aight u wanna drop first or should i?

call me your master-christ you really don't want it please...Ash-Lee-Ice/get stabbed-with-knifes killin other emcees...for braggin-rights/
I'm the 'dopest-youve-ever-seen' ull get 'high-off-my-rhymes'/ill 'choke-this-dude-with-a-string' and leave his 'life-on-the-line/
itz meta kid i 'drop-more-bars' than a 'clumsy-bench-presser'/'chop-ya-arms' so u cant 'throw out punches' im cunning-and-clever/
this kid 'cant fuck with me' like a wife whos 'husbands-dismembered'/ my text is packed full of punches leave u stunned-from-these-letters/
time for a shiny-finish heres how ill off-ya-duke...u shouldnt have replied to the challenge and 'mind-ya-buiness' like 'prostitutes'...

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=636225&posted=1#post636225

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=636223&posted=1#post636223

uppin for verse...

This me Ash Lee Ice..
I had to get a new account.
I'll drop later i have a class in a few min.

Believe it U keep playin like this match wont get u bruised-n-tendered
But truth-rendered only peeps sayin MI is medical food vendors
Your only place is wack, Cant win your newb battles with that basic rap
But I had to make him stare at printers Till he could finally face the facts
This kid hasn't hit puberty yet...so text is probably sequel sessions
And the only reason you don’t make threats
............................................. is b/c nobody would feel threatend
You'll go broke, claims this game will make him rich, so hes told jokes
He hasnt beaten a good mc in months, me being the 1st he'll get no votes
He only sees supreme when he eats taco's with cheech and chong
hes weak and dumb
...............And couldnt bless tracks if he even 'speaked in toungues'

If you don't get something plz don't vote.
And have a breakdown saying.."WTF"..

"I'm the 'dopest-youve-ever-seen' ull get 'high-off-my-rhymes'/ill 'choke-this-dude-with-a-string' and leave his 'life-on-the-line/"

Isn't Ash Lee Ice a female...? That's either a bit line, or you're confused...

Yea. Must be a bite but i don't care b/c in this line he refers to me as girl, which i am.

time for a shiny-finish heres how ill off-ya-duke...u shouldnt have replied to the challenge and 'mind-ya-buiness' like 'prostitutes'...

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52586
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52635

Links.

Meta

call me your master-christ you really don't want it please...Ash-Lee-Ice/get stabbed-with-knifes killin other emcees...for braggin-rights/
ok , not a good opener 1/5
I'm the 'dopest-youve-ever-seen' ull get 'high-off-my-rhymes'/ill 'choke-this-dude-with-a-string' and leave his 'life-on-the-line/
NO no no no no wack wack - she's a girl 0/5
itz meta kid i 'drop-more-bars' than a 'clumsy-bench-presser'/'chop-ya-arms' so u cant 'throw out punches' im cunning-and-clever/
this was ok 2/5
this kid 'cant fuck with me' like a wife whos 'husbands-dismembered'/ my text is packed full of punches leave u stunned-from-these-letters/
this was ok i guess 1.5/5
time for a shiny-finish heres how ill off-ya-duke...u shouldnt have replied to the challenge and 'mind-ya-buiness' like 'prostitutes'...
this was a ok finish 2/5

ok seems to me this dude was either confused or just
a biter i dunno verse was ok in sum parts wack in others


Ash Lee A.K.A Dreamy Text

Believe it U keep playin like this match wont get u bruised-n-tendered
But truth-rendered only peeps sayin MI is medical food vendors
good opener 2/5
Your only place is wack, Cant win your newb battles with that basic rap
But I had to make him stare at printers Till he could finally face the facts
nice again not bad 2/5
This kid hasn't hit puberty yet...so text is probably sequel sessions
And the only reason you don’t make threats
............................................. is b/c nobody would feel threatend
this is my best, connected well 3/5
You'll go broke, claims this game will make him rich, so hes told jokes
He hasnt beaten a good mc in months, me being the 1st he'll get no votes
no wack 0/5
He only sees supreme when he eats taco's with cheech and chong
hes weak and dumb
...............And couldnt bless tracks if he even 'speaked in toungues'
this was a ok finisher 2/5


this was a good verse you came alot herder than you did with me keep at it.



Vote = Dreamy Text A.K.A ash lee ice

1-0.
My Way.

ayo i just joined this site didnt know if it was a girl or a guy and look how long it took her to reply mine was off the top fuck it though 1-0 dreamy keep votin

Lol.
Mine was a key too.
It took like 8 min.

