12 lines or less....first to 4 votes wins 3 in a row tko... due by friday

Look kid…I kill mc’s and text lines without the cap-tion
Writin or scrap-pin…and bi-sex sex the only time you got your strap-on
If second place is the first loser.. then I guess the trophies mine
Cuz in beef I stand my ground and hold my sack like grocery lines
Smoking nines? … nah I smack the fuck outta a veteran cat
Im better than that…you gotta reach up to me like medicine racks
Kids a bitch.. sound like he muslim..so go pray on the carpet
While I drink water til I piss and use your face as a target
I got guns and clubs and snubs ..with ease to maim you
This kids from the suburbs..prolly uses words like please and thank you
So basically…if I lose ill hang my mic.. and detach the cord
Allah needs some help..guess he better ask the lord

all that ANGER in ya verse, yet it was fuckin dull kid
havent seen that Raging Bull movie, but I just saw Ragin’ Bull, Shit!
I spit that hot fire.. And won’t leave.. till you melt
I'll fuck car up so bad... a mechanic wont be able to help
Your punches are horrible, this ain't a fair thread
but at least u have 4 straight lines.. cuz of your square head
Ur a newb that noone knows?, sure ur perfect for fame
the minds a powerful thing to waste, & ur verse worships the brain.
And Car your too gay, I’ve just about had it kid.
my dick?, lady’s jacket; Ur just wearing a lady’s jacket, dick
You stay nervous , watch this brother die tense
while I handle car so well…. they’ll give me another license

damn...i'm tired now, but i will come back and vote on this. nice battle guys, didn't think Cartel would be that good.

meta: allah
punches: Cartel
Flow: Allah
Creativity:Cartel
Enjoyment: Allah

I Give this to allah, just, i enjoyed his verse more is all. both had good punches but allah's hit harder.

vote: Allah

ok i couldn't edit my post, so i just put it here:


Cartel
Look kid…I kill mc’s and text lines without the cap-tion
Writin or scrap-pin…and bi-sex sex the only time you got your strap-on
^lol, good punch.

If second place is the first loser.. then I guess the trophies mine
Cuz in beef I stand my ground and hold my sack like grocery lines
^good punchline, but try to stay on subject which is your opponent

Smoking nines? … nah I smack the fuck outta a veteran cat
Im better than that…you gotta reach up to me like medicine racks
^ok, good meta+punch...but once again like i said on the last one.

Kids a bitch.. sound like he muslim..so go pray on the carpet
While I drink water til I piss and use your face as a target
^eer, ok.

I got guns and clubs and snubs ..with ease to maim you
This kids from the suburbs..prolly uses words like please and thank you
^lol, ok punch.

So basically…if I lose ill hang my mic.. and detach the cord
Allah needs some help..guess he better ask the lord
^uum, your finish should've been stronger.

Allah

all that ANGER in ya verse, yet it was fuckin dull kid
havent seen that Raging Bull movie, but I just saw Ragin’ Bull, Shit!
^omg, this had me rolling in laughter..

I spit that hot fire.. And won’t leave.. till you melt
I'll fuck car up so bad... a mechanic wont be able to help
^good punch.

Your punches are horrible, this ain't a fair thread
but at least u have 4 straight lines.. cuz of your square head
^lol, so far one of the best punches i've seen here.

Ur a newb that noone knows?, sure ur perfect for fame
the minds a powerful thing to waste, & ur verse worships the brain.
^suddle wordplay, it wasn't bad...but it could go unnoticed.

And Car your too gay, I’ve just about had it kid.
my dick?, lady’s jacket; Ur just wearing a lady’s jacket, dick
^lol, funny..ok wordplay here.

You stay nervous , watch this brother die tense
while I handle car so well…. they’ll give me another license
^lol, good finish.


Allahs verse was very humorous, but his wordplay with punches combined were pretty impressive. Cartel had better metaphors and multis, maybe some wordplay and more punches that showed direct connection could've won him this battle, but it was pretty close.

Vote=Allah

Look kid…I kill mc’s and text lines without the cap-tion
Writin or scrap-pin…and bi-sex sex the only time you got your strap-on
starp-on lines are played but this was decent

If second place is the first loser.. then I guess the trophies mine
Cuz in beef I stand my ground and hold my sack like grocery lines
^ wasn't a direct punch at Allah.but meh

I got guns and clubs and snubs ..with ease to maim you
This kids from the suburbs..prolly uses words like please and thank you
^ this was good.

vs

all that ANGER in ya verse, yet it was fuckin dull kid
havent seen that Raging Bull movie, but I just saw Ragin’ Bull, Shit!
^ pretty good.

Your punches are horrible, this ain't a fair thread
but at least u have 4 straight lines.. cuz of your square head
^ decent.Could've been worded better.

The other lines by Allah were to basic or played concepts.

Good bout. But my vote goes to Cartel.

^ Seconding that. . .


I don't have time for a break down. . . I'll say this though:

Cartel had a much harder approach in his verse, and he definately had better delivery and punchlines... There was nothing wrong with his flow at all.. If any of you read his drops, that is HIS style of writing, which means the flow to him may not be the same to us, which is something you'd have to consider... I enjoyed a lot of his similies, in quote:

"Im better than that…you gotta reach up to me like medicine racks"
"Cuz in beef I stand my ground and hold my sack like grocery lines"

^^ Those had good standing with me.... Besides that, he had the more decent quality in his verse out of the two...





Allah-

You verse wasn't bad... However, I don't feel as though it had any type of edge to it that would compete with the content of Cartels verse... It is evident that a lot of your punchlines had very played concepts, also being not very hard hitting punches.. You came off kind of to plain for this battle...


Both of you lacked decent word play, multies and personals... That was a downfall on both emcee's behalf... The flow was pretty even to me... I feel as though Cartel had more effective content, and his lines actually made me chuckle a bit... My over all enjoyment is directed toward Cartels verse also...



Vote- Cartel



You both could have came a lot harder though...

Meta: Allah
Punches: Cartel
Flow: Cartel
Creativity: Cartel
Enjoyment: Tie

Cartel:

"If Second Place Is The First Loser.. Then I Guess The Trophies Mine
Cuz In Beef I Stand My Ground And Hold My Sack Like Grocery Lines
Smoking Nines? … Nah I Smack The Fuck Outta A Veteran Cat
I'm Better Than That… You Gotta Reach Up To Me Like Medicine Racks"

Flowed Well, Liked The Similies...

Allah:

"I Spit That Hot Fire... And Won't Leave.. Till You Melt
I'll Fuck Car Up So Bad... A Mechanic Won't Be Able To Help"

... Creative, Just Prefered It...

Vote: Cartel

3-2 cartel

meta: allah
punches: Cartel
Flow: Cartel
Creativity:Cartel
Enjoyment: Allah

Cartel cause he got 3 out of 5 categories

cartel 4-2... i took it

haha, i knew u would. That's Full Circle for ya'll

lmao @ the votes..

oh well..

guess I wont be battling here. pz.

if you think you won...you shouldnt be battling here...pz

u need 1 mor vote cartel i think 2 take dis, if not den i duno.

but my vote goes 2 allah cuz he had a beta verse wit harder punches.

yeah thats nice hoip hop girl...nice name...but uhh i took it with four votes...and try to explain a little better kid

if you think you won...you shouldnt be battling here...pz
if you think you won you shouldnt be battling anywhere else but here.

you whack ass ez board faggot.

that verse you posted was garbage.

yo allah quite haten cuz, even with hiphopgurls vote he still got you.

allah you barely beat crimcartel....elevate bitch