lets see...

5 bars
3-0 ko, 4-1 tko, blah blah
due in 24 hours
no hate/d.r/crew votes
ill spit when you check


G' luck fam

check.. ive never done text battle lmao.. so just normal hate battle yeah.

lol, ic, well, ill have my verse in like 4 hours, im hella lazy bruh

lmao me 2. so jus blazing ripping the shit outa each other... in 5 bars huh?

i said 5 cause i was gon do it right away,lol, but, i got a wedding to attend to so ill say erm, 10 bars, cause ill be thinking at the wedding,lmao, and ill get this done by tomoro, ill try to get it tonight though if i get home that early, so yeh, 10 bars is what ill do, what ever you want bruh, just get it done :)

yeah 10 will do me.

you gunna drop!

How would you even battle with 5 bars anyways, thats imposible!
5 bars = (5 lines) LMFAO.........

its 10...to...15

Aye dumbass aka fuckfate...

1 bars = 2 lines

^^ lmfao... ahah

^well, that depends, in audio its not a bar = 2 lines, its one bar=about 1 line depending on how fast you spit

edit:to g hype

yeh, ill drop tonight, went to look at some new houses... and bought live 06 and day of reckoning 2, :D

^^ ok just drop.

Alright I'm not gonna argue, theres no point. Go ahead and keep thinking 1 bar= 2lines....lmao, and i'll keep "knowing" 1 bar= 1 line. I make tracks all the time, and took music classes for 4 years.... dawg I mastered this music already. So just drop the subject already.

and took music classes for 4 years.... dawg I mastered this music already.
Doesn't look like it in your lyrics :P

you gonna drop fresh.....
or you scared

i want you now clusion
ya pussy ass

do you?

battle me set it up and i'll drop today after i'm done typing up my homework

fuck that... from now on... im only doing topical battles or self rep...

Bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol... erm shut up.

Never!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ok what ever. im to tierd.... to argue with a cunt like you :)

Blah!!!!!!!!!!!!

check the call out.

Clusion... You rap?

yes i do.

check the call out.

what call out

God.. You reply so fast.. *murmers* No life

no... im going to bed you little shit...also its called... USER CP ars.

*cough* Sure It Is *coguh* lol jp with you.

sorry for the long wait clu. told you what happened on aol already, :(, o well, here's some keystyling::

This guy's bout to plunge in my dungeon/
he couldn't blow up if he were the terror attacks in london//1*

the only one here that's losing is clusion/
he couldnt be A+ if he had a blood transfusion//2**

fitting its his first battle, ill only erase half of his mind/
if he beats me then ray charles can paint a sick design//3***

I rhyme tight, when he spits everyone runs outta sight/
cause we've seen better punchlines at prom night//4****

To ELEVATE he'd need to use an energy shake/*****
whiping his slate, im sealing his fate/
him and winning is something that he'll never relate//5

explanations::

*He lives in england, hence-fourth the london thing-- the bombers blew up a train i believe

**A+ means blood type, to be A+ is also meaning to be ahead of the rest

***Its his first text battle--- Ray charles was blind

****at proms they have punch bowls.. usually there's a line to get some

***** His crew,elevate, which means to be boosted up, you can also get a boost from an energy shake

i did more than five but still...

Too FRESH kido, Your scents disapeard like an old Widow...
Ill give you a low blow, Keeping a clean tuxedo.
Sorry bro i keep forgetting... theres nothing there but bald skin,
Two peas and a small Pin, Ill knock you over like the wall in Berlin.
Your mummy still breast feeding ya', Or is it just Parental Controls.
Still playing with Action men and Doll's, Is it still Kiss Chase?
Or even better.. Back to Base, Kido your a disgrace.
You looking more like a fetus than you did in your mothers womb.
You look the same as you did when you come out that hospital room.
Hit puberty yet? or you still in the bed being wet..
Your a big kid now, you can go to the joke shop and get a fake cigarette!
Your 11 year old thing... Nothing like me.. ima hipiddy hop king.
You've been owned with a hipiddy hop zing, just like i would if i was in the ring.
Ding..Ding..Ding... Bells rung. the fights over, Farewell Son.
FRESH.. no way you smell like a fat man on the run. You've been Done.
You should never have begun. Go collect that spread of bark in the kiddies park!


Your mummy still breast feeding ya', Or is it just Parental Controls.
- his mother blocked msn on his computer through parental controls.

You looking more like a fetus than you did in your mothers womb.
- looks like s fetus for real

You look the same as you did when you come out that hospital room.
- still lookes like a damn baby

Your a big kid now, you can go to the joke shop and get a fake cigarette!
- sort of thing when you do when your a kid... (well i did) lmao...

Go collect that spread of bark in the kiddies park
- the bark they have for safety in kiddies parks...

Too Fresh - Your verse was very basic. The punches were pretty weak and weren't really creative. The lines seemed a bit short too which disrupted the flow a bit for me. The punchlines line was played out, as was the winning - relate line. Ray Charles line wasn't bad though.

Clusion - Not bad for a first battle, but still not much creativity going on. Seems like all of your disses were based on him looking young, you need more variation. Line length and flow was better though, and the "hospital room" line was pretty good. But that hippidy hop king - hippidy hop zing was just confusing lol.

Wordplay - Too Fresh
Structure/Flow - Clusion
Punches - Clusion
Creativity - Tie
Personals - Too Fresh
Vocab - Tie
Enjoyment - Clusion

Overall Vote - Clusion

Nice battle boys, peace

cheers man.
1-0
Upping.

Wordplay - Niether
Structure/Flow - Clusion
Punches - Clusion
Creativity - both
Personals - Too Fresh
Vocab - both
Enjoyment - Clusion


overall vote- clusion

good battle lads keep at it

2-0... cheers devo

Up..................

Too Fresh:... Your Verse Didn't Capture Me In The Slightest.. Shit Was Overplayed And Just Boring.. Like Others Have Said The Ryhme Schemes Were Short Being Hard To Read It.. Make Sure Ya Shit Fits Together And Flows Better Next Time..

Clusion:... For Bein' Ya First Battle I'm Cuttin' Ya Some Major Slack. You Did Better Then What I Would Expect From A 1 Timer.. Aside That You Said Some Shit That Was Just Mad Corny ..(Hippidy Hop).. Never Say That Again..Lol.. But Overall You Came Harder In My Opinion.. With That Said..

-Clusion Wins-

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

I win 3-0 TKO... nice battle too fresh. peace.

hah, good battle, not really, but you know what i mean