5 bars max(15 lines)
6 votes 4ko
No crew hate or dick riding votes
You spit first >:/

Links:


http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/sho...08&page=2&pp=10

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/sho...7785#post577785

Ready when you are

I'm spitting tomorrow, I'm off on the piss tonight well in a bit... So if you have your verse already then put it up... If not wait for mine tomorrow.

Whatever hommie.
I'm not trying to play you or anything.
But you don't know what you just got in too

I don't know what I'm getting myself into? LOL we'll see about that...;)

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=48457

Right where do I start to with your fucking bitch ass? /
Im just going to leave you broken up like glass/
Which is all class, why don’t you and Flashlight get off each others dicks/
Or is that too much of a challenge? Go find some fucking chicks/
Jay-dub you aint even worth me wasting my time on you/
Is this your debut? Or is this you doing your thing for years but still have no clue? /
Seriously, you shouldn’t of have accepted this fusion/
I will beat you and leave you battered into confusion/
Nowhere to go, nowhere to run, nowhere to hide, face the facts, your losing/
This is amusing to me, because your choosing me, to face you but im refusing/
Because your not even in my muthafuckin league/
Your being fatigue but yet im still not intrigued/
Your lyrics are too wack for me even to take my time and look at them/
And have a look at my style, it can outdo most rappers of the likes of Eminem/
Now get the fuck back and out already you bitch/
Before I burry your snitch underneath my graveyard pitch-ditch/

Thought I'd get it off my chest tonight...

Not another fucking hater

1:Your name may be killa, but you ani't ready to scrap.
2:And the reason why i battled you.
3:Cause I knew your were wack.
4:How about that T.....C.....E
5:It don't take fucking rocket science
6:To tell you that your B....A....D.
7:I got the whole world saying were D...U...B
8:Its like I got them yelling my area code.
9:Like em did 3....1....3
Switch flows
10:I'm a killa for realla dogg
11:It don't take much to get me pissed.
12:After that I got to kill ya for realla dogg.
13:I bet your saying this kid flows is off the wall
14:Get off my dick.
15:And wipe the sperm off the side of your jaw

15 lines.Your happy.
Uping votes

Now. Tce press f5. Its faster then pressing the exit button.

Why do u say that

Why did I say that.

Uping for a vote

Alright...

Uppin' for votes people;)!

What did u think of my verse



Oh yeah.Uping for votes

Uping for votes

Yeah uppin' for votes still please people!

Aight Jay dub your shit was hot very simple but to the point . lines were a bit small tho so it messed up ur flow. but besides that it was straight

TCE real nice very lyrical but u werent dissing J-Dub u were just boasting. You got my respect tho your shit was hot.

Vote=TCE

Not hating on nobody just voting

Alright cool that's 1 / 0 to me, thanks for voting man... Keep the votes coming in people;)

No doubt Playa ...B-Eazy

Thats a bullshit vote
Punches win battles.
And you said I had some

I never said shit about ur punches nigga...i said it was simple and to the point...TCE had more punches then u did. Dont gimme that shit about its a bullshit vote.

That wasn't a bullshit vote plus he never said anything about your punches. Anyway still 1 / 0 to me, still uppin' people;)

Still uppin' please people;)

Peace!

Punches: Jay
Personals: TCE
Wordplay: tie
Metas:
Flow: Jay
Multies: n/a
Structure: Jay
Creativity: n/a
Consistency: Jay
Vote: Jay
Notes/Summary: This was a tough battle to judge because when you look at TCE drop half of it didn't make sense, just trying to put words together just to match, (nice try at the vocab though) and Jay really wasn't much of a battle verse, more like freestyle drop with like 2 direct punches to TCE

MY ADVICE...

ya both need to redo this battle and focus more on attacking each than TCE using words that don't fit, and JAY posting more of a freestyle than battle drop

Iight.
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Upping for more votes

Punchlines - [[ Jay-DUB ]] Both were real simple, no real hard punches nor creative punches.
Personals - [[ Tie ]] Nobody had real personals.
Multis - [[ TCE Killa ]] TCE had a few multis, while Jay-DUB's was like reading grade school poetry.
Wordplay - [[ Tie ]] I didn't see any wordplay whatsoever.
Flow - [[ TCE Killa ]] TCE didn't win this catagory as much as Jay-DUB lost it. Unless he is on some spoken word shit, nobody counts bars like that.

Overall - [[ TCE Killa ]]

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upping for more votes

Aight Jay dub your shit was hot very simple but to the point . lines were a bit small tho so it messed up ur flow. but besides that it was straight

TCE real nice very lyrical but u werent dissing J-Dub u were just boasting. You got my respect tho your shit was hot.

Vote=TCE

Not hating on nobody just voting

omg you said he wasnt dissin him he was only boastin...dissies win battles man thats bullshit..and if you say it aint you a stupid muthafuker..if i was dub i would be asking for a cat breakdown or sumit cos cmon..no disses no battle lol

2 / 1 still uppin' for votes and cheers to who voted...

Vocab:TCE Killa(still wasnt much better but was better)
Flow:J-Dub(i felt it flow'd smoother then TCE)
Disses:J-Dub(that last line was the best in the entire battle i think)
Punches:-----
Wordplay: Tie(damn near the same)
Multis: TCE Killa(having bigger bars may have helped a little)
Structure: TCE Killa(Dubs short bars make it a little difficult to follow)
Overall:TCE Killa

Vote:TCE Killa

This is bullshit.
But 1-3
upping votes

Can we get some votes in here please people!;)?

Peace

tce in my eyes took this one...tight lyrics waz off the chain. great vocab as well
tce gets my vote

jay dub your was hot hunni but need a little more structure and a little more creation otherwise not bad

Laura

I believe thats 4 / 1 to me. I win TKO close this bitch and thanks to all who voted.

My bad for opening this up but the rules wasn't read.
So its
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upping for more votes

Yeah still uppin' for votes please people... Didn't read the rules properly.

Flow/Structure: TCE
Punches: Tie
Personals:Jay
Metas: TCE
Multies: TCE
Vacab: Jay
Consistancy: Tie
Creativity:TIE
Wordplay: TCE
Enjoyment: TIE
Overall vote: TCE
this is my vote if you think its bullshit then go ahead but that wont change my vote

Hey thanks for the vote man. That's 5 / 1 to me still uppin' for votes people!

People vote up please...

You sure you wanna carry this on Jay-Dub, it's 5 / 1 quite clearly I'm going to win, LOL. Up to you though.

punches-tie
peronals-tce
wordplay-tie
structure-j dub
enjoyment-tce
vote-tce

really close battle damm my vote goes to tce on this one

Iight.
You win TCE

Thanks for voting. Nice battle Jay-Dub, keep it up;).