hellsingboy
10-01-2005, 03:15 PM
rules was listed in callout but i dont care who goes first
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View Full Version : Hsb Vs Craze44 hellsingboy 10-01-2005, 03:15 PM rules was listed in callout but i dont care who goes first craze44 10-01-2005, 03:24 PM alrite let me tell yall about this guy named hsb since hes battlin me hes headed to hell you see does he think hes the devil man that i dont know but hes outta his mind for agreein battle craze44 i bet this guy will be a newbie the rest of his career but hes about to be disposed of like alcoholics do beer he said even tho i referred him im still gonna get stomped on thats gotta be a joke even tho i missed the pun now lets see what kind of disses you can hit me with and by the way have lots of fun bein satans bitch hellsingboy 10-01-2005, 03:33 PM you thought there was punches in that i just felt slaps so i went on to make my freestyle battle verse and laughed cuz that wasnt very good all to come at me like that you crazy dawg was you tryin to come in last yo fake songs is like william hung on american idol and thats definently considered to be suicidal dont even act like you know you comin in first you need a new name it should be rapworlds worst rappin like that folks might think you jumpin off a buildin because you was the only person that rap was killin haha no beef its all good just a battle you know how its gotta be done now lets get some votes in this bitch xisytxisxis 10-02-2005, 01:51 PM Post your links swine xisytxisxis 10-02-2005, 02:10 PM Why can't I edit my above post? Punches: Hsb Personals: C Wordplay: Hsb Metaphors: Hsb Flow: C/Hsb Multies: / Structure: C/Hsb Complexity: / Consistency: Hsb Vocab: / Comments: Both verses were pretty equal imo. The only differences were minor but doesn't matter how small it is just enough to take the catagorie. Both had about one ok metaphor but hsb's was a bit better. Hsb also had a little more wordplay. Flow and structure I really saw no difference. If you merged the two together they'd flow like one verse lol. Consistency Hsb I just got a bit more into and had fewer spots where I had to double take so I gave him that one. Vote: Hellsingboy (6-3) Hellsingboy: 1 Craze: 0 plimstarr 10-02-2005, 05:25 PM Not Much To Split These Apart,im Only A Rookie But I Felt No Fire Comin From These W/play-hsb Peronals-hsb Flow-both Multis-/ Punches-craze Hsb Just Took This For Me. ILL-LoGiK™ 10-15-2005, 05:42 PM Punches:hsb vocab:hsb flow:both multis:none vote:hellsingboy hellsingboy had messed him up in this battle but good battle Vokals 10-15-2005, 07:17 PM closed until both of you PM me 2 links on battles u voted for |