8-10 bars
no crew/hate votes
must have 75 posts to vote
drop by Friday

ok ok 12 bars drop bye friday ^^^^^

This is nice . . . man. Devo, u was stupid to call me a dickrider


Who’s-the-best? Lou-will-press this nig-flat, Looking up my Pitt’s ass’s the only way you-a-"vet"*
Pickup audio, cuz you steadily getting’ booed-in-text, but I gotta give it to you, U take losin-well
I’ll demolish-his-shit, think you hard cuz you got Nas-in-your-sig? Bitch nigga, I’m impossible, -kid
But I’ll promise-you-this, I’m tossin’-this-prick, blow you up when I bust like I got NoS-in-my-cig**
"-Devo D-"‘s rep gets "–D oveD-" on, got "meds" in the arena cuz your mic’ll get "choked" on
Lookin for newbies? you chose-wrong; this nigga just post-bombs for all us real niggas to joke-on
Blame me your wack keystyle? You wrote-it-yourself; you ain’t "rock" the mic, you just "stoned-it-to-death"***
D fucked up, he just broke-my-respect; now I had to put him on the list of Hoes-to get-checked
You tryin to be something you ain’t; “wearin’ oxygen masks” cuz your ass tryin to “put on airs”
Claim to be rebel, but he idolizes Bush, prays for the Queens health daily and stays hooked on Blair
Manchester is wack-man, even the team aint happenin’, so of course u No. 1 there, you the only nigga rappin’****
Half your ideas ain’t yours, it’s me u be jackin’; only way to stop this menace is to hand me a patent
Get out of line, and I’ll put you back-in-your-place, my punches ain’t punches, they solely slaps-in-the-face
And don’t blame me for your demise, you asked-to-get-"ate"; the site enjoying your wack rhymes like gift "baskets-of-cake"
How I know he ain’t real? This bitch nigga told-me; slap his ass wit my "cell" cuz we know-that-he-"phony"
Devo-is-my-trophy, read my rhymes on the screen and watch yo eyes go “numb” cuz they know that I’m "cold", B

* I'm talking about a Pitbull and He's not a veteran, he's a veterinarian
**NoS(nitrous oxide) and cig (type of gun)
***He keystyled in a battle, and it was so wack I had to vote for the other guy (he was wack too). Devo got mad at me and said i was dickriding.
****His sig says Manchester's No. 1

uppin for your verse. watch him leave me hangin'

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52764
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=638246#post638246

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=637319#post637319
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52740


shit i dont even know why you chose to battle me fuck it..............


Take your Seats in this class room reshapin ya -ass-wound- this is a real test how the fuck you -challenging-me-
I smash -Lou- (ram) and beat his ass -BOOM!- how the fuck do you even call yourself a decent -emcee-//
The Only thing You ever had was -Verbal-intrusions- You are one load I wish your mother had -swallowed-
Call my rhymes weed cause you is having -herbal-illusions- your breath is like acid making your rhymes -corrode-//
Like surgeries without anesthetic your shit is -pathetic- but i guess you tought you had a decent -chance-
Staying alive? forget it you going to live to -regret-it- got you on lockdown cant hide youR under my -trance-//
Louram dont practice, he's a prik like cactus, -homo-actor- you candy assed, brother raping, jock -strap-Twat-
Packs more fudge than hershey -wrappers- im strapped up and ready to go load the clip pull out my -gat//

TAKE IT BACK!




you lacking -rythm-and-style- skill and tactics your a hood skank a -peadophile-
your about 35 lying about your -age- youve sucked many dick now at -anal-stage-
im on a violent rage ive got a sick -flow- stop talking to kids on msn, your dick needs to -grow-
hey dont you know that im iller than -you- i will fuck you up even you pathetic -crew-
i will be leaving you cut and -scared- for you to beat me it will just be to -hard-
your a retard a fuckin simple -cunt- you said friday cos you was on the -hunt- for a verse to -bite-
shit you actin all black this bitch is -white- hey fuck this im going to finsh it rite -here-
you couldnt be full circle if you was a fucking -sphere-



Throw Two Bitch!!!!!!











nice verse lou uppin votes

nice verse. Ooh, this is gonna be a good battle!! Uppin votes

structure-d
wordplay-l
punches-tie
flow-d
personals-d
winner-d
I go for DEVO_D on this one,I think LOU's lines went on a little too long and lost the flow now and then,both were full of punches but I just prefered D's style

RESPECT WINNER DEVO-D

hey i respect your vote man, but you realize you only have 57 posts rite? u need 75 to vote in this battle, i said so in the rules. so its still 0-0

still uppin

0-0 still uppin for votes yes plimstarr u need at least 75 posts to vote sorry kiddo :)

still uppin

uppin peeps!!!

still uppin

Uppin'

Ohhh this was a nice ass battle...