Yea. Must be a bite but i don't care b/c in this line he refers to me as girl, which i am.

time for a shiny-finish heres how ill off-ya-duke...u shouldnt have replied to the challenge and 'mind-ya-buiness' like 'prostitutes'... -ash

i wasn't referring to u as a girl there its a punchline prostitutes give head people call it brains so mind ya buisness like a prostitute get it...ok now hop off my dick

I gotcha wordplay but it's still a punch towards a lady b/c you referred to sucking dick.

All right man, just calm down.... It was just an observation, and I believe I said it could've been one or the other... Don't get your panties in a bunch..

i didnt reffer to u as a female in the verse at all it was a punch... smh and u call me a newbie

All right man, just calm down.... It was just an observation, and I believe I said it could've been one or the other... Don't get your panties in a bunch.. - malagen

I'm calm man i just don't like being called a biter it's my first time on this site i didn't know if it was a girl or a guy and i just typed up something real quick

uppin for votes

Uppin for votes ppl.

uppin for votes...

Punches: Meta
Personals: Ash
Wordplay: Meta
Metas: Meta
Multies: Meta
Structure: Meta
Creativity: Ash
Consistency: Ash
Vote: Meta

Notes/Summary: Meta had just went harder for me. And I don't see the big deal, cuz I honestly thought Ash was a dude, too. And that prostitutes line was clearly a punch. It actually hits harder when going at a dude, cuz u are simultaneously calling him a fag. Ash did improve some, though.

thanks for the vote c i wasnt the only one that thought u was a man lol...
anyway uppin for vote 1-1

Punches: dreamy
Personals: meta
Wordplay: dreamy
Met's/Similies: meta
Multi's: meta
Consistency: dreamy
Creativity: dreamy

Vote: Dreamy Text

Meta

call me your master-christ you really don't want it please...Ash-Lee-Ice/get stabbed-with-knifes killin other emcees...for braggin-rights/
^no...bad opener - 3/10

I'm the 'dopest-youve-ever-seen' ull get 'high-off-my-rhymes'/ill 'choke-this-dude-with-a-string' and leave his 'life-on-the-line/
^...eh...ok metaphore, but the punch was weak - 5/10

itz meta kid i 'drop-more-bars' than a 'clumsy-bench-presser'/'chop-ya-arms' so u cant 'throw out punches' im cunning-and-clever/
^2nd line was a filler but ok punches - 6/10

this kid 'cant fuck with me' like a wife whos 'husbands-dismembered'/ my text is packed full of punches leave u stunned-from-these-letters/
^very weak 4/10

time for a shiny-finish heres how ill off-ya-duke...u shouldnt have replied to the challenge and 'mind-ya-buiness' like 'prostitutes'...
ok closwer - 6/10

24/50

Dreamy Text

Believe it U keep playin like this match wont get u bruised-n-tendered
But truth-rendered only peeps sayin MI is medical food vendors
^nice multi, weak opener - 5/10

Your only place is wack, Cant win your newb battles with that basic rap
But I had to make him stare at printers Till he could finally face the facts
^creative punch - 7/10

This kid hasn't hit puberty yet...so text is probably sequel sessions
And the only reason you don’t make threats
............................................. is b/c nobody would feel threatend
^eh...ok punch. I was expecting a metaphore. - 6/10

You'll go broke, claims this game will make him rich, so hes told jokes
He hasnt beaten a good mc in months, me being the 1st he'll get no votes
^didn't make any sense, but points for multis - 5/10

He only sees supreme when he eats taco's with cheech and chong
hes weak and dumb
...............And couldnt bless tracks if he even 'speaked in toungues'
^ok closer - 6/10

29/50

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Vote - Ash.

Decent battle.

Flow - Ash
Only because I don't dig the 1 bar cut-off for 'rhyming'
Metas - Meta hands down
Multis - Ash
Punch - Meta
Personal - Neither

On paper, this is a tie. Is it close though? Not really. Meta took this one without trouble, Ash spit a lot of cliche stuff...
Meta, some of those bars were pretty good off the top. I still don't get cutting up verses though...-Shrugs-

lol, due to grammatical evidence and certain word usage, i doubt dreamy is a female, but who cares?


Meta4 had the prostitute line that was nice and the life on the line one too.
Other than that, his verse being suspect as a biter doesn't even matter...

Dreamy text pretty much beat him in most categories.

vote=Dreamy.

Punches- Meta
Personals- Ash
Wordplay- Meta
flow- meta
Multies- Meta
Consistency- Ash
Vote- Meta

Easy.

Flow: Meta
Punches: Meta
Multis: Tie
Personals: Dreamy
Wordplay: Meta
Enjoyment: Meta

Overall Vote: Meta4ically iLL

Flow: Meta
Punches: Meta
Multis: Meta
Personals: Dreamy
Wordplay: Meta
v/Meta