15 bars you spit first since you made the callout
due 24 hours after check in this is my check

i meant to say 24 hours after both chek in

Just seen this.. Checkity Check Check.. Btw It's 15 bars max right?

yea 24 hours from now verses have to be in or DQ ill post when im not so busy
g/L fam

[[Dissin You In This Verse.. Mean While.. You Looking For Someone To Ghost Write]]
[[See Devo..I Hoped For A Fight.. But You All Talk And No Go Like A Choke Bike]]
[[Ya.. You Choke And Bite.. Hit Ya Up With Lyrics Then Choke You With My Rope Mic]]
[[You Lost Before It Even Started.. Leave Ya Screaming Louder Then A Poked Dyke]]
[[Your Rhymes Can't Topple Me.. Homie You Is Not A G.. You A Homo But Still Can't Body Me]]
[[Man.. I Spit Poetic Technology.. The Only Way You Can Show Talent Is If You Copy Me!]]

Hold Up Yo... Briiing It Back
--Accepting Ma Callout.. I've Already Signed Your Death Certificate.. Copying 50 Cent Lyrics Kid.. See Ima Expert You Just Beginning Bitch.. Cause In This Battle You Better Duck Like Putting Together Pringles Chips (in your mouth)--
--Ma Rhymes Is Iller Then Multiple Diseases.. Crush Ya Bones Into Pieces.. Like Emily Rose You Need To Quit Dreaming.. See.. I Got A Demonic Flow.. Dont Believe Me? Ill Prove It In 6-6-6 Reasons!--
--Ill Leave Ya In Ya Timbs Shaking.. Leave Ya Running So Fast From Manchester To Liverpool It'll Be Like England-Payments..Devo.. You Seem More Cocky.. Looks Like On Msn Flashlight Been Givin Him Training--

Links

1.http://rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=634402#post634402
2.http://rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=634404#post634404

LINKS
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=634414#post634414
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=634415#post634415

Coolplayer new virgin pussie, ill -abuse- i can see this cat is gettin -confused- i got the crunk -juice- youre just a 12 year old sperm sample who cant even -produce-

You're the best at all -you-do- and all you do is make people -hate-you- your fake -too- gimme ya face while i disfigure it, chop and -screw-

Your a shit suckin cum -bubble- your wack just another 5O -double-
bitch you facin a real g fuckin wi me there will -trouble-

Your an arse licking cock faced -fucktard- ill leave you mentally -scarred- emotions over flowing as you freeze can you read you wigga -retard-

Even if you spoke your mind you be -speechless- i -posses- wild skillz
with -success- you need to -progress- you will never be on the same level as -vets-

Bitch you make mud look -clean- ill split ya -splean- your a garbage MC
it -seems- to be this cat needs to start -puberty-

Though you bite so sharp at verses, you are so empty of -them- youv'e fucked plenty of -men-
this is the end of you my -friend- ill end this with an -amen-

thank you come -again-!!

Nice verse..

Uppin votes..

[[Dissin You In This Verse.. Mean While.. You Looking For Someone To Ghost Write]]
[[See Devo..I Hoped For A Fight.. But You All Talk And No Go Like A Choke Bike]]
^ok, decent punch.

[[Ya.. You Choke And Bite.. Hit Ya Up With Lyrics Then Choke You With My Rope Mic]]
[[You Lost Before It Even Started.. Leave Ya Screaming Louder Then A Poked Dyke]]
....i didn't "like"...(too much choke usage)

[[Your Rhymes Can't Topple Me.. Homie You Is Not A G.. You A Homo But Still Can't Body Me]]
[[Man.. I Spit Poetic Technology.. The Only Way You Can Show Talent Is If You Copy Me!]]
^lol, ok not bad at all.


Hold Up Yo... Briiing It Back
--Accepting Ma Callout.. I've Already Signed Your Death Certificate.. Copying 50 Cent Lyrics Kid.. See Ima Expert You Just Beginning Bitch.. Cause In This Battle You Better Duck Like Putting Together Pringles Chips (in your mouth)--
^ok, decent punch.

--Ma Rhymes Is Iller Then Multiple Diseases.. Crush Ya Bones Into Pieces.. Like Emily Rose You Need To Quit Dreaming.. See.. I Got A Demonic Flow.. Dont Believe Me? Ill Prove It In 6-6-6 Reasons!--
^nice, watch the flow...you lost it a bit.

--Ill Leave Ya In Ya Timbs Shaking.. Leave Ya Running So Fast From Manchester To Liverpool It'll Be Like England-Payments..Devo.. You Seem More Cocky.. Looks Like On Msn Flashlight Been Givin Him Training--
^ok i guess.
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Coolplayer new virgin pussie, ill -abuse- i can see this cat is gettin -confused- i got the crunk -juice- youre just a 12 year old sperm sample who cant even -produce-
^err, ok diss.

You're the best at all -you-do- and all you do is make people -hate-you- your fake -too- gimme ya face while i disfigure it, chop and -screw-
^the multi needs to be fixed, but it's ok.

Your a shit suckin cum -bubble- your wack just another 5O -double-
bitch you facin a real g fuckin wi me there will -trouble-
^ok punch.

Your an arse licking cock faced -fucktard- ill leave you mentally -scarred- emotions over flowing as you freeze can you read you wigga -retard-
^....?

Even if you spoke your mind you be -speechless- i -posses- wild skillz
with -success- you need to -progress- you will never be on the same level as -vets-
^ok, punch.


Bitch you make mud look -clean- ill split ya -splean- your a garbage MC
it -seems- to be this cat needs to start -puberty-
^ok.

Though you bite so sharp at verses, you are so empty of -them- youv'e fucked plenty of -men-
this is the end of you my -friend- ill end this with an -amen-
^bad finish.


Vote= Coolplayer, the Talent line and 666 line kinda did it for me.

thanx for voting still upping pps

Yup Thanks Witherspoon.. 1-0 Still uppin for votes.

I read both verses twice.
heres how it broke down..
Structure: Coolplayer
Similies: Coolplayer
Punches: Both
Flow: Devo-d
Style: coolplayer
MY VOTE GOES TO: Coolplayer
Both decent drops, respect to both of you.

Aight. Thanks for voting. 2-0

Still uppin for votes

stil upping

Aww c'mon peeps.. Start the voting

still uppin on this pps

punches..cool...
multies..devo
creativity..cool
wordplay..devo
overall-cool..
had better punches an they actually connected with who he was battling against..
good battle..uno

thanx for the votes all coolplayer wins 3-0 k.o

I thought Devo took this only slightly, but oh well to late to vote.