Flow/Structure: Tie
Punches: Lou
Personals: Lou
Multies: Tie
Metaphors: Devo
Creativity: Devo
Wordplay: Lou
Consistancey: Lou
Overall vote: LouRam

This was a nice battle, but I felt Lou got the punches and the nice personals with his verse, better wordplay as well. Devo your's was a nice verse as well, unfortunate to go against Lou's verse because your's was nice but I thought LouRam took this one, good battle.

Now people, rep me, and go and vote on my battle against Dreamy Text, it's 3 - 2 to me and Lou, you should check out my second battle against Devo.

flow - d
punches - d
persoals - ram
multis - d
metas - ram
vocab - ram
wordplay - d
enjoyment - d
vote - devo

devo got it in my eyes, really decent batle this 1 though loved it, worth the read.

thanx foe the votes still uppin and TCE you cant go round askin for votes man wot is rong witch u, shmh

flow...devo
punches..lou
personals...lou
metas...lou
multies...lou
wordplay...lou
vocab...devo
consistancy...devo
creativity...lou
enjoyment...devo
vote...lou

thanx foe the votes still uppin and TCE you cant go round askin for votes man wot is rong witch u, shmh

I'm not asking people to vote for me, I'm asking people to vote so I can get votes in on my battles, there's a difference. I don't care if they don't vote for me, I just need the votes to get the battle over and done with... So I'm telling people to vote, I'm not telling them to vote for me (which they might, they might not)...

I'm not asking people to vote for me, I'm asking people to vote so I can get votes in on my battles, there's a difference. I don't care if they don't vote for me, I just need the votes to get the battle over and done with... So I'm telling people to vote, I'm not telling them to vote for me (which they might, they might not)...


igght 2-1 still uppin

uppin 1-1. i hate to do it, but I have to turn down Top Dawg's vote, he only has 12 posts. so its still 1-1. keep votin peeps!!!!

*EDIT* he edited it before i posted

LOL I juss posted dat

still uppin

This is how it broke down:
Structure: Neither
Flow: Devo- D
Style: Devo- D
Rhymes: Devo- D
Punches: Devo- D
Similies: Lou Ram
Vote goes to: Devo- D
*I wassnt really impressed with this battle, I hate when cats rhyme like that. And both of you need to work on your structure. But Devo-D came a lil harder with the punches but after you did the second verse it was too basic. My vote stands for Devo.

Uppin for votes, come on guys lets get this battle over with.
We need votes in here

punches- lou
multies- devo
structure- lou
flow- devo
wordplay-lou
methaphors- tie
overall- LOURAM

sum: lou had some decent punches and alright wordplay, setups wasn't nothing to brag about but overall it was a pretty consistence piece.... devo had way too many forced to rhyme bars, it really didn't piece together that well... you had one of the strongest punches but the set up was really really weak... your style switch was creative, however i really don't think this was the time to do it.. it took away from your piece because of how forced the lyrics were but overall a iight drop.... lou edged it out just because of the consistency of this drop

2-2 uppin.

2-2 thanx for all the voters still uppin please

still uppin, we tied 2-2

Flow/Structure: Tie
Punches: Devo
Personals: Lou
Multies: Devo
Metaphors: Devo
Creativity: Devo
Wordplay: Lou
Consistancey: Devo
Overall vote: Devo

Lou.. I felt your punches were kinda weak and had forced multis..

