Ok, 5 bars
No crew votes
No hate vote and d/r votes
Verses due tommorow at 10 p.m.

iight, this is my check in

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=46982
http://rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=579491#post579491


Look, this Asian kid really thinks he's on top of the rest b 1
Well, you ain't the best, you worst than most of these netcees
You will never be a vet, thekid that registers next year will be one before you'll be
And you ain't Fresh, Flash and Jay-DUB are just like you, they a mess 2
Battles all day, but only one win out of ten, its a damn shame 3
You in a whole chain of lame niggas who try to spit game 4
Another kid with R.I.P. Mac Dre in sig, think that makes you gansta 5
I think you the target when 50 Cent sings Wanksta
I would rank ya, but you in the bottom of the list
Cause the only dude you beat was a not so impressive Dynamic 6
So stop with you pizzle rants, and stick with your thizzle dance 7
The only way you lyrical murder is if you killed Killa Cam 8


1- His avatar and profile has an asian kid, I'm guessing that's him
2- Fresh means something new, Flashlight and Jay-DUB are just like him
3- He's been on alot of battles, some undecided
4- Him and many others have many battles but need to elevate badly
5- His sig
6- only win was against Dynamic
7- His sig as well
8- Lyrical murder is below his username

yo man plz giv me an extension til tomrro night, sorry, i had to do a lot of stuff today,1

Ok, no problem

man, with your name you must be LAPD,
please leave rapworlds so we can keep it sucka free(1)
ima hit you man,cause like nas i can,
all i need is 1 mic, and i kill you like jackie chan(2)
007 style, i run wild,
im blessed with skill so they call me the golden child(3)
my verses are hot, your's are cold as ice,
bitch im not asian but i do eat rice(4)
call me mr. flow, i got tha answer 's you wanna know,
get in the shed where you belong hoe(5)
discrase to rw thats what you are,
i just got a hole in one, you 3 under par(6)
you dont wanna battle me,
you're a drop out, i have a masta's degree(7)

^^^ sorry 4 takin so long, i just did that, took evn longer cause my grandpa,1

Uppin for votes

Dam That Was A Good Battle
But I Have To Go With ....
Vote:sharpshooter

Ok, hopefully next time you explain the vote. 1-0

too fresh got killed imo, sharpshooter takes every category

vote-sharpshooter

AYE! You two...ladies...need to start giving out category votes.

*EXAMPLE*

Opener/Closer - [username here]
Flow - [username here]
Creativity - [username here]
Punchlines - [username here]
Aim - [username here]

Vote - [username here]

battle wasn't even that close, sharp took all categories imo.

vote-sharp

I guess I win 3-0 ko.

ok, i lose 3-0, next time tell them to explain not just sweep 4 you man, iss all good, 1

Punches-too fresh

wordplay-Sharp

over all/enjoybility-sharp

nice battle but yeah i got to go with sharp to