*N*O*U*R*
10-04-2005, 09:13 PM
hey u know the rules...
ash lee ice? pffft.. bitch is you fo real?/
she right though... she'll be ashes afta i finish dis deal//
funky bitch ain't got nothin on me she ain't gangsta/
i take my AK to her head, be like bitch who yo masta?//
and i don't give a fuck about you cuz you can't shake me up if yo name was katrina/
i don't know ms ice here but i'll chop her up n' serve her as toppings on a pizza//
bitch, i'll shoot a hole in ya heart for fuckin wit me/
you'll be like NOUR please.... slow down homey//
and you ain't intimidatin anyone callin yoself ice ya know?/
i'll send chills up and down ya spine wit one bar of mine and you'd still be like owned//
*N*O*U*R*
10-04-2005, 10:03 PM
here are my links
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/sho...3809#post613809
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/sho...3805#post613805
Dreamy Text
10-05-2005, 03:37 PM
Alright thi Ash.
I'll drop later i have classes.
Dreamy Text
10-05-2005, 11:22 PM
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=50917
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=40247
Links.
Dreamy Text
10-05-2005, 11:29 PM
Call me da lethal cashier the way you get taxed bitch
Dreamy make bloody deposits like tampon waste baskets
Life after death? Ha i'll just use subterranean tactics
beat tha shit out ya corpse so you'll learn to thank caskets
hear tha rounds last bell ringing for this bitch I’ma get into
I don’t even need words, just a middle finger and the F.U. initials
Immitate this fag till y scared straight i'll leave this kid as a noweight
cuz like splittin barbells ya punches they only commin with half weight
Listen youngtsa I've stopped errything you threw at me.
How you think you can land a punch when you can't hit puberty.
Meh.
A quick key.
But should do.
iBrowse
10-06-2005, 05:10 AM
flow: NOUR
Punches: Dreamy
Meta: Dreamy
Creativity: Dreamy
I felt Dreamy's better and NOUR's Punches were weak.
Vote: Dreamy
AntonioBanderas
10-06-2005, 07:51 AM
Dreamy Text - Punches hit harder, better structure, better wordplay
NOUR - Flow was off, structure was off, descent punches
Vote - Dreamy Text
-Devo D-
10-06-2005, 08:19 AM
flow: Nour
Punches: Dreamy Text
Meta: Dreamy Text
Creativity: Dreamy Text
Overall- dreamty text harder hitter punches and great creativity also i enjoyed it more, *reps* uppin for votes ME against TCE KILLA, :D
*N*O*U*R*
10-06-2005, 12:11 PM
haha Congrats Ash.... that was a hot verse by the way.... :D
THE FATE
10-06-2005, 02:20 PM
I know this battles over but I just got to say Dreamy took that.
Nour, Just need to work on your punches and delievery.
Dreamy just need to work on your structure, but you got it down.
Cool lil battle.......
*N*O*U*R*
10-06-2005, 03:18 PM
Damn nour //
why? what'd I do?