Im goin spit fire from the start so dont be comin no nearer/
you up against me,you makin yoself look INFERIOR/
but you got some balls,steppin right to my battle/
now I've herded to in,you gettin slaughtered like cattle.
If iI was a gangsta ,talkin all gats n guns/
Id b a str8 liar or up there with BIG PUN/
but I got a tongue,which makes what i spit deadly/
when i go n destroy you,i'll do yo funeralo medley.
If i was a soldier and you were my gun/
I'd still pull you tro pieces to have me some fun/
but you aint no gun,a gun creates DANGER N DOOM/
goin kick your ass off my thread,just dont have me the room.
Now if you were a TRAIN your WHEELS would DERAIL/
cuz i seen your rymes an at best theyre only FRAIL/
but im like a TRAIN,I FLOW over great TRACKS/
met your woman last night,went an emptied my SACK.
I sent other rymers reelin,FEARING the ARENA/
SPINNIN my VOCAB arond,just like HURRICANE KATRINA/
I know my rymes stronger and yours is just WEAKER/
better find you some shelter cuz im comin back in just like RITA.
You supposed be an EAGLE but you more liker a PIDGEON/
a VERMIN with WINGS,are you scared,you be twitchin/
you thought you was the HUNTER and i was your PREY/
BIRDIE you got it wrong,time to get down n PRAY.

PLIMSTARR 2MC N-40

2 LINKS
HTTP://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52327
HTTP://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?=51631

RESPECT EAGLE,POST IT BRO >:/

iight real quick drop

hahah this kid *must be* *Afraid of me* -the most-/
they way he came back and edited his -post-/*
you lack -technique- cause dogg that shit's -unique-/
you from england and still your vocab is -weak-/**
grow up man and stop using them -kiddie rhymes-/
no wonder your moms likes me, she can't get enough of my -witty lines-/
i let her -unwind-, then i slapped her -behind-
imma lay you down, you wont be able to see the light like me -closin ya blinds-/***
wouldnt be able to touch me if ya wits and punches -combined-/
you *right tho* bout how a gun makes -danger an doom-/
but you aint that *bright yo* cuz right now you lookin up to me like you was -in a tomb-/
i didn't even have to -bust a cap-, or reverse it, talk to the devil and make a -pac(pact)-/
this bitch spits -some crap-, im just like the five fingers, cause this kid just -been slapped-/

*he edited his post
**england...english...vocab... if you don't get it your stupid
***he's done time before

the rest should be self explanitory

an links

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/sho...73&page=3&pp=10
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/sho...82&page=2&pp=10

now uppin for votes

Punches: DE
Personals: /
Wordplay: DE
Metaphors: PS
Flow: PS
Multies: DE
Structure: PS
Complexity: DE
Consistency: /
Vocab: /

Comments: Plim's verse was overall kinda cheesey in my opinion. Had too many forced lines and he bolded shit that wasn't anything special to bold. Nothing stood out except for what he bolded, and that doesn't count and even if it did, he bolded damn near every other word so it'd still be mediocre. Eagle's verse was more complex and had some nice wordplays and metas in it. Flow was way off but it's text so flow isn't near as important as wordplay content etc. If it were audio it'd be another story however.

Vote: Desert Eagle (4-3)

Desert Eagle: 1
Plimstarr: 0

1-0 uppin

man common yall vote just make it over with

Votes??

Punches: D
Personals: P
Metaphors: P
Flow: P
Multies: D
Structure: P
Consistency: D
Entertainment: D

I got it as a tie

iight 2-1 uppin votes

tryna finish this..votes...

Punches: Both
Personals: none
Wordplay: both
Metaphors: plimstarr
Flow: both
Multies: desert eagle
Structure: plimstarr
Complexity: both
Enjoyment: none
Vocab: deser eagle

overall: tie

well this was a hard battle you both came at each other pretty good but im going to give this a tie aswell
damm this was a hard vote ;)

3-2
still uppin

Flow: Desert
structure: Plimstarr
style: Desert
punches: Desert
similies: Desert
vote goes to: My gun, Oops I mean Desert Eagle
*Plimstarr work on harder rhymes. YOur rhymes are too basic get some BIGGER

4-2 one more so umm

vote!

i got to say this was ok but this is how i saw it truthfully..

punches:de
wordplay:de
personals:de
consistancy:de
multi's:de
overall:de

winner:de

i feel he had the upper hand on everything in this battle, so my vote is for desert eagle

Consistancy:de
punches:de
multis:de
flow:plim
structure:de
creative:de

my vote:Desert Eagle