rules
4 bars 8 lines
4 votes 2 win
explained votes only

ok, this is my check, and only votes by ppl with 100 post at least, iight,

ay too fresh... u still havent set up our battle.... and... the dude ur battling doesnt even have more that 100 posts... so why make a 100 post vote limit?

u mean post, i did it like that cause i dint want no noob votes from ppl that just came and say"clean sweep for name here" lol, im just sayin, ok ok, ill set up for our's, and ill post my verse hre in a while

look at this joker, he cant rhyme,
i can beat him and my meat at tha same time/
his lyrics are predictable like a fortune cookie,
no wonder under your name it says "rookie"//
the guy only has 25 post, the fool is toast,
this rookie beatin me is like me reppin the east coast///
he only wanted 4 bars cause he couldn't take the beating,
you cant win against me, you'd be better off taking an IQ test and cheating////

line by line stuff..::..

1:simple enough to understand

2:under his name it says rookie, and in fortune cookies there are paper inside that supposedly tell your future

3:the guy only has 25 post(wen i rote this at least),im right next to LA so i rep the West Coast

4:he said 4 bars, you cant Cheat on an IQ test, its impossible

ill drop links in a sec,1

u bout as fresh as a pussy gettin beat
openin ur hip lips and deep throatin ery man that u see

when it comes to fuckin with me
you dont end up six feet deep bitch u end up on your knees

i crucify u like christ and put u to fire like mice
u apply 4 a job,they'd be like should we hire a dyke

keep fuckin with me & end up rustier than a pussy
cuz u just aint knowin how how i be doin wussies

iight whatever i didnt even try there so whatever


no disrespect to jesus christ with that line

yea,uppin for votes, w/e, they dont need to be 100 post ppl no more, just explained,1

Flow= 2pac
Multis=Fresh
Punches=Fresh
Personals=Fresh
Overall=Fresh

Yo 2pacson... my nigga u just rapping to rhyme. rap do diss this nigga... rap to lyrically murder this fool. dont think of a line. and think about wut to rhyme it with. make sense wit it. But hey my nigga good try Keep it up B~E~Z

thanx 4 the vote, im up 1-0, uppin this shit,1

I Knew How This Shit Was Gonna End Up And Heres My Vote..

Punches-too Fresh
Flow-2pac
Creativity-too Fresh
Multis-too Fresh

Vote Too Fresh

2pac, Practice Sum More...in A Battle Ur Sposed To Attack Ur Opponent, U Know? Just Work On It, And Youll Eventuallly Get Betta At It

aight, im up 2-0, going for the ko mikey tyson style,1

Flow= 2pac
Multis=Fresh
Punches=Fresh
Personals=Fresh
Overall=Fresh

Nice Dawg, and 2pac Dida gave u some good advice

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alrite, done deal, KO, 2pac you said u dint try, well you should've this isnt just a freestyle its a battle, punches, personals, etc. work on that man, 1