aight, here we go

10-20 lines
no d/r or crew votes
ya'll know the difference between hatin and criticizing, use it
votes must be throughly explained
3 to 0 votes is TKO
5 votes to win

check in, I'm writing now

I'm invincible to yo wrath protected by a mask.
You nothin but a concoction created in a flask.
Yo orgin is as fake as yo lyrics, created from shit
that been made befo yo dad hit yo mom's clit.
Now yo tryin ta spit....nigga, yo script ain't legit.
You'll never be an lyricist...........jus cope wit it.
You need to be baptised cuz of all the lies you told
bout being a lyristist when rhymes is aztec old.
You wanna be bold, then just step to da plate,
but when the ink starts flowin you life is at stake.
Scriptures pound on you like hammer and stake
Yo mind being heated like a chargrilled steak
My punches are da best, nigga cain't contest
shit beat on his chest, put em in cardiac arrest.
This anthax nigga so fake he couldn't cause a fever <--pronounce it (fee-va)
His nuts prolly got a tag that say "made in Korea"
Now I'll show mercy and put you back in Iraq
Cuz yo fake ass shit couldn't even pass as crack

did that one more my style, dirty south, it's slow but it get the job done, go head and write yo shit, i'll holla back later,
ONe

shit i didnt no this battle was goin on u just sorta set it up u didnt p/m me but i accept im checkin in and ill be on later so ill spit as soon as i get back 1

aight im back and im about 2 spit

aight look

how many fuckin rymes r u goin 2 use in a row that end with steak/
cuz ill hit u over the head with a louseville slugger when i step up 2 the plate/
and watch u lie there and shake/
like ur sleepin and a fuckin earthquake has just began 2 awake/
flippin the script on u puttin ur life at stake/

u talkin ur shit like ur a doctor sayin i aint nuthin not even a cold i couldnt even cause a feva/
when ill punish u worse then that by vacinnating u with the worst case of diareah/
then a week later give u a small portion of amnesia/

then a month later say fuck it and leave u with a tumor/
but while ur readin this shit dont piss ur pants cuz its just 4 shits and giggles its called humor/
in lamest terms its sorta sumthin like a rumor/

by the way thats a beautiful name u have but how the fuck do u pronounce it/
or is it just a fucked up term used in dirty south shit/

uppin 4 votes

still uppin

uppin for votes, stop sleepin

still uppin 4 votes

damn that shit was close to i think diletante had some hard punches but then anthrax hit him right back with them but i think anthrax had a little better flow to and diletante did use teh same word to ryme like 3 or 4 times.so my vote goes to anthrax

1-0 uppin

still uppin for votes, a used the same word (or same word sound) 3 times in a row to show word play, to show how i could bring 3 definitions outta a sound. Feel me. uppin

dilettante.....got it...


Anthrax....you need to work on your wordplay and punches and disses.....once u do that...u should be str8...

1-1 still uppin

uppin

Aight dis match was iight..
kinda weak but i felt Anthrax had better shit..
wasnt really feelin Dilettante

Vote: Anthrax

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damn come on people vote

come on damn its been 2 days and im still uppin 4 votes

damn, can we get a few votes please, is the battle that weak, see that if it is