tony Yayo
There is nothing left to say yo

"There must be a mirror [ on your dome] cuase I see me in it"
I made his brain start to spinnin like a web***

Lay out your mom out on a bed
Thats cliche, but that is everything he goin to say

Jokes about my mom or jokes about being gay
I already told you he has nothing like an African

*see rw news
**Snoop dogg made a song called Lay low, snoop is in his sig
***See his sig for yayo quote, I am saying I will make him start to think, spyders spin webs
bars 5 and 6 are about how he is going to use cliche rhymes, you have nothing like african- africans are generally poor.

^weak.....

don't freepost I did that in 7 min it was a freestyle , what do you know about that you pre write your shit asshole.

Alright listen up -King G,-
Did you really think you could of -beat me?-
Your verse just sucked so -badly-

Your ryhmes just werent -good enough-
-Its tough- to ryhme like me, -difficult stuff-

-Like a bailiff-, im handin you the -evidence-
You get your -sentence- to stop ryhmin -this instance-

Cause your ryhmes are goin nowhere -fast-
Its you I -surpassed-, with a -blast- I -broadcast-

These ryhmes like a -forecast- that -you- cannot -outdo-
Cause the weatherman says sun for me and snow for -you-

Its just your ryhmes are -ice-cold-
I could of beat you wearin a -blindfold-

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links:
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=574284#post574284
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=576325#post576325

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aight........

heres my thoughts as usual

punches-spyder man
structure-spyder man
flow-spyder man
personals-theking G
vote-spyder man

aight.........I want feeling G's verse, cuz it didnt have much flow in it, and the structure killed it for me...As for punchlines, they were hardly any, and they sounded pretty simplistic and generic....


Spyder man, had the better structure and flow and punclines.....good job to the both of you...

aight thanks for votin 1-0 me...uppin

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aight well no ones voting so whoevers got the most votes at the end of the day takes this ok?

punches-spyder man
structure-spyder man
flow-spyder man
personals-spyder man

overall-spyder man

cool finally thanks for votings 2-0

punches-spyder
structure-spyder
flow-spyder man
personals-spyder
metas-spyder

well i guess i can say, my vote was for spydey,lol, i dint feel TKG's verse at all, 1

aight then KO