12 Lines (6 bars) Verse due within 24 hrs after me. Or if you want to post first ga'ead.

checkin in dawg look for a good battle

uppin your shit

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=583982#post583982

still uppin you

Dat Boi.... wanna battle meh? seems ur opponnet has no intentions of battling you... if you down just set it up... ill post soon

naw man.....
i gotta focus on sum other shit
i'll take you up later

lol...is this a joke?

Upping!!!!! :mad:

You should watch out for my venom cuz i'm rattlin in your direction,and you can't get with that
I'm a make you a stray,i'm a loose dog,and so far iv seen you can only Roll With Kats (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=14186&page=1&pp=10)
You can't stand my remody facts,so i'll stop cuz i dont wanna kill Aer/Air cuz then we'll all die
You need a fuckin miracle here,my rhymes is to fly,being rescued by superman is the only time your sky high
You'll get chaffed without eyes,and clapped in 'Renolds wrap' like fresh chicken in the hands of the audience
Man you can't hot box with a un-known legend,i'm spectacular,you couldnt be a Perfect Artist if you Morphed Into Gladius (http://www.holla-front.com/forum/showthread.php?t=67464)
I'm sick and tired of this,that 'Screach' you call rap is bullied by 'Zack' just think of saved by the bell
Have you scraped like you tripped and fell,my ears are killing me from your spits,cuz they'd much rather go to hell
Got You Under My Spell,I'm regelia when it comes to this,i got 'Mad Records' to show like 'Angery Staticians'
This spats bitchin to get a rematch with this hyperethic text terific fellow cuz i'm memorizing facts like mathmaticians
We got peeps uppin this magician like encores i've done conqered this ass so i'm heedful to 'Raz' (Damn)
Hard to scratch off the past so you all need to insinuate a little harder so we can jestor thru a rematch

fuck my structure is fucked
damn it!!
i thought it was good

Believe it you're Gone, thought you would elevate but you're leading me wrong
So NO to AP, Only crews screaming "Gimme Dat"... pussy, are singing the song
.....Take leave from my Schlong, Getting signed? Nah ya Upsetting in all Joints
.Yah Small Boi, Only way you put ya Pen on the line is Betting Your Ball Points
......In Brawls? Yoinked!! Snatched, feet taken from under, This Tot is Murked
..Shot Bezerk, Trust Dat, I'll Have you Fold 'N Kilt like Tucking a Scottish Skirt
...No Mod it Hurts? Tried to take Black Devil's Position but most would say No
....Get no votes or Say.. yo, & Never Win... BUT you claim to Roll with KO'S?
He's shelterd, Timid, but He'll see so much Death he'll be immune To Royal Vets
..I'll Have this Yellow Belly Hardened from the 'Inside of his Shell' like Boiled Eggs
....I broil Pest, to avoid the rest, depleting the feeble & don't believe in an equal
....So forget your user title I'll drop a-verse quicker than Eager Agreeable People

Can we get a vote

Vote On Dis

Punches= Aero
Flow=None..
Multis=Boi
Personals=Aero
Vocab=Boi
Overall=Tie

Weak form both yall... didnt enjoy it at all... but u both did ya thing..

Ohhhhkay... 0-0... Can we get some Votes?...

damn.............



nice verse b





damn.........

I'll vote.


DAT BOI....

Your verse was terrible. Your bars are stretched. Punches are dreadfully lacking in impact, and you talked about yourself way too much in the end. An overall sorry verse. I left without remembering anything you said so I had to read it again and I'm forgetting it already as I'm typing this...


Aero....

I'm very disappointed in you. If I was held at gunpoint and ordered to name my favorite net rapper. I might have said you. (Before this battle) I don't know if I've elevated that much in the last year or you've gotten that much wacker in the last year but something has definitely changed. That verse was ehh all the way through. Ex:

".....Take leave from my Schlong, Getting signed? Nah ya Upsetting in all Joints"
--?

"......In Brawls? Yoinked!! Snatched, feet taken from under, This Tot is Murked
"
--?

It goes on and on like that until it finally ends. I took a huge sigh of relief once I was finished reading. I'm really hoping that you just took it easy on him, or you had an off day, or something. I used to have that same problem with filler until this last past year when I fixed that. But anyways, that first bar saved you. That punch was the only thing that I remember from this battle :mad:

Vote: Aero

LoL... My Niggah.. I took it Easy... But battle me and see how I really get down?

Definitely. Just wait though. We have no internet access. I have to drive to the library, so I only get a couple hours a week. I want to battle Virt first (since soooo many people have lost to him *ahem* and niggas act like he's me or something) and Rellik is going to battle you :mad:

*sigh*

I'll Have you Fold 'N Kilt like Tucking a Scottish Skirt


i've heard someone say that on here before. Not saying you're a biter, not saying you aren't. wont know until i find it, but i know i've seen that line.

No u haven't... 1-0

punches aero
wordplay aero
creativity aero
effort dat boi
vote aero

punches:aero
wordplay:areo
Enjoyment:both
personals:areo
overall vote:AERO

I AM SUPERIOR!!! :mad:

dat boi ur shit waz ovaplayed hun

aero gets my vote for a rely strong verse

yea nigga i lik dem big words thnx

aero all day