Lou's Best Line IMO

"-Devo D-"‘s rep gets "–D oveD-" on, got "meds" in the arena cuz your mic’ll get "choked" on
Lookin for newbies? you chose-wrong; this nigga just post-bombs for all us real niggas to joke-on

Devos Best Line IMO

Take your Seats in this class room reshapin ya -ass-wound- this is a real test how the fuck you -challenging-me-
I smash -Lou- (ram) and beat his ass -BOOM!- how the fuck do you even call yourself a decent -emcee-//

Close Battle.

well, u cant win them all. LOL. 3-2, Devo's up

3-2 still uppin pps please

still uppin please

still uppin, this battle has been up for votes since Friday. C'MON peoples!!

Uppin

uppin

uppin

uppin

Flow - Devo
Wordplay - LouRam
Structure - LouRam
Multis - LouRam
Vocab - Devo
Punches - LouRam
Personals - LouRam

VOTE = LouRam

I felt LouRam had the overall better verse, although Devo's was very good. It seemed to me Devo was let down by a lot of weak and unoriginal punches. Both had some nice multis, but LouRam's flowed better in my opinion. Devo's first verse structure was excellent, but changed a lot for the 2nd verse. Seemed like 2 seperate verses stuck together to form 1. Had some very strong vocab in the verse though, and a couple of nice punches, especially the acid one, that was quality, But overall, I just felt LouRam had the better all round verse. Nice battle guys

Peace

thanx for voting the vote stands at 3-3 still uppin

3-3 peeps, keep votin

c-mon peoples

still uppin

still uppin

still uppin man. and new rule, Devo. D.A.K.I.N.G. cannot vote on this battle, okay? My crew and him aint cool, so he mite hate vote on me.

that seems fair enough^^^^^^^^^^^ still uppin pps

Punches: Lou
Personals: Lou
Wordplay: Lou
Mets/Similes: Devo
Flow: Devo
Multi's: Tie
Structure: Tie
Consistency: Lou
Complexity: Lou

Vote: LouRam

Nice battle from both of you

4-3 still upin please

uppin

nice shit niggas

aiight still uppin for the win. 4-3 to Lou

uppin for 2 votes here please still uppin

vote!

vote people, cmon

please, man, I'm trying to finish all my battles. VOTE FOR PETE'S SAKE!!!

uppin for votes please ppl

Very nice job both... damn that was tight let me see
Punchlines: LouRam
Skillz: Devo D
Rhyme: LouRam
Deep Meanings: LouRam

My vote goes to.................... LouRam <:-P

Deap meaningz wtf? sorry kiddo read the rules you need more posts to vote
in this battle

Deap meaningz wtf? sorry kiddo read the rules you need more posts to vote
in this battle
Mutha fucka... your shit don't make any sense!!!!

go back to the first page read the rules set out then look at ure post count. now does it make sense?

go back to the first page read the rules set out then look at ure post count. now does it make sense?
Then why did you accept my vote when it was like this?? with that faggot Da-King

hhmmm wtf ^^^are you mentaly retarded? the rule was set out by Louram for the voting Not daking *slaps some common sense into this prick*

now stfu and stop freeposting

hhmmm wtf ^^^are you mentaly retarded? the rule was set out by Louram for the voting Not daking *slaps some common sense into this prick*

now stfu and stop freeposting
WTF you fuckin accept my mutha fuckin vote
so your battle with DaKing is DQ cuz my vote was the last!!!!

Look, Weedbanger, I set up a rule this battle where u have to have 75 posts to vote here. This does not apply everywhere, its just my rule. That's why your vote in that other battle counted, because it wasn't a rule there. So no, your vote doesnt count

Look, Weedbanger, I set up a rule this battle where u have to have 75 posts to vote here. This does not apply everywhere, its just my rule. That's why your vote in that other battle counted, because it wasn't a rule there. So no, your vote doesnt count
Aight I mean I was just tryin to give last vote... nice verse LouRam I'm lookin forward to battle u >:/

Weedbanger stop freeposting in this thread or you will be docked a vote in another one of your battles. Got something to say, use pm please.

Uppin For One Fucking Vote!!!

Uppin

still uppin this bitch

please vote

Both nice verse but gotta go with LouRam

^^ doesnt count...

^^ doesnt count...
:( why?

^^^you have to explain more cleary, bar 4 bar breakdown or by proper votin rules.

flow-louram
punches-louram
personals-devo
creativity-devo
wordplay-louram
vote=louram

this was close but louram topped it.