unlimited bars
5 votes
3-0 ko
post by tommorow
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Ill spit lata

my key style:

iight yo i'm about to let of some steam
i'm sorry if i'm gettin too mean//
i know nothing about you but this i know
when you ready to flow
you can't you just panic and make a no show
or jus choke//
or you might just feed off another verse
but if you nice you'll come up wit somthin' that is yourz//
i'll put you behind closed doors
all this steam will seep threw yo pours/
in a few minutes see you lyin' on the floor
i guess you aint talkin' no more//
put the gun to yo knot
like the weasle it'll pop
out yo left ear yo brain drops//
like a fat girl in a halter top
not a pretty site mon//
yo brain jus leaves blood all ova the rug/
we aint in a card game but i hit you wit clubs//
yo what ever you say or think about me means absolutely nothing
cause trash talk is all you doing//
jus pull out the blade cut wholes in yo chest
across yo couch pieces of flesh/
with the rhymes i spit it seems i'm fuckin blessed
cause all this shit i speak i still havn't been put to rest//
i leave no body in peace while they "sleep"
i go to they funeral and shoot up they peeps//
i hold down everything around hea
every word spoken heard mad clear/
but if you let it go in one and out the other
you'll end up in the ocean,lake,river
or in a room some where leeking from the liver//
take me out the ghetto you'll still get filled with two wholes
or if i catch you out the ghetto you'll still get "stripped" of yo clothes/
jus run up on you wit the mack point it str8 to yo back
tell you take of yo sweater,hat,keys to the beamer, nah keep them t-macs (sneakers)/
yo what you doin wit t-macs? i guess al yo money go str8 to crack//
well i can give you that; you'll take it that's a fuckin fact
but the shit i gave aint crack it iz fuckin anthrax!//
you ask for a battle i brought it
but where you bitch?! //
no where to be found
opps i forgot you got put 6 feet unda ground!

Intro-

In "violent" discussions I give more than concussions, My "punchline" production is the source of your 'mental" malfunction//
You cause a brief interuption while I fill ya thoughts with "static" like a "satelite" disruption//
Like students not following instructions u face me the reprocussions, I bang u like percussions with just as an introduction//

-Dust 2 dust-

My "Punches" are sick and come equipped to make Swipa suffer "Body-Blows"//
I’ll crush his "lost" flows and "Pause" them just like "Buffered Audios"//
Peep the legistics of this verbal misfit, ya better off with ya wrists-slit//
I'll blast ya ass since u insisted, i leave no "pens" for "traces" of balistics//
But in case u missed-it that means i'll turn u into a statistic cuz my "words" are wreckin-ya//
I "jot down sentences" with "phrases" that'll damage ya retina//


~Omit to tha presence~

Rockin' a *grass skirt* in Rainbow Warrior parades is the only way Ass-Wipa *swing blades*~!~ He *lick shots*, but like an empty pasture--I *won't get grazed*

This kid's about to *go down faster* then when he sees an erect d!ck ~!~Tryin' to *fuck with me*, cuz he's *pussy*-tryin to get *a-head* quick.

I'll split swipa's skull and *air out ya brain* just to blow his mind
Ya *joints are rotten*, tryin' to run with the big boys...ya far behind~!~Gay sex after the club is the only way he ever *cocked a 9*(lmao)


votes

[Vote - Fallacy]

Complex wordplay, intelligent vocabulary, and real nice, hard hitting punches. Falacy's verse was filled wit knowledge and in my opinion, complexity is more important than flow/rhyming in a text verse.

Swipa had some nice lines but, was a simple verse, nice flow and rhyming.

My vote goes to Fallacy as his verse would have taken alot more effort.

Fave Lines:


My "Punches" are sick and come equipped to make Swipa suffer "Body-Blows"//
I’ll crush his "lost" flows and "Pause" them just like "Buffered Audios"//

I'll split swipa's skull and *air out ya brain* just to blow his mind
Ya *joints are rotten*, tryin' to run with the big boys...ya far behind~!~Gay sex after the club is the only way he ever *cocked a 9*(lmao)

[Respect to both]

yeh i have to agree...

my vote is with Fallacy...

some dope vocab in there and nice punches....

my fave:

In "violent" discussions I give more than concussions, My "punchline" production is the source of your 'mental" malfunction//

likin it...

Swipa had nice rymes but i didn't see anything special...

VOTE-Fallacy

2-0
uppin

this was pretty one-sided fallacy won this all on punches and better vocab

vote: Fallacy

3-0 KO
good battle