15 bars
no feeding, unexplained votes ( need to include quotes )
since i set this up late, it's due by wednesday the latest.


i'm checked in....



verse will probably be up sometime tonight.

Consider this my check In.1

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52411&page=2
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52586&page=1&pp=10

ain't too many links i could find, so only got 2.

Ok.Im about to drop

(said it i'd do it by wednesday, im a hour or so off...so what.)

req is mismatched for this cat...ya' not nasty with rap
cuz KO's have you experience "shortness of breath" like asthma attacks!
change styles wickedly..couldn't win, if this lame vowed to mimic me
replying to what i said to posts...only way he'd 'try' and finish me!
ya' rhymes are iffy plleaasee..told you were crappy with threads
don't think you 'wordplay is nice' cuz it has people 'scratching their heads'!
punchlines? eeyuh..his train of thoughts, barely a 'choo'!
hope you love the toilet biz, you took 2 days just preparing 'to lose'!~
bitch, you hear me! you choose...i'll bruise your weakened attacks
cuz they sleep on ya' raps, your garbage..even your prefix-is-'ACK'!
if you just started, then leave! cuz you don't want no parts of me
you'll just be a hero in memory, like the late martyr'd Reeves//
and yes my chick is the baddest, just mad ya not ripping or savage
cuz i'll take yours...break her 'Wahls' down, like clippers that had it!!
I'll have you 'hiding under the deck', like Gibson in Maverick..
can't score? wants to be SICK, so he writes...butt "misses the magic"!!*
critics imagine....him topple me? i'm a vet and a minion
the only time we'll see req. in DAT, is second opinions!!
message ya' sending?..."hurry up", my verse give you lots of help
never be winning, or on TOP..even said "you wanted to DROP yourself"!!^^
gets me steamed like pasta shells, cuz you key errors thats grammatical
and glad you call me "whiter-soon", cuz my fucking shine overshadows-you!!
i hope you like-your-"Doom"....cuz all of your homies got some "half-lifes-2"!*
my bars are 'all around nice', & yours just frequently catch attitudes!
so i can watch you "comp.lain", like you just mad at ya' Dell!!
cuz only earning a "3-5", when you rapping-in-Jail!!

sorry...

"magic" line....is Magic Johnson
Doom, Half Life 2...are PC games
Wahl...is a brand of barber clippers
DAT...is a type of tape for recording
Mel Gibson...played in a western movie called 'The Maverick'

whooo...... I give it to you Witherspoon. Sick verse, There was a couple lines where I was like "damn" not many mc's in my opinon can make me feel that. But you did it, Props. This is going to be a good battle, I cant wait to see req come back.

change styles wickedly..couldn't win, if this lame vowed to mimic me
replying to what i said to posts...only way he'd 'try' and finish me!
^nice delivery and punch

I'll have you 'hiding under the deck', like Gibson in Maverick..
can't score? wants to be SICK, so he writes...butt "misses the magic"!!*
^ Pretty sick
gets me steamed like pasta shells, cuz you key errors thats grammatical
and glad you call me "whiter-soon", cuz my fucking shine overshadows-you!!
^Got em again, real sick.
so i can watch you "comp.lain", like you just mad at ya' Dell!!
cuz only earning a "3-5", when you rapping-in-Jail!!
^ I liked this bar the best.

Good shit........

it would be good if he replies soon.

^^^sure would

he dont even have to...murked...haha