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View Full Version : Fate vs Plimstarr THE FATE 10-02-2005, 07:02 PM Alright this is how its going to go down. -12 bars -1 Round -No dickriding -NO hating -Drop must be done by Midnight today or DQ. *I'll spit first, Plimstarr check in before I drop. plimstarr 10-02-2005, 07:37 PM Drop Man,ill Reply Tomorrow Day. Respect Bro But Goin Bed Now Man THE FATE 10-02-2005, 08:16 PM There was a “challenge” to be accepted,….. and who was ~”Dumb enough for-it”~ “Plimstarr”?, I’ll pull his “Pants down”, just to show the world his “raps” aint the only thing ~”coming up short”~. And that’s not the only thing Yall, he’s “IQ” is in the range of 0 – 10, must be why he’s ~”retarded dawg”~ When the “scope” is on, he’ll wind up getting more “red circles” on his head than the ~”Target dogg”~ When Fate’s is “around and Uppin”, fo’ show you know the ~”~the sound is bumpin”~ His “battles” are sorta like his “bank account”,…… they ~”amount to nothing”~ (opps) And we already knew that you “don’t touch the paper”, couldn’t even beat me being a ~”luck maker”~ Practice dude,…. cuz you wouldn’t be ahead of “the game” standing in front of ~”chuck taylor”~ (sick) I see your about to “crack”,…….. so keep the ~”dope to ya self”~ And the only way you going to beat me is if you change your “screen name” and go ~”vote for yourself”~ -Fucking Loser- THE FATE 10-03-2005, 02:58 AM Waiting for your verse....... plimstarr 10-03-2005, 09:00 AM You call yourself FATE,but ya FATES been DECIDED you killed yaself bro wit that shit yo RECITED why you goin on talkin ,bout my BANK ACCOUNTS when u paid me to lay off u,the fukin cheque BOUNCED yeh,i took the challenge,cuz it's you whos RETARDED couldnt hit me with lines if i was holdin up a TARGET you exposin yoself man,wantin to pull my pants DOWN your'e just a str8 faggott,aint suckin my dick you CLOWN theres only one person who goes there,thats your WIFE its only FATE tho my bro,before we battle again I'd think TWICE you an OLD DIRTY BASTARD,lets call you DIRTY McGIRT wanna expose your kiddie porn weakness,fore i rub your face in the DIRT you said 0only twelve bars but lets make it FOURTEEN I'm sittin here as the KING ,n you remainin a QUEEN........... RESPECT PLIMSTARR________________RESPECT TO THE FATE plimstarr 10-03-2005, 09:22 AM my links HTTP://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=42603 HTTP://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=40917 let's startUPPIN THE VOTES plimstarr 10-03-2005, 04:08 PM Drop Ya Links Fate THE FATE 10-03-2005, 05:17 PM Heres my two most recent links: http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=634922#post634922 http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52564&page=2&pp=10 Respect to Plimstarr, good battle. THE FATE 10-03-2005, 05:18 PM Uppin for votes yall...... Fate: 0 Plimstarr: 0 PAX DECEPTICVS 10-03-2005, 11:52 PM Flow: Plim Structure: Plim Metaphores: Fate Entertainment: Plim Content: Plim Punches: Plim Vote: Plimstarr {_SmYLeZ_} 10-04-2005, 02:58 PM ^^ that vote is wack flow: plimstarr punches: fate metaz: fate structure: fate creativity: fate wordplay : fate votes : fate.....better punches ez plimstarr 10-04-2005, 04:23 PM thats 1-1uppin the votes PLIMSTARR ZuLou 10-04-2005, 05:41 PM To be completely honest, both of you didnt go too hard. Fate's rhymes were a little too long for me; unless you got multis in there, there should be no reason for your lines to be that long. your punches were okay. Starr's rhymes were pretty hard, but most of the rhymes and ideas (remember, battles are more about being creative with your punches than anything else) came from fate. he really put no effort into it, juss copied off his opponent. so my vote is . . . FATE Aura 10-04-2005, 08:53 PM Well, this is how I see it... Plimstarr, you seem to have a very basic flow, which really doesn't carry any type of originality besides how badly even the basic structure was used. The rhyme scheme was ok, although it looked very plain and juvenile because of the way you only combined the last words of your bars to rhyme. There were no punchlines that really stood out either. You definately need to work on a lot of your material and put a little more work into it. I'd have to give that verse a 5/10 at maximum... Fate, you came a bit harder in your verse. A lot of your punchlines were pretty effective, however, there were no real "WOW" lines, as I like to call them. It's evident that the vibe from your verse was a lot stronger. You included some small multies, which made the verse a bit more entertaining, along with a slight hint of creativity which gained you the lead. That being said, my vote goes to... Fate L.E.E 10-04-2005, 09:06 PM punches..fate multies..fate creativity..fate wordplay..star overall..fate good battle -Devo D- 10-05-2005, 01:55 PM flow: plimstarr punches: fate metaz: fate structure: fate creativity: both wordplay : fate Overall vote: fate.....better punches came alot harder THE FATE 10-05-2005, 06:33 PM Alright good looking out for the votes yall. Total score: Fate: 5 Plimstarr: 1 Appriciate everyones feedback, it helps, and I take all the feedback into consideration so keep it comming. 1, I'm outs.........BATTLE OVER! crimcartel 10-06-2005, 05:22 PM Flow: fate Structure: Plim Metaphores: Fate Entertainment: Plim Content: Plim Punches: Plim Plim THE FATE 10-06-2005, 08:29 PM ^dawg, You didnt see "Battle over" anyways, that was the lamest vote ever, I had majority of punches. Get outa here, you wouldnt know a punch if it hit you the face! ********BATTLE OVER********* THE FATE 10-06-2005, 08:30 PM Can I get a "MOD" to close this thread******* |