5-8 Bars
Post 2 Links
No biting or D/r Votes
Blind drop
Post verses sometime after Both check ins

Check!!

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=637570#post637570

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=561292#post561292

check!..............

sorry for the delay, at work
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you a young dude tryna pick little tendencies/
i got a 'penny for your thoughts' to guarantee you'll remember me/

so lets do it, i'll be the dude, you be the bitch/
lyrically gettin fucked worse than sittin on a stick/

check my resume dog, you're New, and I been a VET/
i got 'connects' for that coke that move swift like the internet/

not from harlem, so i ain't down with the dip' dip'/
but i'll cop a clip clip and REST in your lip lip/

I'm out young gunna so cease with that shit talk/
I'll break your Legs in Blue jeans, so you Can Really do the crip walk/

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=637906&posted=1#post637906
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?p=637910#post637910

verse droppin soon

ima take it easy.... ;)

yo
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Behind my bars it will be hard for you too pursue survival like crime lifers
Because spitting against me? “Your dropping to die” like suicidal skydivers!!
Plus my rhymes nicest and I hit domes, and then pierce you in your rib bones
The only way this kid known for hits, would be a stunt double for “Jim Jones”!!
CC ripped owned, You 23 and still a nobody you should’a choked when born
Plus only time people are “satisfied off you” is when you’re “posting porn (http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=51565)”!!
Told you I was dope and warned, now this look-a-like of Jim Jones is ashes kid
trust me ill have you “dropping to loose” faster than a “overdose of laxitives”!! *
I read your verse and laughed at it, faggot bitch, ill kill you in a 1-2 Bar
And you dont need to defend yourself cause no body knows who u are!!

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RIP

Any explanation or lines you dont get just asked and not explained votes will count.

Explanations

*Loose as in Loo's/Toilets Get it? uhg.. if you dont you a dumb motherfucker..

abu one of youre links doesnt count you voted on a finished battle go vote on a battle that needs votes

ok.. good lookin out.. can u vote on this battle?...

flow- abu
creativity-abu
punches-abu

abu took it...better come harder than this against me tho

Flow- Abu
Creativity-Abu
Punches-Abu
Consistency-Abu

Vote - Abu. Crimcartel, you need to get more creative with that shit.

Punches-abu
Wordplay-abu
Flow-abu
Consistency-abu

Just Didnt Seem Like Crim Was Really Givin It All He Could
Winner-abu

Punches-abu
Wordplay-abu
Flow-abu
Consistency-abu

Just Didnt Seem Like Crim Was Really Givin It All He Could
Winner-abu
you're right... that was my bad, kinda feeling how this thing goes. it was my first battle......you live and you learn

CrimCartel

you a young dude tryna pick little tendencies/
i got a 'penny for your thoughts' to guarantee you'll remember me/
^Was'nt a bad opener could've came harder though.^

so lets do it, i'll be the dude, you be the bitch/
lyrically gettin fucked worse than sittin on a stick/
^Pretty good Punch, But the setup was lame. lucky there wasnt 2 rounds a good vet would flip this easy.^

check my resume dog, you're New, and I been a VET/
i got 'connects' for that coke that move swift like the internet/
^Dont Brag, This is a battle Go after your opponent^

not from harlem, so i ain't down with the dip' dip'/
but i'll cop a clip clip and REST in your lip lip/
^OK, Basic rhymes, I see it as a filler,^

I'm out young gunna so cease with that shit talk/
I'll break your Legs in Blue jeans, so you Can Really do the crip walk/
^Best Punch in your whole verse, Nice closer.^
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Abu Bakr

Behind my bars it will be hard for you too pursue survival like crime lifers
Because spitting against me? “Your dropping to die” like suicidal skydivers!!
^Nice opener, Very Nice^

Plus my rhymes nicest and I hit domes, and then pierce you in your rib bones
The only way this kid known for hits, would be a stunt double for “Jim Jones”!!
^Heh Nice punch, But a played out jab.^

CC ripped owned, You 23 and still a nobody you should’a choked when born
Plus only time people are “satisfied off you” is when you’re “posting porn”!!
^Another funny one, Good consistency^

Told you I was dope and warned, now this look-a-like of Jim Jones is ashes kid
trust me ill have you “dropping to loose” faster than a “overdose of laxitives”!! *
^Not really the best metaphore to use, I wasnt feeling it didnt flow right^

I read your verse and laughed at it, faggot bitch, ill kill you in a 1-2 Bar
And you dont need to defend yourself cause no body knows who u
are!!
^This punch was hard enough to finish the job.


Good battle both of you, Entertained me, Good consistency Abu Bakr. Crim Understand this was your first battle, You coulda fooled me. Practice makes perfect playa Stick to it.

Vote-Abu Bakr

you a young dude tryna pick little tendencies/
i got a 'penny for your thoughts' to guarantee you'll remember me/

makes no sense....just rhyming worlds

i woulda worded it like...
crims a little fuck tryna nit pick ...you shit stick
ill beat your ass with ten bricks..til you literally spit shit
claim i bite your rhymes..kid i dont recycle garbage
no word play ..pure gay..makes no sense like your rhymes retarted
faggot ass nigga come correct ..weak ass needs a facelift
face it..in the street id peel your wig back like cancer patients

Haha!! hey, I would tell Cartel to battle Crim to settle this BeeF, but . . . (chuckles) you already know how that will end. CRIM U WILL GET MURDERED, AND IF U BEEFIN' WIT MY DAWG, U BEEFIN' WIT ME. CARTEL WILL MURK U.

Thanx for votes.. and was crimcartels first battle.

puches-ABU
personal-ABU
multies-ABU
creativity-ABU
enjoyment-ABU
vote-ABU


ABU clearly won this his verse made me laugh this was a good verse
cartel to say its ure firsy battle good drop but u need to elevate kiddo
props to both emcees

I'm out young gunna so cease with that shit talk/
I'll break your Legs in Blue jeans, so you Can Really do the crip walk/

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Behind my bars it will be hard for you too pursue survival like crime lifers
Because spitting against me? “Your dropping to die” like suicidal skydivers!!
CC ripped owned, You 23 and still a nobody you should’a choked when born
Plus only time people are “satisfied off you” is when you’re “posting porn”!!


v/Abu for consistency.

props to those who gave good feedback. thanks for the suggestions. imma flow harder next time. I won't write my verse so quick